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Reviews for Prefect Pair

By : redneckfiregirl
  • From ANON - Anon on January 05, 2008
    Please don't kill off Draco and I don't really want them to be separated either
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  • From TarnishedAngel on January 04, 2008
    I noticed that you deleted my review, and that's certainly your choice. Just so you know, I'm not angry. Also, my offer to beta your fic still stands. Either way, take care.
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  • From Kaley on January 04, 2008
    I really liked this story, but I'm sorry that I just can't get past the the blatant out of character language used. "Ya'll is simply not a phrase an English person would ever use. Speaking as an English person myself, every time one of your characters comes out with this, it just drags me write out of the plot and makes me feel like they are just not the characters I know. A much less important, but still slightly grating is the use of American spelling/ words that are different in the UK (you have this in common with most authors on this site). For England its mum, not mom.

    Judging from your authors note at the top of the second page I fear that you may not appreciate my comments, but I feel that reviews should be honest and I hope you can take my comments in the spirit with which they are meant; I like your story enough to take the time, to point out something which I feel is detracting from it.
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  • From bananasforyou on January 04, 2008
    im not sure what i want,but not draco dying.please
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  • From shanna9064 on January 03, 2008
    It's a very interesting concept, but you might consider getting a beta to help you with some of your spelling and punctuation. I know sometimes it's difficult to see our own mistakes when we write, or we get so execited by the idea of sharing our creativity with others that we just can't take that extra time to read over it a 2nd or 3rd time. I've done it myself in the past. There are a ton of people out there who would be more than willing to look over your work for you, and it shouldn't be hard to find one, especially in a fandom as popular as Harry Potter.

    Having someone check your work and help you could turn this from an interesting concept into a great story.
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  • From Heidi191976 on January 03, 2008
    This was a great chapter. I can't wait to read more soon. I would love to see both of them get rescued before the baby is born, but if you decide to kill Draco off while saving her, that would definately put a twist to this story. I hope that hey aren't kept in the prison like building for a real long time before they can get help. Another thing, if Draco dies, who will step in to help Hermione with the baby?
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  • From lily69 on January 03, 2008
    Great story! You must have a warped mind to come up with this...(that was intended as a complient!) I'm all for happy endings! ;-)
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  • From mhaj78 on January 03, 2008
    Oh, please, no death while saving anyone...I need happy ending fanfiction!!!
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  • From firebirdmarie on January 03, 2008
    well..that was really awsome! you are such a great writer! hmm the answer to your question is to let draco live i think..but..add a twist that no one will expect at all..thats my advice..great job on the story..keep it up! :)
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  • From Citten on January 03, 2008
    where to start, where to start. okay i really liked the idea about twins but i just did not occure to me that they would know that much yet. though i love the idea regardless. :) next YOU CANT KILL DRACO THAT IS JUST CRUEL TO US AND EVERYONE!!!!! there i got that out. it would serious cut the story. beside i was looking forward to LOTS more. :) but as always this is your story and i just cant wait to see what YOU will do with it. until next time-and it better be soon!!!! :)
    ps i dont know who to feel worse for being separated, draco or hermione and who will it be harder on?
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  • From bananasforyou on January 03, 2008
    awe twins!
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  • From catysmom1028 on January 02, 2008
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From Citten on January 02, 2008
    well how are they going to feel about all this now is starting to become a reality. i dont know who to feel the sorryist for. the reason i didnot say anything to you about the title is i am a lousey speller! well i am so EXCITED that you wrote another chapter!!! :) please update soon and let us know how they take the news!
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on December 22, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 18, 2007
    wow, very original story line. I really like it, can't wait for your next chapter. Absolutely loving Draco right now. :)
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