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Reviews for Harry Potter and the Demise of Dumbledore

By : mjbari05
  • From dropedonmyhead on July 08, 2007
    CAN YOU PLEASE REMOVE ALL THE ASTERICS (*) AT THE BOTTOM OF YOUR CHAPTERS! IT CAUSES A SCROLLING ISSUE AND MAKES YOUR FIC DIFFICULT TO READ. YOU DO NOT NEED THEM A FEW WILL SHOW YOUR SEPARATION JUST FINE. PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE REMOVE MOST OF THEM! *SOBS*
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  • From thrnbrooke on July 08, 2007
    Soooo need chapter 7! Draco finally gave in. Tooo bad he was able to control himself.
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  • From Vittani on July 04, 2007
    well hun i loved it. I am a huge fan of Lotr. I mean Legolas was just YUM. Wow, Legolas/Aragorn, Legolas/Haldir, all hot! So Harry's descended from him is he? I like i like a lot. Dont worry bout the spelling mistakes the other reviewer pointed out, theyre ony little things and dont matter. But just thought i'd add its Arwen, not Arwyn. Dont care bout that tho, the way you incorporated the lotr bloodlines was totally believable. Love Harry's new bod and cant wait to see Draco and everybody elses reaction.

    Update when you can and thanks for reviewing my story!
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  • From thrnbrooke on July 03, 2007
    Soooo need chapter 6!
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  • From CrookShanks on July 03, 2007
    Well defiantly...definitely are two different words and this one is commonly misspelled by a host of writers...misspelled words made a reader 'trip' over the story rather than become engrossed. It's inportant to edit, edit, edit...I know I'm a spelling nazi. But it will make your story better. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From CrookShanks on July 03, 2007
    It's not Kretcher, it's Kreacher...the story is good, but canon spelling is a must!
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  • From CrookShanks on July 03, 2007
    (sp?)fidelus is Fidelius and should always be capitalized...Scrimgeour, Rufus Minister...if you need help with spelling canon names, type 'Harry Potter Lexicon' in your browser, it helps tremendously!
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  • From Selera on July 03, 2007
    I still enjoy this. Keep it up.
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  • From DracoHarry on July 03, 2007
    I really don't have much to say this time. I do still love this story, I just have nothing to complain about. Plus, there is nothing really that I can compliment. This chapter was just to perfect. And your a/n's explained most everything.
    I did catch everything about TLOTR. I am now reading the books, but I have all the movies and have seen them countless times.
    Well keep up the great work.
    Kat
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  • From on July 02, 2007
    Yay! Nice chapter, but I would have liked a little more Harry and Draco time.
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  • From DracoHarry on July 02, 2007
    thank you for answering my question. That is what I tought also, but I wanted to get someone elses point of view on it. Again, I like this chapter. I do hope that you get some time to update soon though. I do so love reading your work. Keep up the great work.
    Kat
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  • From Selera on July 01, 2007
    This is still wonderful! I don't care if people change certain things.
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  • From ZooArmy on July 01, 2007
    great! I'm eagerly waiting for the next chapter! ^_^
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  • From Vittani on July 01, 2007
    this is really really good. I cant wait to see what happens after harrys inheritance. Please update when you can.
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  • From thrnbrooke on July 01, 2007
    Sooo need chapter 5! Harry brought Draco to his Villa? Nice! Sooo can't wait for shopping in Rome! Are there any physical changes or all magical? Gotta have more!
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