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Reviews for Captive

By : lojenn
  • From bluesunshine24 on October 19, 2011
    this is really fantastic; i must have read it five times over the last year.
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  • From LaBibliographe on September 06, 2007
    Chapter 1: Oh, this was quite lovely. You have Lucius to the life, his manner, his language, the words he would use. And Harry was so well drawn as basically the supplicant to Lucius. Lucius knew it possibly from the first - I think Harry came to his understanding a bit later. At first Harry was just sad and isolated, and found a kindred soul in Lucius. True to form, though, Lucius became the dominant one and they both were happy that way.

    It's sad that Lucius would never be allowed out of prison. But having Harry as his lifeline may be enough for the clever wizard. He fulfilled something for the unique, horrific life Harry had led that I think no one else could have provided. I really enjoyed your story. Wonderful work!
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 20, 2007
    Wow..this is unique and so good. An adult fiction truly. Not too much sex, not too little and a perfect blens of darkness and hope. i loved it. The only thing I could suggest, but that is my opinion, is that you change the word arse to perhaps entrance or portal - just because you have such mature and ripe language. It is too good to add in words like that to narrator text since everything else is such high standard. Great work.
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  • From Darkless on July 07, 2007
    Talk about 'strange bedfellows'. No one understands just what causes attraction, and as much as the mind likes to think it's in control, we all know that in the end, the heart is the ultimate ruler (with a dash of libido!). Often disturbing others that just cannot comprehend our choices.

    Very nicely done.
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  • From SarahElizabeth on June 28, 2007
    This is a work of brillance. :D Loved it.
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  • From Selera on June 23, 2007
    Wow that is surprisingly good. I never thought it would be.
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  • From h2elena on June 22, 2007
    Have you ever thought of doing some more chapters as i would love to see lucius set free and he and harry could have a happy life and raise their children together i would love to see that happen.helena
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  • From ladydeathfaerie on June 22, 2007
    oh my.... that was so beautiful. i really,
    truly and simply, love it. it was the perfect
    blend of physical and emotional.

    thank you so much for sharing.

    ~blessings~
    ldf
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  • From alma on June 22, 2007
    awesome story!
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