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Reviews for Harry Potter and The Beloved Incubus (BP4)

By : slashpervert
  • From ANON - Fate-Angel on September 28, 2008
    Another amazing story. You're such a great writer.
    I can't wait to read the next one. Literaly...as in that's what I'll be doing in just a few seconds!

    Fate-Angel
    =^-^=
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 17, 2008
    It's "merci" not "merce"
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  • From sweetciel on June 26, 2008
    The baby is just so precious!!!! I LOVE this fic!!! If it were a published series, i would buy them alllllll! Every last copy of each one ^_^
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  • From X5927alpha on February 22, 2008
    I've been working my way through this series, and so far I have to admit I like it a whole lot. Never read a story that made so much sense or made me want to come back to any computer just to get a fix with a chapter or two. I stay up reading these stories, chapter by chapter, until the site goes down at about 1:08a.m. to update the stories put on that day.

    You two are GREAT at this shit.
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  • From Hellagoddess on October 31, 2007
    Can I just say, first off, that I had always intended to review each book as I completed it, but in the desperate, turbulent rush to start on the next one it always seemed to fall by the way side. So here I am, four books in, finally showing my admiring head.

    May I also state, that for the record, I am a somewhat large Harry Potter fan and had not been able to afford the recent, series-finishing book, as I am a student and am not given to the somewhat large sum of money it would have taken. However, the book was gifted to me by a friend recently, of which I am eternally grateful. Now, here's the part I have been rambling along to say.

    I am halfway through Deathly Hallows, and despite the incredible urge and relief I am experiencing from finally actually reading the book, I have ceased. In all actuality, I would rather read this.

    Personally I think that is an incredible compliment to yourselves and you should treat it as such. Although I have the greatest respect and admiration for Jo Rowling, I am gaining more feeling from your series than hers.

    And it's not even the relationship between these two young men, although I have to admit, the deft and deliberate way you have handled these two volatile personalities is stunning. No it's more than that. The tale is just as engaging as the original, the storyline and plot well thought out to the point that I even found myself becoming slightly confused when I was reading DH and something didn't match up right. I shortly remembered that the version of events I had been ravenously reading for the past 4-5 days was in fact a fan interpretation and not cannon (but oh how we all wish it were!).

    Everything about this story is incredible. And a giant nod in your direction for the varying sex scenes. It's a huge feat for each one to be so different and separate yet barely a chapter goes by without one in some form or manner. I realize how easy it would be to skip over them sometimes, but each is believable and has it's own...life and feeling.

    The location and destruction of the horcruxes so far has been stupendous. In all honesty, I feel that the attainment and destruction of the cannon-story horcruxes were no where near as exciting and well-thought-out, and I almost wish sometimes that THIS was the cannon story or that you had somehow been able to get these plot ideas to her before she finished! Haha!

    So far it's been brilliant and I am eagerly beginning the next book.

    (I promise that I will review at the finale!)
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  • From mystiedaze on June 27, 2007
    it took me two days but i read it all. i love your stories. and i cant wait to start the next one.


    keep up the excellent work.
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  • From thrnbrooke on June 13, 2007
    Gotta go read the first chapter on LJ!
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  • From cynaga on June 09, 2007
    Does the series really have to end soon? *sniffle*
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  • From NightLo on June 09, 2007
    Well...just loved this ending too much, too family, too satiated and happy! Now I understood why Draco suddenly acted like that - the scene maybe turn him on, but most importantly, he was safe, with his family and with a somewhat straighter and brighter future. A perfect and happy future - other things like research on complementary opposites, voldermort, attacks and killing can be waited - now it must TRULY be time for the three!

    And I am just too astounded with Valen's progress - with one month or more he can turn his head, and now he knew where his other daddy is, and REACH for it - the two better pay close attention or else...troubles will always be around!
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  • From swimelf08 on June 08, 2007
    Fabulous ending to the book!! I congratulate you on quite the accomplishment. I hope the proofing goes well for the next book and it come out very soon! Again, very well done. *sends love and encouragement your way*
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  • From cynaga on June 07, 2007
    Wow, wow and wow~! That knife/horcrux scene - ROCKIN!
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  • From NightLo on June 07, 2007
    Good work - never thought of using a dead death eater, as an inferius to protect its own horcrux. Now I must admit all wicked evils are indeed genius - just a clear act of pure brilliance!

    I like the idea that another baby is on the way - you know - after the masscare of Christmas, it seemed that everything was dead and grey, however, with babies, with new life...there is always new hope, just wishing that such happiness can spread out and cheer up everyone!

    Actually I just wondered...why did they not observe and check before going every time? It would be more safe if they could just...(1) go for a check up; (2) plan then (3) act. However, I must admit, maybe there was only one chance, or else voldermort must know...however, after losing Draco so many times, and with such danger ahead...have Harry not had other ideas before this one?

    Could Valen and Harry enough to bring Draco back? How about Sirius? Can he....somehow...show Draco's way back if ever he shows up...there - you knew - he was murdered!
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  • From thrnbrooke on June 07, 2007
    Soooo many close calls! I sooo need chapter 39!
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  • From kariasakura on June 06, 2007
    Hi it
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  • From on June 06, 2007
    "Fucking owned."

    I lol'd.
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