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Reviews for Harry Potter and The Beloved Incubus (BP4)

By : slashpervert
  • From NightLo on May 27, 2007
    So...a great turn instead, and a well preserved secret - that's why Snape hate Harry so much - at the very start he already knew he would be Draco's husband and carry his child(ren)...this leads to another one - how could they be so sure about the sex of the child(ren)? And since Harry is getting fat too fast, I also have another doubt of...more than one child at the same time. Though this is male pregnancy, Harry is thin and slim...but if the bump is showing at 3 months, my relative experience told me that would be multiple births! Wow, now they have one more difficulty - they need to think of more names for them!

    Actually Snape did show in these chapters, and we knew how sorry and vulnerable he was...and still is...perhaps we can know more about him, esp. Harry, after that special night...

    After letting Snape's issue go, there would be only very little that count as Harry's weakness - though he needs to work harder on non-verbal and wandless magic, better make Draco hurry, or else when pregnancy becomes too late, it would be difficult to do it safely. BTW, would they consider about flooing/portkeying instead of apparating from now on, how would Mrs. Weasley say about that? And...how's about magic depletion theory? If really, ever really, Harry is carrying double babies...how would this affect his magic?
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  • From NightLo on May 27, 2007
    Well...finally able to get out of work some free time before going back...(up to Ch.15)

    But I am happy that finally Harry is getting stronger and stronger, both mentally and spiritually (maybe also psychologically...but I have my doubts - see below), his mind is set, his determination is fixed, he just...grows up. Though he is getting sick because of the pregnancy (so physically and psychologically I woult not say he becomes stronger), but he is taking all well, and prepared well (also with the help of Draco and Hermione, now also Mrs. Weasley)...he is really no longer a boy, but a pregnant young man and a future promised father...even a very promised warrior and hero.

    It is also good to see that they are still sexually active during pregnancy, though I knew nothing about it, but I must say, being a Chinese and grown up with traditional Chinese beliefs (not being greatly affected though), sex is not preferred/greatly avoided since the start of it, and usually affair starts this time...so Harry did not really worry about that with Draco...

    I am just wondering where are Snape and Narcissa this time, you know, with such great news, family is needed indeed!
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  • From thrnbrooke on May 27, 2007
    I know the drama between Severus and Harry must be hard on Draco but Severus is just as bad as Harry and has been tormenting him since day one! I soooo need chapter 18!
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  • From graballz on May 27, 2007
    Chapter 17--YES YOU UPDATED! WOO HOO!! Wait, WHAT?????? WHAT THE FUCK IS SNAPE TALKING ABOUT????? Harry and Draco are....going back in time....to watch James and Lily be killed? While Harry is PREGNANT????? He can't even stand to be around bologna; isn't that going to cause a miscarriage or something??????

    Fuck, I hope he's okay after this!!!! *please please please* Oh god! Draco just snapped at him! *whimper* AUGH! FUCK!! WHAT?? GAH! My brain short circuited! Okay, so to Gringott's first...Godric's Hollow...and then...St. Mungo's to prevent Harry from killing himself or having complications with the baby?

    Dumbledore was there that night? Snape was there that night? Draco and Harry were there that night? Fucking hell...well, and Peter Pettigrew too, right? I can't wait to find out what happens!

    This is an AMAZING story you've woven! THANK YOU!
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  • From graballz on May 27, 2007
    Chapter 16--WHAT??? WHAT?!?!?!?!! WHAT THE HELL IS SNAPE TALKING ABOUT?????? OMG OMG OMG IS HARRY GOING TO KILL HIM??? FUCK FUCK FUCK HOW COULD YOU LEAVE IT LIKE THAT???? PLEASE, UPDATE SOON!!!! WHAT IS SNAPE TALKING ABOUT????

    Poor Harry...pregnant and moody...good boy, Draco, for taking care of him and not yelling at him and all. YAY for my Draco and his pregnant Harry!

    I LOVE this story; please update soon!
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  • From thrnbrooke on May 26, 2007
    Story time! He met Harry at Hogsmeade? I soooo need more! Chapter 17 please!
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  • From on May 26, 2007
    Ah! I need to hear the rest of what Snape saayysss -Whimpers for a few more chapters soon-
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  • From LupinsLady on May 26, 2007
    I am soooo behind on my reading. I just finished chapter 5. I want to go shopping at Fred and George's shop. I need some of that massage lotion. This is proving to be just as brilliant as your other novels.
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  • From graballz on May 26, 2007
    PS I really like Draco between Harry's legs, too! That's the ONLY place for him to be, unless it's to be spread eagle with Harry between HIS legs!
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  • From graballz on May 26, 2007
    Wow, so many chapters at once!!! Woo hoo!!! godDAMN, Draco bound while they played "Potter" and "Malfoy" was SO FUCKING HOTTT!!!! And Harry SLAPPED him??? As long as Draco liked it...that was fucking amazing!

    *squeak* YAY for rubbing off, by the way!!! hehehe

    *gasp* Pictures???? SO FUCKING HOT!!!! YES, DRACO GETS PICTURES!!!!! Oh oh OH! Is Harry gonna speak Parsel???

    (PS Fred and George were freakin hysterical!!!!! That whole exchange was hilarious! I'd say "poor Draco" except...not)

    HE IS HE IS HE IS GONNA USE PARSELTONGUE!!! THAT'S SO FUCKING HOT!!!!!

    hahaahahahahahha Yay, Molly knows and she can help!!! Yippee! Ohhhhhhh, that scene after they told her was HOTTT!!!! SO GOOD!
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  • From thrnbrooke on May 26, 2007
    I soooo need chapter 16! I just died laughing over Molly's reaction! Poor Harry is suffering from morning sickness! Argh! I hated it! Had it all through both my pregnancies and it shouldn't have been called morning sickness but 24/sickness. My sister had it sooooo lucky!
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  • From graballz on May 25, 2007
    GOD I love this story! It was really sad about Hermione's dad, and Harry did SO much more for Aunt Petunia than I think she deserved...but I'm so excited about all of the sex scenes and all! So FUCKING HAWTTTT!!!!!

    I can understand that you're updating rather quickly, but I don't have as much time as I used to, so I'm still trying to read and catch up and all...but I will try to review as often as I can to let you know how much I still love this story!

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  • From NightLo on May 24, 2007
    I would like to ask...why will Harry say something like never hurting Draco? And would Draco return the flavour? Coming back for revenge of that comment?
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  • From NightLo on May 24, 2007
    So...pregnancy really set in, and it got worse with so many funerals...and I hate the death of Seamus and colin Jr. - those two are fun, esp. Seamus, always making a good scene for Draco...I just hope...if it is possible for them to communicate with others again, like another interview, more support can be gathered and collected against Voldi. BTW, how's about talk with the ministry?

    No wonder they need something so exciting after all this - and good spirits are also important for pregnant people, you know, some crazy stuff about child education, hormones or others, but I wonder would Draco know these muggle stuff...

    Just waiting for Hermione, Mr. Weasley and Draco's active show, as sober attitude is not suitable for them.
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  • From Angelsfear on May 23, 2007
    Ohhhh I LOVE snarky Draco when he's tied up! *shivers* sooooo incredibly hot! And I absolutely love when they explain random moments from school and talk about them! So fantastic! I can't even make proper sentences X_X
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