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Reviews for Twisted Fate

By : Selera
  • From thrnbrooke on July 03, 2007
    Sooo need chapter 4! Wonder if Harry should have kept quiet....
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  • From TiffanyAK on July 03, 2007
    One more thing, I realize that Harry has gone a bit darker at this point and dropped his mask and all, but shouldn't he be at least SLIGHTLY shocked/confused/upset or SOMETHING over the news that Voldemort is his father? I mean, all he does is smirk, shrug, and stupidly announce it to the whole class. Surely he has SOME type of feeling or emotion about his entire identity changing, or at least a sense of curiousity over how it happened? It doesn't seem realistic that the only thing he does to show emotion after realizing the results are in fact correct (instead of him possibly messing up his potion) is to laugh and shake his head. Maybe it's just me.
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  • From DestinyDragon on July 03, 2007
    I love this!!! Please update soon!
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  • From TiffanyAK on July 03, 2007
    Oooh, now the news is out, and Harry thought he was going to get lots of howlers before, that's nothing compared to when this makes the paper. I wonder what Volders will say to this news, it should be an interesting realization. But, how come Harry looked like James before, or did Dumbles know and interfere? But then why would his looks change NOW? What does Harry mean by it making what he intends to do easier? I thought he pretty much just planned to stay out of things so long as he wasn't attacked. You know, Snape has a point, Harry announcing the news to the entire class (and thereby the whole Wizarding World) didn't exactly display much Slytherin cunning or intelligence. Also, why did Draco keep asking who Tom Marvolo Riddle was in class, when Harry had just explained it the night before? Or was it all an act to give Harry a chance to announce the news if he wished? Plus, did Lily and Voldemort come together the same way in this story as in the original version, or was it different? Shouldn't Dumbledore be sticking his nose in right about now and trying to secure Harry for the light again? It seems like something he would do. He can't afford to lose his perfect little weapon after all. Thanks for updating with another great chapter, and I look forward to the next one.
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  • From LadyoftheShadows86 on July 03, 2007
    This is going to get interesting, I have a feeling. Please update soon. And question? When is 'Lost Mark' going to be updated? I'm curious and interested in the story.
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  • From Jan on July 03, 2007
    Oh I love this Harry.


    Wonder how Tom is going to take the news of Harry being his son.


    Please update soon. ^_^
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  • From lazycrazykitten on July 02, 2007
    Hehe...Harry's such a cool little Slytherin.
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  • From Vittani on June 28, 2007
    Hey i hope you didnt take my earlier review the wrong way. I only meant to say that i really like this and i wanted to read more. I was just hoping you had already started on the other chapters so that they'd be posted quicker. Sorry if i said owt wrong. I just really liked this and wanted to read another chapter.

    I always think your strength is your characters. Both angilique and lost mark show this. But always your plots are highly unique. I really liked this. I dont think i read the old version but i am definitely liking the new one. Cant wait for the next update.
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  • From Drkluver on June 27, 2007
    I like this one better then the other one. ^_^

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  • From TiffanyAK on June 27, 2007
    Well, when I read the original version of this I thought it had some positive points (mainly the plot idea), but the rewrite is so much better. It's definitely a stronger story, which is what the plot idea deserves. I like it a lot, and hope you update soon. I can't wait to see what happens next, dark Harry is the best. PLEASE update often.
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  • From DracoHarry on June 27, 2007
    That was cute. I really enjoyed reading it. I do so love dark Harry stories. You just don't see enough of them. Well keep up the great work.
    Kat
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  • From thrnbrooke on June 27, 2007
    Fantastic! Sooo need chapter 3!
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  • From on June 26, 2007
    I like this story so far seems interesting!
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  • From lazycrazykitten on June 26, 2007
    Another one up so soon? Good chapter!
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  • From hpobsessed on June 26, 2007
    If I'm remembering the previous story correctly...I definatly like the rewrite better!
    Keep up the good work!
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