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By : Katha
  • From sheherazade on July 18, 2007
    Ooh, chocolate cake all over the robes...I'm not surprised Snape didn't see the funny side. Does he ever?

    Poor Marie; she's such a mess. I hope she gets some self-esteem from somewhere (Lupin?) and stands up to the predatory Potions Master.

    Yay, no more exams! More chapters!
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  • From sheherazade on July 06, 2007
    Yes, well done, Remus! It had to be said.

    And now it looks like Snape is going to clean up his act.

    Hope the university stress isn't too, uh, stressful. Update soon xx.
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  • From Happyappy on July 05, 2007
    Severus is a bastard! He really needs to get over himself. Taking out his insecurities on a poor inocent woman. She really needs to listen to Remus, and stand up for herself. I hope when Snape wakes up he realises what damage he has done he feels really really guilty! He is lucky her powers didn't kick in and do something nasty to him. Loking forward to reading what happens next. Hope Snape has a really bad hangover when he wakes up!

    Sansa
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  • From sheherazade on July 02, 2007
    Way to drive your lover away, Severus! He's an idiot isn't he? Maybe they should consider couples counselling LOL.

    I hope Lupin is going to stand up for Marie...and that she can escape from her horrible past and get emotionally healthy.

    Well, the plot is thickening nicely...what's going to happen next???
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  • From Emmylovedraco on July 01, 2007
    Please update soon

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  • From sheherazade on June 28, 2007
    Short but sweet, with a nice lemon at the start and then moving on to how they are going to cope with life at Hogwarts together. I always see Snape as the jealous, possessive type too; he would *hate* his woman having a friendly relationship with Lupin. Uh oh, trouble ahead, I think. A new and interesting element for the plot...get those exams over with and write some more soon, please xx.
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  • From ccino49 on June 27, 2007
    Oh, this is new and different. I'd like to know how old she is though. Gods, the poor girl was nothing but a lab rat, how cruel. You'd think if the originaL men who had her fro so long would have been more careful with her powers. I love how she melted through the door to Severus' room, why didn't she melt out of her handcuffs in the labs? Severus, fancy beating up on someone who just healed you, then the randy beggar tried to take her when he was half asleep and thinking about Narcissa Malfoy. Oh bugger. Now Remus is on the scene Sevs not happy. Are we gonna find out her full history soon? Will her powers help to kill scauldypants? Will Remus want her the same way Severus does? Hurry with next chapter please, I hate waiting to find out what happens. Love this tale.
    ccino
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  • From unknownslytherin13 on June 21, 2007
    Hey, cool story. It was a good read!
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  • From sheherazade on June 17, 2007
    Oh yes, very sexy! I laughed out loud that she turned into a puddle and melted on to the floor - who wouldn't?? (Kind of reminded me of the film 'Amelie'; have you seen it?) And 'Don't you dare move...I have plans for you' - I like that line a lot. That was a really nice lemon - sensual, and it was kind of good that Dumbledore interrupted them, because he was able to calm down a bit and be more gentle. And Marie understands what's going on in his head, which must be the best bonus ever with Snape - nobody else does, after all.

    Best of luck in your exams - then you'll have lots more writing time, yay.
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  • From sheherazade on June 07, 2007
    That was a lovely lemony-fresh shower. And waking up in bed to find Snape draped all over you...wow. There's a nice thought! He'll have to watch what he's thinking, won't he? She'll know! Well, I'm looking forward to all kinds of complications ahead, not to mention more lemons...
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  • From Happyappy on June 07, 2007
    Very good job. Sorry, didn't mean to get on you about short chapters. That is just impatient me always wanting more. I have never seen heroes. Maybe I need to start watching it. Are those people mutants too? I'm very glad Marie didn't take offence to waking up the way she did. If she had, that could have been bad for Severus. Guess she didn't hold what he did to her against him. I guess you could say he was sort of kind of gentlemenly since he told her she should ask him to leave. I guess she must be used to being naked in front of people since she didn't think it was any big deal for him to see her that way. The poor girl really must not have lived a nice normal life. Sounds like she was almost like some kind of lab rat. Thanks for the quick update. Waiting and wanting to read more.
    Sansa
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  • From sheherazade on June 05, 2007
    Oops,Severus, hope he hasn't seriously hurt her! I'm intrigued by Marie - I want to know what she thinks of having a life outside the experimental lab. Has she ever known human relationships before or is it all new to her? Update soon.
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  • From Happyappy on June 04, 2007
    Liking your story so far. Wish your chapters were just a little bit longer, but I will take what I can get. Guess this is sort of Harry Potter crossed with x-men. It seems Marie must have quite a few powers. What is she going to think of Severus when she wakes up? Will she realise that he didn't know it was her when he was banging her head off the floor? What will she think when she finds out that he really isn't like her, and that he is a wizard? I am really looking forward to finding out all the answers to my questions. Please update very soon!
    Sansa
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  • From sheherazade on June 04, 2007
    I like the connection they have, though I get the feeling Severus is going to try and resist it. He has got his work cut out now, with Voldemort after her as well. Do keep updating; all kinds of interesting stuff could happen here.
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  • From Ladyaph on June 03, 2007
    your story shows great potential I shall look forward to seeing more

    5 stars for originality good luck
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