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Reviews for Keeping it in the Family, Part 2

By : GuitarGuru87
  • From 94caddy on May 23, 2008
    The all girl threesome was very nice and it only got better by adding Harry and Ron.
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  • From 94caddy on May 23, 2008
    Another good chapter. A family that fucks together stays together.
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  • From 94caddy on May 23, 2008
    Wow Harry and Katie together was masterful. Harry really likes his girls.
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  • From 94caddy on May 23, 2008
    Getting Adrianna pregnant was hot.
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  • From luvhp on May 23, 2008
    OMG, I think that has to be the hottest fucking chapter to date for this story!!!!! Hermione fucking Ginny, Ginny eating out Adriana, Harry fucking Hermione...good GOD! You've got it all in here!! Not to mention the little show at GP. Ohh!
    You rock, sorry to hear the updates will be slowing down, but it's okay, love your stuff and will continue to watch out for 'new' stuff!

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  • From pfeil on May 22, 2008
    Ah, good. Wouldn't want Adriana to start feeling left out =)
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  • From SkeeterB on May 22, 2008
    Excellent story man, but I think you reposted chapter 19 twice. Keep up the good work
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  • From luvhp on May 22, 2008
    damn, that's one interruption you can't complain about! You are so quick with the updates, thank you!!!
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  • From pfeil on May 21, 2008
    Oh, another idea.

    In 1.5 years, Hogwarts will need a DADA/Flying/Whatever teacher. After all, he'll want to stay close to (or, sometimes, inside ;P) Katie. While there, he meets up again with Hermione, who they had lost track of after she went off to muggle university, but it turns out is just starting teaching transfig at Hogwarts, since Fumbledore retired and Minnie got the Headmistress job.

    Harry can adjust that spell a little bit, and I'm sure Hermione's good enough to change the size of the tool her spell can produce, for lots of fun detentions. (In addition to family play night and such =])

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  • From pfeil on May 21, 2008
    A very good job explaining indeed =)

    And I did think that it was Lily's red hair breeding through. I just thought about it more and got worried.

    BTW, what happened to Ginny? Not that I want her back, but I am curious. Maybe she's still at home, "playing" with Ron and Molly? (And Hermione moved in with the Potters, just wasn't mentioned, he hopes.)

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  • From luvhp on May 21, 2008
    Oh damn, so wrong but so naughty and HOT! And Adriana approving, I half expected her to come in at the end. Yeah quick updates are the best!
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  • From flatliner15 on May 21, 2008
    SO SO SO SOOOOOOOOO HOT!!!!!!!!
    more ron plaaaaaaaeeeeeeeeesssssssssssseeee???
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  • From LondonMarie on May 21, 2008
    OH MY GOD! WOW. Just wow. wonderful job. I'm wow! I remember reading the first one and the beginnings of this one, and I'm like "I hope they update soon." I'm glad that you're continuing this story, and I anxiously await your next chapter.
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  • From pfeil on May 20, 2008
    Poor Harry. No time with Hermione? I'd have hoped she'd at least have gone for some platonic (as far as Ron knows ;P) dinners with Harry and Adriana...

    /me thinks Ron's a git, and would have voted for Molly/Ron/Ginny and Harry/Hermione/Adriana, given a choice. Really keep it in the family =)

    What was Ginny up to, anyways?

    Glad to see you're back, though. Hot as ever, so I really don't have anything of substance to complain about.

    And they had a girl, eh? Makes me think of SuicideKing and http://hp.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=600006402 ...

    P.S. Please don't let the red hair be because it's really Ron's (or one of his other brothers).

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  • From darthme1011 on May 20, 2008
    will he eventually do his daughter as well cant wait
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