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Reviews for What If?

By : DawnOfTheDead
  • From MotekElm on May 09, 2017

    Great oneshot. Sexy, Funny, surprising


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  • From ANON - Emily on March 21, 2010
    That was so cute, such a funny ending. I loved it.
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  • From RZZMG1111 on January 26, 2010
    What if I told you that was abso-bloody-loutely brilliant writing? I laughed until my sides hurt. Fantastic!
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  • From ANON - the norwegian girl on May 21, 2008
    i totally understand how this won that award, it really is funny, and quite sexy :)
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  • From LondonMarie on January 20, 2008
    What if I said that I love the last two lines of this story?
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  • From gabby1234 on November 21, 2007
    wonderful i loved this piece and i think it is great any other sexy situations they get in to?
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  • From ichiruki on November 02, 2007
    LOLz, I knew something was up when the tie was yellow and not slytherin colored!
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  • From Ellanath on November 01, 2007
    Oh my gosh that was priceless!
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  • From WendelinTheWeird on October 24, 2007
    What if i told you that i didn't think it was that funny. OK it was a bit, some of the repitition was annoying but as everyone has said it was a cute story. I thought it was gonna be another one of those really long Head Boy/Girl stories so this was refreshingly originally.
    Although the bit that went , 'exciting excitement and romantic romance' was a bit annoying!!!
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  • From ivorycameo on October 24, 2007
    LMFAO.
    Literally rolled around on the floor with that one.
    You are a comic genius, and I love you to death.
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  • From ANON - Deirdre on October 22, 2007
    that was pretty funny!
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  • From myangeldraco on October 22, 2007
    LOL..What if I told you that the house elves cracked me up?!! that was just excellentxx
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 22, 2007
    Very cute.
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  • From hppyflwr on August 07, 2007
    Totally Funny and sweet. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE write another of this stories two are not enough if I said so myself.

    PRETTY PLEASE :)
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  • From BloodyLove on June 21, 2007
    That was funny. I really liked it. But honestly at first I thought it was one of those stories where they are both head boy and girl and they've been attracted to each other. Then I saw they were married and thought oh ok thats good too. But yea it is good.
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