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Reviews for Naked Without You

By : nera
  • From blufalcon on April 20, 2008
    Great story !!! There has to be more to it. Or there could be if you let it !!!! Happy ending ?? haha would be sooo awesome if they get to be together forever. Draco needs love.
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  • From bananasforyou on April 09, 2008
    i cant wait but i will.
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  • From Sicca on April 09, 2008
    Soooo sexy!!! Love it!!!
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  • From kazfeist on April 07, 2008
    A good beginning! I look forward to seeing how you handle the guilt they will both feel later. :D
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  • From PotterEntourage on April 06, 2008
    PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE tell me that this is not a one-shot! This was incredible, I found myself holding my breath everytime i scrolled down, and it just kept getting better and better! BRAVO!
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  • From qzgrl on April 06, 2008
    that was AMAZING. right up there with those multi-chapter fics with tons of reviews :-) please keep the story going!
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  • From luvhp on March 25, 2008
    Wow, that was intense! I loved it, spelling errors aside it was very well done!!!!!
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  • From DarkLady on March 10, 2008
    Honestly this story would have caught my attention had it not been riddled with spelling mistakes. I couldn't make it past the first paragraph sorry! (You can advertise for a beta here too you know)
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  • From Clare1984 on March 04, 2008
    whoa that was good and intense. Any chance of a second chapter cos I would love some more of that.

    btw, thanks for reviewing my fic
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on December 23, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on November 26, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From nvywf2005 on September 26, 2007
    one word...AWESOME
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 14, 2007
    Please add more chapters this is really good
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  • From wudelfin on August 28, 2007
    raw powerful utterly insanely beautiful
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  • From absumoaevum on June 22, 2007
    K, yeah, toni is it? You make me very happy. :)

    Your writing style is... breathtaking. Your sentence structure builds tension and releases it so easily that it's almost not fair. Your tone is perfect. But listen to me, sweetie, you need to Beta this story. If you cleaned up those spelling errors, the whole piece would flow much better. And wow... that was the most depressing ending. It just... ended. It made me sad. I wanted there to be more to the story. What happened?

    Don't get me wrong. I loved it. I mean it, I loved it. If you want, you can send the story to my email account and I'll clean it right up for you (absumoaevum@gmail.com).

    Salaam,
    TooMuch
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