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Reviews for Unexpected

By : ryzmah
  • From bean1498 on March 12, 2008
    Ha! I loved that! Very funny and a very surprising twist. :) Thank you for sharing.
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  • From ANON - kazfeist on September 01, 2007
    I think this story would be GREAT expanded! I don't think I've seen one where Hermione's pregnancy is one of 'advanced maternal age'. Though in the wizarding world, she's probably the equivalent of a 35-year-old. What a neat idea! :D
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  • From ANON - Mari on July 22, 2007
    hahahahah that was soo cool haha i loved it ^_^
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  • From seventh on May 25, 2007
    LOL, that was awesome.
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  • From TheEnchantedQuill on May 24, 2007
    Wow, having a baby at sixty? That is insane, but very creative. I like the way the story was written and you made it, thought short, very interesting. Hope to read some more of your writing soon.

    -Leslie
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  • From ANON - sapphire1 on May 24, 2007
    WOW! When I first starting read I thought it was the usually she gets knocked up oh! how do I tell him story. This had me in stitches I laughed so hard I choked. I have got to stop snacking & drinking when I read because sometimes I get something so wonderfully unexpected it almost kills me. Great story. You have got 2 do aleast another chap I want 2 know how is Draco & family going 2 react.
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  • From ANON - Kim on May 23, 2007
    Sooo cute! You should consider continuing. I could just imagine Draco's reaction : )
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  • From skydancer on May 23, 2007
    HHHAAAAAAHHAHAHAAHAAAAAAA!!!*COUGH* HAAAA!!!
    oh that last line was FAB!!!!!!!
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  • From kazfeist on May 23, 2007
    Oh, this was charming! I can see a few more chapters, with them telling their children, and the birth....you should consider continuing it, hon! :D
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  • From nonentity on May 23, 2007
    very sneaky! First you mention Pomfrey, so we think she's in school. Then they're enjoying their time as a couple together, so we think they just got together. Then we find out they're married, and then you spring the grandma thing on us.
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  • From mmfcfa on May 23, 2007
    I had to re-read it a couple of times before it finally sunk in. Great story idea. Totally unexpected! Appropriate title. I'm torn in whether to suggest that you continue it as a fully developed story or let it stay as it is 'cause it is wonderful as it is.
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