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Reviews for Harry Potter and The Serpent King (BP5)

By : slashpervert
  • From NightLo on June 18, 2007
    Well...new life and babies are always soothing - they are so pure, pure enough to wash away all the sadness and evils, and I am so happy that Valen can be there for everyone, and I dearly hope he would always be protected and cared, away from that bastard Voldermort...and that 'warning' would not be true.

    Life is not easy, esp. for one BWL/the Chosen One and one Malfoy/Death eater's son, they are under too much fame, too much hope and pressure and too much...expectation. Actually I agreed with you that both of them grew up in insufficiently loved and cared environment. No that Draco was not pampered - but he was the only child, he came from a traditioned family, a pure-blooded with history - I would doubt - did he ever get a hug, a kiss, a confirmation and recognition?

    That why they must take a long way to reach each other, and that way...I still remembered - is destined and set (as also...the death of Sirium and Dumbledore). They must hate each other, they must loathe each other, they must destine to be each other rival...that's why love and passion will esp. great and neverending between the two. And we have a witness - we have Valen as a pure miracle of LOVE...

    However, as long as I love this - can we hear anything from Minerva and Snape and the Order soon? As the war will end in 3 months, any more progress in the research?

    Lastly - I would like to know - will the two continue their education after all is settled? If so, any special arrangement? And...would there be a sister or brother for Valen? As the end is coming, I am very looking forward to the sequels!
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  • From thrnbrooke on June 17, 2007
    Soooo need chapter 6!
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  • From on June 16, 2007
    Awww... ;-; Poor Charlie
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  • From NightLo on June 16, 2007
    In times of sadness, there is nothing more soothing than families and babies/children...the need to stay close to one another, the need to re-assure life and hope would just be too great. In such times, it is really happy to know...that Draco and Harry have one another to rely on, and with Valen to hold and hope...

    Lastly, welcome back, Percy, your family missed you, never stay away for too long again...
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  • From NightLo on June 16, 2007
    I sometimes ask - is it really that bad and not consider using anything muggle in this war? E.g. survillance equipment or other stuff? Actually muggles do have something brilliant and great, and in any war, things of such great use should be used properly! Lucky they have the twins and Draco, and their intelligence can cover that point...

    But I have doubt what will they come up with for toys of Valen...though if it is dangerous, hopefully Valen can sense it...

    And now I am praying again nothing tragic will happen to Charlie/Bill/Mr. Weasley!
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  • From willowgirl on June 15, 2007
    Sorry I've never reviewed your stories before. I always follow your stories and enjoy them very much. I love how you update so often and every chapter is so smokin hot. Keep up the good work, I know you will.
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  • From NightLo on June 15, 2007
    Sorry - no offense...but as I loosely counted it - the word 'fuck' appeared more than 10 times in this single chapter - though I enjoyed very very much...just imagine...an invisible and transparent hand stretching your body, that meant....you could SEE inside! Wow...what a scene that could be...however, good that Valen was not around, or else...evil grin - v -

    Such great potion can be used with a simple 'silentio', then everything could be settled easily - however, really no exposure to your opponents, including the MEDIA, as they surely didn't need any more news about their love life on the front page...and little Valen!
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  • From cynaga on June 14, 2007
    Fantastic start! Love the dream sequence. And Draco knowing Harry so well that he is able to bring out his best.
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  • From NightLo on June 14, 2007
    Wow...finally up! The final road to victory, peace and happiness - though the road would be hard, sad and bitter at the same time!

    The nightmare was awful, and...to some extend...I am worried that would be a seer dream...but I just frigntened myself - that was not, and would not (hopefully)...as Valen is a child born of love and care between Draco and Harry, dark and evil magic cannot pollute him. Also, with the revelation that love can fuel magic, as hate does, then Harry can do it - just like his mother, Lily, Harry's love for Valen and Draco can protect them and vice versa.

    Finally - we knew what does Draco see each time with Harry's magic and emotion - would Valen able to do it? If so - how can Harry teach Valen when your son can tell you are no longer angry everytime?
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  • From thrnbrooke on June 13, 2007
    Sooo need chapter 2!
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