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By : Ms_Figg
  • From DarkIris on March 16, 2023

    First, a tribute and my sincerest thanks to Ruth S., AKA, Ms. Figg, for your prolific work for the Sevmione ship. You created your very own Severus and Hermione and a few other memorable characters. I appreciate your work more than ever since the insidious habit of Dumbledore bashing has pervaded the SS/HG fandom. It's insidious, inaccurate, and grossly unfair. Your portrayal of Dumbledore's personality, motivations, honor, and relationship with Severus is the one I feel most accurate and the one I treasure. I'm grateful your writing was amongst the first in this fandom that I read and I'm grateful it's available for others. 

    This is regarding Snippet 22 ~ A Surprise in the Upper Corridors

    This is my favorite of the snippets. This is a clever example of the naughty (bordering on perverted) pleasure "blackmail for sex" subset of the "hot for teacher" trope. The author not only pulled it off, she transformed it into a believable eventual HEA that doesn't strain the credulity of those who understand both the May/December trope and why it's a no brainer for this particular ship. Both are characters who had a better chance of deciding they were meant to always be single than finding true love. In her case because she refused to accept someone who didn't understand and want her authentic self and in his, because he didn't think it was possible and/or deserved. Also, I'm glad the author edited a few parts of the original version. The original parts weren't disturbing or anything negative, they were bits of Severus' dialogue that now flow better and are less unnecessarily dramatic. The whole one shot just flows so well.


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  • From Ms_Figg on July 05, 2009
    Hi Danie: I only write new snippets when I make new XXX animations for them on my burningpen.com website, because I write the stories to fit the animations. I haven't made any in a while so there haven't been new chappies.
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  • From mamabear52 on July 05, 2009
    OOHH!Love it! Always great! She will have to get some more interesting bras and knickers just for the fun of it. Can we expect many more chapters with fun in them or is it coming to an end soon??
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  • From ANON - Flowerchild on June 29, 2008
    I love your snippets but I always imagined you could do a full story with number 24, If not wed then bed. Hermione being disappointed with her first time and confessing it to Ginny and Severus overhearing or something. I love all your stories, keep up the good work!
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  • From Ms_Figg on December 11, 2007
    Ah, Lurker. Firstly, thank you so much for coming out of lurking mode. lol. Yes, I shared that video when I was a bit lit, but decided to leave it up to show pretty much I'm mostly about having fun concerning things, my life and my writing. Life's about finding joy and I do it the way I feel suits me. These stories reflect that and not much more. Now as to your desire concerning Hermione's personality . . . you know, I can see it. I really can and just love it. :) You can count on seeing that Hermione in the future. She will probably be out of Hogwarts, since she's going to need time to develop this persona. But it sounds like it could be a fun romp with a very frustrated and put-out, (but still smexy) Severus. Thanks again!
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  • From ANON - An Intrigued Lurker on December 11, 2007
    I posted my review, and then read your others. I heard plenty of mention of "Chapter 13"... something about her being the perfect literary phantom of many a gushing critic. So, naturally, I was curious, and went to take a looksee.

    I had read it before, I
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  • From ANON - An Amused Lurker on December 11, 2007
    What I miss by not reading every story, thank goodness you brought this to my attention by updating. I was just browsing the chapters of this story when I see: Miss Figg on Video. I assume you've created a music video or something, but no! A proclamation of your drunken state, and a link to an actual video of you singing! What a treat, to actually be able to see the person. I'm quite visual, and I'm a fan of yours.

    All I know is that you
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  • From Delfin on December 11, 2007
    oh radness good one ;)
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  • From Onitsu on September 22, 2007
    I love these. You are quite the imaginative writer, And yes. I gave you a donation at theburningpen.com I'm just awaiting my email hehehehe
    These are just GREAT! I was never a Snape fan til after I read book 7. But now, I know of the smexiness that is Severus!
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on August 28, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From Ms_Figg on July 07, 2007
    nonentity: I did think about that, and adding such variables as stamina, frequency of engagement, potential sensitivity, sexual response to a young woman vs. an older woman, actual jerking speed and a few other possible variants...but it would have gone over the thirty second mark for Hermione to say all that, so I cut it to the bare bone...so to speak. lol. Mathematically it was too simple an equation, but snippet-wise...eh. :) Thanks for commenting.
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  • From nonentity on July 07, 2007
    The Albus math/arithmancy thing is quite amusing. Although I think it should be age/fistings and not fistings/age, since younger guys come very fast. (Can't help myself; do math for a living . . . ) Kills the thirty seconds thing though.
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  • From Kristic on July 07, 2007
    ROFLMAO!!!!! Gold Star, Miss Figg :-)
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  • From nonentity on July 07, 2007
    Really, really like the Goyle/Harry/Ginny fic. Nice points of view and thought processes all around, and nice little sex scene.
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  • From slygriff21 on June 27, 2007
    Interesting snippets. i enjoy them. Can't wait for more.

    Your biggest fan,
    Tiffany
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