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By : lojenn

From myperversities on November 12, 2019
Omg!! What a trilogy!! Thank you so much for this amazing story. I thoroughly enjoyed it. I'm so happy the three of them got together finally. Although one thing I was not clear on was why the house elf was poisoning Harry. It was just the one mention that the elf was turned out and his parents were killed by werewolves. But if they killed his parents why would he do what they wanted. And where were his parents because there was only mention of him in Draco's house.

I really did enjoy though.

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From FemmeFuretBlanch on April 16, 2017
Every few years I comeback and reread all Indago series.....and it is still my favorite fic. I was around 20 when I read it the first time, now with 30 years I am quite amused that I keep coming here for this specific story. Thank you.

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From ANON - Kfae on February 24, 2015
I really enjoyed this story. This last installment was very intriguing and I am sorry to see it end. I enjoyed the incorporation of Harry and Draco's Daughter being mated in the story as well. I rather liked that you had Snape fathering one of the twins. I love the relationship dynamic between Harry, Draco and Snape. I am rather glad you kept him as an important member of this story after Harry and Draco were married. I did notice that you completely removed Ron and Hermione after they moved to Canada, however they were not very relevant to the rest of the story. I started reading your story many years ago but never finished the first installment for whatever reason and I'm not one to normally review a story. Yours is one I felt I really couldn't walk away without singing your praise. I am very happy to have re-read your story. I was sucked into the characters and plot right away. I was practically drooling for more chapters and read this entire trilogy in three days. It would have been in a day but alas I do have to work lol. Thank you for dreaming this dynamic story up and writing it down for all of us to read. Please keep writing and feeding us fanfiction junkies, I look forward to reading your other works.
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From Annecia89 on July 10, 2014
I have such a love/hate relationship with this series! I love them, but I can't help but feel sorry for Harry :(
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From ANON - SpiritOfBeyond on March 27, 2014
Dear LdDunham,

I have just powered through all three installments of Indago, and I absolutely loved it. Very well written, few (if any) plot holes, and very entertaining.
Thanks for sharing with us :)

~Spiritxx
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From ANON - Liz on June 24, 2013
I only just read this story, and I have to say I like the first two Indago stories, but this one less so... You spent a long time stressing the fact that Draco and Harry were the only ones for eachother. Draco is jealous. Harry only wants Draco. Yet after all that, Snape, Harry and Draco all end up shacking up... Which kind of ruined it for me :/.
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From Woodlandspirit on February 11, 2012
I loved all 3 stories. They got my blood pumping, making my family laugh at me for pacing while I read.
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From Sablesilverrain on November 01, 2011
I wanted to ask permission to reference Indago in my story, Shiloe. The refence would only be once, an it would be worded exactly like this: "The Shiloe has few natural enemies, the most notable being Indago, since the Shiloe can communicate and usually associates with transformed werewolves."

If you are okay with me using the above line in my story, please e-mail me at kaidachan_@hotmail.com so that I may forward it to the moderators to include the line in my story. The line is not currently part of the public version of the story.
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From on September 04, 2009
I just read the whole trilogy in three days exactly. I have no life. This just cements the fact. I loved every nail biting minute of Indago. I'd go to sleep after finishing one story while anticipating the next one after. I wasn't able to sleep without knowing the ending so it's a very sleep deprived Uke Incognito that writes to you right now. ^^

Anywho, I need to admit to something. I'm guilty of having had many chances to read all three parts of Indago and due to my own fear I didn't do it until now. When I was first linked to the story, I, of course, looked at the summary. I saw the DM/HP/SS warning and ran with my tail between my legs. Not because I don't enjoy Snarry, quite the opposite actually, but because I can't stand anyone but Harry being the BOTTOM! Oh my god! I was so freaked out that I would get into the story only to find out chapters in that Draco is taking it up the bum from Severus! And that Draco was giving it to Harry like some nightmarish Daisy chain! I think I'm insane. Years after getting into the Harry Potter fandom and I'm hesitant to say that I'm quite disgusted with the thought of anyone but Harry taking it up the you-know-what. I can read any pairing that has Harry in it and be right as rain as long at it's Harry as the bottom. I'll even go through Dudley/Harry if the story line is good (or if the sex scene is fantabulous [I'm an unapologetic lemon!whore XD]). But if I start reading and Harry gets TOO dominant, there goes the neighbourhood as well as the story. It doesn't matter to me if the story has gotten awards or if the plot is to die for. If Harry doesn't live up to my twisted ideals, then too-bad-so-sad, I've just thrown up a little in my mouth and maybe I should gouge my eyes out as well?

Okay! Well, what I'm trying to say is that your stories are some of the best I have read by far. And since I've been reading fanfiction since the tender age of eleven *cough*isalmosttwenty*cough*, that is saying quite a bit about them. It was my own irrational fear that kept me from discovering the real treat they held. Oh, and I apologize severely for my stupidity. I shall endeavor to not let my obsession of bottom!harry keep me from looking into a story. Though, I can't promise to stay around if Harry does get uber!seme on someone. I mean seriously! Can you see Severus, or Lucius, or Voldemort, or any guy for that matter, bending over for sweet little Harry? No, I didn't think so either. Let me rephrase something I said earlier in this, uh, review: I'm not insane, I'm fooking deranged!

*cough* Yes, well, um, let me not keep you TOO long with this. I want you to be able to do SOMETHING with your day other than read this long winded rant over my own stupidity disguised as a raving review for the wonderful authoress of what is currently my most favourite series ON EARTH! Ohmyjeebus! I feel like a giddy school girl right now. No worries though. In a few years, I'll reread this story and leave you another long winded rant-review and you can giggle and cackle and be all evil-like in your head as the power-rush goes through you at the knowledge that some demented person has fallen under the spell of your typed words. And since it's now one thirty in the morning and I have crap to do today after I wake up (around mid afternoon or so, I like sleep, it's fun) and you probably have a life unlike me, I shall let you go. Thank you so much for writing such wonderful stories. They were everything I expected from multi-chapter stories and more. So much more. These stories had the right amount of romance, angst, adventure, mystery, and allure to make them timeless classic. I adore you and your wonderful prose. Thank you once again. Now, I'm out.

Much love and admiration,
Uke Incognito

PS: Sorry that I sound like some deranged stalker. I'm not one. I promise. I'm just really sleepy and I tend to not make much sense when my eyesight doubles on me. Promise. Really. I mean it. Seriously.
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From Whimsy101 on February 12, 2009
Having read all of the previous Idago's you've written, I felt the need to inform you of my delight in the story (all of them). Fabulously well written, this one I felt was definitely different than the previous two, enjoying the familial dynamics and relationships with the boys, Maia, Harry, Draco and Sev (I giggled every time Maia and the boys referred to Severus as 'their' Sev). I didn't review the previous two, mostly because I wanted to read all three and review at the end.

Fabulously well done. I can't wait to read more of your work, and thoroughly enjoy it as much as I did for the Indago series.
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From smurff on August 06, 2008
*Long, deep sigh*

I just reread the entire series. God. I wish they would just keep going and going. The FIRST time I read these, I nearly stopped at the beginning of the first story, because I didn't like how mean Draco was. Can you imagine? I wouldn't have been able to spend weeks rereading them! Everything seems so well planned out... A couple times (of course, I don't remember them now because that would be too convenient) I sat back and thought, 'that fits in so well... I wonder if that had been planned since the beginning'. If those things were intentional, I'm jealous of you and your crazy abilities. If they were unintentional, that's awesome!!

Okay, to pick my favourite moment from the trilogy, I'd say it was Maia's birth. That absolutely killed me. Every time I reread these, I read that part twice. I don't entirely know why I love it so much, but it's so... basic. Ugh. And of course, the smut is decent. I guess.

... Of course I'm kidding because it's awesome. I realize I keep using that word but I'm tired and my vocabulary isn't where it should be. Anyway, it's weird reading an actual story and looking forward to smut. I say that because, in my experience, the story is really well written, or the smut is really well written. Rarely both. You, my friend, have both :D:D Makes it sooo much more fun to read.

Okay, this has been a long review (the longest review wouldn't be enough for you because you're incredible but I'm tired... as previously mentionned) so I'm leaving.

Love it! In case that was unclear... :S :D
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From Mirakay on July 10, 2008
I thought that you said that only boys could be supero???? I am soooo confused!!! but the story still rocks!
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From mikuplantman on May 10, 2008
It has been a pleasure to read this third story of Indago. You are an amasing author. I look forward to your next masterpiece.
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From BettyBoopSweden on March 08, 2008
Okay, I'm doing one long review on all three Indago stories, wich I have spent the last days reading one after the other...I don't know what to say, this is soooo amazingly, wondefully perfectly good that I'm speechless. Or almost at least :D. And right now I'm in tears because the perfect ending and because there is no more story. I haven't been able to drag myself from this story, almost not even for sleep :D

I don't usually like those "Harry as a magical being"- stories but this one I loved. Dom/Sub-stories is not a favorite either, I read it but don't seek it out. But again, in this story I loved it...maybe because Harry still said what he felt most of the time and Draco listened (most times). And Sev as a third party fitted perfectly. And I have been yelling at the screen since Kellas first was introduced because she is perfect for Maia!! I felt as the grown ups should have told the kids more of what happened and why they (the children) should be careful...if they had they wouldn't have the problems they had...and there wouldn't be a story :D so how frustrated I was in this story and in the first one when Harry was thrown down the stairs because Draco didn't let him explain, I still trusted you all the way :)

Congrats to a perfect triology, it's not that many people that manage to keep all parts of a thriology, especially as long as yours is, intresting all the way, but you managed!! I am sad that I have read all of this but it ended perfectly!! Good work. I'm looking forward to read more of your stories, you are a talented writer!!

Hugs from Betty!!

Ps. Sorry if the language is a bit strange, english is not my first language and it is late here so I'm tired and my brain don't function in writting right now!
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From Jessy8 on March 05, 2008
I must say I enjoy this story. The first one is the best, mostly cause it's the first but this one's danm close. The second one was good but... very dramatic. Which it had to be of course. I'm sure I've reviewed this many times. But since I reread the first one and this one than I thought I should review as well. I hope you write more. I love these stories of yours they're perfect. I also adore "By fair or Foul Means". Though I always kind of wished you wrote a second one to that one. I always felt that Lucius would get very involved with Snape and his new child, which would send Draco in a tit. He's use to being center in his father's life specially since in that story Lucius didn't seem to care much for his wife. But now I'm talking about a completely different story. So sorry. I love story's on the parent relationship though. Draco and Lucius is wonderful because it's not all happy flowers and the parent isn't perfect and they do make mistakes that they do have to some times amend for. I always felt that way with Molly and Ron though too. Totally blubbering now. Have you ever thought of Doing a DracoxRon? Now that would be a challenge. hehe ^^
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