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Reviews for Dragons in the Night

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  • From alma on June 24, 2007
    good chapter.
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  • From alma on June 24, 2007
    good chapter.
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  • From alma on June 24, 2007
    good chapter.
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  • From alma on June 24, 2007
    good chapter.
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  • From alma on June 24, 2007
    good start.
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  • From thrnbrooke on June 24, 2007
    Soooo need chapter 6!
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  • From hpobsessed on June 23, 2007
    Very nice! How long has it been that Harry is still carrying the egg?
    And things are a little clearer with Draco's POV. Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Deaths_Mistress on June 21, 2007
    This is a very cool story! I love what you are doing with it!
    I can't wait to read more!
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  • From thrnbrooke on June 21, 2007
    Fantastic! I sooo need chapter 5!
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  • From ANON - trixi on June 21, 2007
    Different, but good!
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  • From Jerica on June 21, 2007
    So am I understanding this right. They are part dragon?
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  • From ANON - drippy123 on June 06, 2007
    There's a great deal of backstory missing: How does Harry know these "Laws"? What timeline are you using/building? How did Draco get to Harry without being in the Zoo as well?

    You've got a problem with continuity as well. The chapters, even within themselves, seem a bit disjointed. Again, you really need a couple of beta editors/readers to tighten up your English grammar and punctuation.

    The premise is interesting, but, it really needs some work to make it all flow smoothly.
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  • From ANON - drippy123 on June 06, 2007
    I really recommend going to LJ and checking out the hp_betas community. They can catch a lot of the mistakes (misspellings, homonym confusion, punctuation, etc.) that's showing up.
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  • From Aalto on June 06, 2007
    I love this! This story is brilliant and imaginative and has that certain mystery shrouding it that makes a good story ever more interesting. I do hope you'll keep writing this and in time, finish it.
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  • From thrnbrooke on June 06, 2007
    Holy moly! I sooo need chapter 4!
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