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Reviews for Love of Green

By : DravanaMyst
  • From ANON - kanigirl on December 29, 2010
    Hello so your looking for a beta. Just what kind are you looking for, if I may ask. I have been told I am not bad at paragraph struchuring, thou I am a new one at it. I looked at this story you are writing and like it. So if you want I can give it a test try your choice.
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  • From Ewe on July 10, 2008
    I was wondering did this story get adopped?

    Or is there at least other stories like this some where?

    I would really like to know this. This is a great story and great idea. But if it were up to me i would add just one more slytherin .... Severus Snape.

    Ewe
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  • From windbell on May 24, 2008
    I would love to continue this fiction but I'm busy right now so if I post it I will sent the URL to you. Do you mind if I re-write the first chapter?

    Oh, bu the way my e-mail is furin_a@hotmail.com
    you can send your answer or anything anytime.
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  • From alma on May 24, 2008
    good chapter.
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  • From alma on May 24, 2008
    sounds good.
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  • From POOHBEAR74 on September 20, 2007
    I like so far,I can't wait for more.
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  • From toads70 on August 04, 2007
    seems pretty good so far, update soon!
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  • From satine1313 on June 08, 2007
    I really love this story. Harry and dom Slytherins - PERFECT. I hope you updete soon. Cant't wait for another chapter. Hope Sev will show up soon.
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  • From PharaohsBeloved on June 04, 2007
    omg, i really wish i could get into this story, but the writing is horrible! i'm sorry. pllllease get a beta, use more paragraphs, develop your characters, develop a plot. i hope to see this reposted at some point as a presentable story =/ i'm truly sorry i'm not able to get into it. goodluck.

    ps: i don't mean this to be a flame, so please don't take it as one. just offering some constructive criticism.
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  • From RoxanneTheWeretiger on May 31, 2007
    This is an interesting story.... I really like it.... Ok you admitted you need a beta and I hate to say it but you do... If you want I would like to offer my services... Needing a beta isn't a bad thing... In fact I think everyone should have a beta because when you write something you tend to skip over the mistakes because you know what they are supposed to be and you mind ignores what they actually are....That being said.... I can't wait for you're next update.
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  • From LoraKat on May 29, 2007
    I love this story. Please update soon. I can't wait for the sex scenes.
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  • From amyordinary on May 29, 2007
    I love this story so far! I love the pairing, I love the length of the chapter, and I can't wait for more!
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  • From sanda on May 27, 2007
    good story
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