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Reviews for Prefect Pair

By : redneckfiregirl
  • From tanyaflorio on March 29, 2010
    PLEASE FINISH THISS TORY PLEASE!!!!
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on April 17, 2008
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on February 06, 2008
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From Delfin on January 09, 2008
    hadnt i posted a review in here?

    uhmm anyway

    i really dont mind ur way of writing, i enjoy reading this story, so keep it up :)
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  • From Darkangel19 on January 09, 2008
    Hey
    I think our story is great. I don't care about the spelling mistake and the other people are being ass for that because everyone has prombles. I hope you keep writing.
    from
    JINXS
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  • From luvhp on January 08, 2008
    Very interesting storyline. I've seen plenty of stories with spelling/grammer issues, it does distract the storyline a bit, but seriously, the people here are very nice(most) and are only trying to help, do not take it too personally. I do believe this story is quite Unique, so hopefully you will continue.


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  • From copewithit on January 08, 2008
    Just a question; are you from Texas or something? It's just that you overly use 'y'all' instead of you all, or some other string of words. British people don't use 'y'all' in their vocabulary as far as I know. I just thought that you might want to work on that. However, everything else seems to be really great!
    yours truly,
    cope
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  • From on January 07, 2008
    Okay...so here's the problem. When you're writing a fanfic based on such an international hit as Harry Potter and you then give the characters a Lousiana inspired dialect...it's a turn off to the readers. Hate to say it but there you have it. Now I'm all up for expressing oneself in fanfiction and believe me when I say that I love your plot and I love where you're going with this but...it's still a turn off none the less.

    Oh and the whole thing you said about leaving the Yall's to spite...seems pretty petty and imature on your part. But hey...you Gryffindor's are pretty stuborn when you want to be so there's not much you'll probably do about it. :P
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  • From KaylaLou on January 07, 2008
    Hi!...Loved it...Loved it..Loved it...cant wait for more...oh and if you would like...i would be willing to beta for u...just let me know!
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  • From Gryffindorclutz on January 07, 2008
    Please don't let Draco die! Also, don't let other people get you down. Most give tips and hints because they think they're helping you. However, the ones that are mean need to understand that it is in fact your story and if your portrayal of the characters doesn't please them, they should write their own. Keep writing. You do a very good job. :)
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  • From firebirdmarie on January 07, 2008
    dont worry about what the other people think because the idea of a fanfic is to write however you want to write your story. even though its not in the same dialect as books or movies or anything like that, you have to make it your own and not copy everyone else. how you write this story is very awsome. its your story and it makes what you are. so what if its not in the british language? not everyone can understand that language for it is a very hard language to get accustomed to. so dont let everyone get to you from the way you write..keep it up :)
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  • From donovanwitch on January 06, 2008
    I just started reading your story and can understand how it might upset you that people don't like the word ya'll in context with people that they have grown to know and understand. I too and from the south, so I do see your side. But in the same return you have to see theirs. I understand, this is part of who you are, but it's not Hermione or Dumbledore, they just don't speak like that. They are refined people who use a very proper form of British English. Now people are going to comment on that. Like I said, I'm from the south too, but you have to make the characters believable and making them speak like country folk just don't work. I'm sorry if this upsets you, but I had to say it.
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  • From bananasforyou on January 05, 2008
    hey i love it bc im from louisiana so i know what your talkin about, your right it is your story for YOU to write anyway you want bc its for your pleasure. and im glad that you write it bc i take pleasure in reading it!!
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  • From Obscura on January 05, 2008
    Nice story. Although your spelling can indeed be viewed as strange, here it is the contents that counts for me... keep up the good work. And please, don't let Draco die. Why not let Hermione have twins - boy and girl?
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  • From Citten on January 05, 2008
    Good for you babe! i am american too and have some very good friends of mine that say ya'll so dont worry! i actually i kinda like it! it makes your story unique, so dont worry about what other people say because it did not bother me; besides i know how it is i am a terrible speller too. :) as to what will happen to everyone is up to you and is your discison. but if you want input that i can do my dear! ;) i would like them to stay together put it may not work out maybe so thing happening to have to have them put back together. but maybe in the in between moments have them think about each other, their situation, and what might happen-to them, the baby(ies), each other, or what will happen....... i think i got my point and way beyond it too (sorry some times i ramble). as to the baby idea i love the taught of twins, but i dont care i also dont care if it is a boy or girl if you only do one. one thing i know that you have had a potion taken to 'speed things up' as it were but could something have reacted badly and not have that potion work and have that be our twist besides it might have a lot of things change that way! well just a thaught-please write more!!! (and no killing anyone yet! PLEASE!) loves from Citten :)
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