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Reviews for In Between

By : YamiBakura
  • From mystiedaze on May 20, 2007
    this is a wonderful start. you know after all harry had been seen and done one would wonder how he would survive. he could try to live with it all which might have driven him mad or he could have done it your way. i like your way. i am glad you have decided to finish your stories. there is nothing worse than getting into a story and then being left hanging.

    i cant wait to see how harry evans make a go of his life.
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  • From Prophecies on May 20, 2007
    For the person who reviewed above: I believe it's because Harry's own wand and Voldemorts both have a phoenix feather donated by Fawkes. When two wands, both containing the same identical core of the same creature, clash with magic it automatically creates Priori Incantatem. Remember Goblet of Fire? The graveyard and the ghosts of Lily and James helping Harry?

    Well, it would be safe to say that in an end duel the risk of wand clashing is prominent. I think Harry didn't want to risk that and used a different wand. Left his old wand at home, which is the one "Harry Evans" found.

    I think anyway, correct me if i'm wrong!


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  • From ANON - Briar on May 20, 2007
    Quick question! If Harry killed Voldy and then obliviated himself how did his wand end up in the closet? He didn't leave a note that said "Oh and put my wand in my closet before you dump me like a dead deer by the side of the road." Kind of doesn't work. But I really liked it. Sometimes I wish I could Obliviate myself and leave myself lots of money. If only. So yeah fix that or explain it and I'll be happy as a pig eating slop. lol

    ~Briar~
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  • From Myraa on May 20, 2007
    This one read "Harry Evans" also, and had a picture of an attractive bloke with green eyes and black hair. - Lol! Vain, Harry, vain without even realizing it! Hehehe xD. I liked this chapter, wonder who was the lady he asked for directions? (She seemed to know about Harry losing his memory). And the old Harry said he couldn't use his wand? That's strange, wonder why. o.o Anyways thanks for the update yah! ^_^
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  • From on May 19, 2007
    Very interesting. You've caught my attention so far. Its good that Harry knows the basic stuff. What he did to himself is kind of scary thought. I wonder is the reason he did that because a lot of his friends died before & during the battle? You don't have to answer that if you're going to in the future. thanks for the story.
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  • From thrnbrooke on May 19, 2007
    Sounds like a wonderful house! I sooo can't wait for chapter 3! Where did Draco go? Is Ron and Hermione really dead?
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  • From MrGalion on May 19, 2007
    this gives Suicide a whole new approach.
    I'm a m intrigued(sp?).
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  • From shey on May 19, 2007
    Very nice, looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From LupinsLady on May 19, 2007
    This is getting even better. I love the little things about the house in Godric's Hollow, like the stag surrounded by lillies. The description of the house sounds beautiful and all the notes left behind are intriguing. Can't wait to read more.
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  • From Prophecies on May 19, 2007
    Ooo very interesting. I bet Draco will not be able to stay away to see what will become of this new Harry.
    Defenitely want to read more of this.
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  • From LupinsLady on May 19, 2007
    Really catchy beginning...I can't wait to see where this fic goes. Update soon.
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  • From thrnbrooke on May 19, 2007
    Wow! I soooo can't wait for chapter 2!
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  • From Myraa on May 19, 2007
    I thought it was a nice one! I felt really sad at the part when Harry was really crying and sobbing. Did he obliviate a part of him, or everything in him? What made him do that, and why was he so sad? Please let us know! Well, until then, take care!
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  • From Selera on May 19, 2007
    This is looking cood.. but what did Harry obliviate from himself...
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