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Reviews for The Issue of Mine Enemy

By : NormanCharles
  • From MacPhisto on June 14, 2010
    finally found the Blazings Saddles reference
    hate to criticize your amazing story, but the line Lili says to Bart is, "Is it twue how they say you people are "gifted"? [the sound of Bart's pants being unzipped] Oh, it's twue! It's twue, it's twue!"
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  • From MacPhisto on May 24, 2010
    another person commented about a Blazing Saddles reference, but I can't seem to find it, and I'm at chapter 19
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  • From MacPhisto on May 24, 2010
    rereading the story, and just caught the Star Trek joke in chapter 10!
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  • From MacPhisto on March 20, 2010
    I can honestly say that this is my all-time favorite story
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  • From on November 04, 2008
    I truly love this and I can say that with a smile on my face!
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  • From AdamiRose on October 16, 2008
    All I can say is...wow.

    That was most interesting. In a most good way. I'm rather glad to see that your story took on a life of it's own. I Feel this was much better than anything shorter would have been.

    I do feel for Harry though, I would think it to get a bit rough for someone in a poly household and hearing thoughts...I don't think I would like not having my private thoughts.
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  • From TheSonOfJokerAndHarley on December 31, 2007
    amazing...
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  • From TheSonOfJokerAndHarley on December 28, 2007
    just when I think you've reached your pinnacle, you keep aiming higher
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  • From TheSonOfJokerAndHarley on December 28, 2007
    mother of Odin... you're amazing... historical references lost on the average person...
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  • From TheSonOfJokerAndHarley on December 20, 2007
    this is incredible
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  • From TheSonOfJokerAndHarley on December 20, 2007
    a bizarre love triangle indeed
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  • From TheSonOfJokerAndHarley on December 20, 2007
    the plot thickens
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  • From TheSonOfJokerAndHarley on December 19, 2007
    38 frickin chapters? as much as I appreciate a well written story, I hope the sex gets smuttier
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  • From clairevictoria on December 09, 2007
    I read the whole thing in one sitting. First off, I have never read a Harry/Bellatrix story, and, if this is anything to go by I never will again. Because they can NEVER EVER compare to this one. It was amazing. I LOVED it. Loved it so much that I want to have lots of babies with you. I have a thing for military men and I have to say that a military Harry was almost too much for me to bear. I wanted to jump into the page and be a sister wife. I am polygamous and a Pagan, and I have to say that I have never read a story that represtenst both in such a wonderful light. I have never had someone understand a poly relationship so well as in this story. My thanks. As for my religion, my god you got the handfasting perfect. I can't stop raving about this story. But I will stop the review here, because I'm going to start repeating myself. One last thing, how could you take Myrtle from the Potter Clan? I understand why she had to go, she wanted to be the one who showed Moldishorts to his 'heaven', but still! Well, that's my only complaint. Great story, great ending. Well written and very thoughtful and moral. Way to go.
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  • From alleycat88 on November 25, 2007
    That was the perfect ending! Thank you!
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