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Reviews for Late Night Encounter

By : Clare1984
  • From JaceDamian23 on May 29, 2008
    what an assshole ron was. bastard

    but harry didnt have to kill him, he could've stupified him.

    good story

    hot
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on April 18, 2008
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on December 24, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From luvhp on December 18, 2007
    AHHHHHHHHH, I didn't even know you continued, the last chapter I read was them parting for patrol! Holy Cow! Merlin's Beard, you killed off Ron? I mean, it's not like he didn't deserve it, but hey, get in here and finish this story. Hermione came back to the head room and they seriously need to 'comfort' each other :)

    If I don't talk to you before next week, hope you have a Wonderful, Merry Christmas!
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  • From amyfeddy on December 12, 2007
    Wow that was unexpected, good but unexpected
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  • From ximaginationx on October 01, 2007
    I thought this fic was really cute, sweet and extremely fluffy and loveable and, lets face it, everybody needs some fluff in their life once a while!
    Fiaxxx
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  • From ANON - lixxle on June 29, 2007
    I have a couple points of criticism:
    -The idea for the story isn't new, I feel like I'm rereading unimaginative HGDM story on here. That said, it doesn't mean it can't be original and interesting, but as it is, your story feels like it's lacking something.

    -I'm all for smut scenes. I love smut scenes, yours are very well written. But beyond that, everything else is too rushed. It makes your writign style seem immature, and makes me question your age. If you want to write smut, go for it. Make it a one-shot PWP. There are plenty of amazing one shots. I think you're writing style would be better suited for something like that, as opposed to a multi-chapter story. That said, if you were to put lots of one-shots as chapters of one "story," where the character were always in the same relationships (ex: Draco is always in love with Hermione, Hermione always made the first move...) So that it felt like the same story continuing, but focused on the smut, that would be okay. But as it is now, you're rushing everything. You're descriptions tell, not show.

    -(Always show not tell.) Ex: Hermione blushed. VS Hermione felt her cheeks grow hot. Which is more interesting? The second one (even though that's a bit cliche too).

    Anyway, those are my criticisms. I hope you keep writing, because, to be honest, as I writer I have the same problems I think you do. I'm too hurried to get to the parts that I'm excited for, and it shows in the poorer quality of writing.

    Good luck and keep writing!
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on June 24, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From catysmom1028 on June 24, 2007
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From JMFELTON on June 23, 2007
    Can't wait for your next chapter, I saw nothing wrong with your paragraph's, I thought it was beautifully written. I so love Draco and Hermione as a couple and hope that if they do fall out it won't last long !! keep it up please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From azngurl06 on June 23, 2007
    oh my god!!!! please continue the story!!!! oh gosh!!!! keep it up its amazing!!!!
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  • From PsychoKitty on June 16, 2007
    Ron is so stupid! I hope Hermione kicks his ass for this! Can't wait for the next chapter please don't leave me hanging! Update soon! Please!
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  • From chelleybelle on June 15, 2007
    the chapter was great! Good job! Also the spacing is so much better. it made it alot easier to read! hurry and update, i love it!
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  • From JaynaM on June 15, 2007
    Noooo!! more soon

    Jayna
    xxx
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  • From mosaic on June 15, 2007
    crucio, oh no! poor ron, thats azkaban for him. i hope hermione can get there soon. keep up the story, i'm needing more.
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