Click Here!

Reviews for Harry Potter and the Demise of Dumbledore

By : mjbari05
  • From DracoHarry on July 01, 2007
    yum!!! that was a tasty cookie. Thank you for ageeing with me. I don't know of many people who would.
    Now to get to the review. I finally realized why no one was trying to take Harry in. He is of maturity. And again, I like Madam Bones too. She is a nice witch, but agian, no one ever thinks to include her in their stories. I do have one small question for you though. Why was the minister trying to take Draco in when that is the aurors' job??? I for one don't see the Minister of Magic wanting to dirty his hands with something so trivial. Even if he is an exauror. To each her own I guess.
    I have one final question. THIS IS FOR ANYONE WHO CAN GIVE ME THE ANSWER. Dose Dumbledore really know that Peter was the secret keeper for the Potters??? or does no one tell him??? (Refering to the books, not this story.) I never thought of that in all the years that I have been a Harry Potter fan.
    Well Keep up the GREAT work and hopefully you update soon.
    Kat
    ps. this is the longest review I have ever written.
    Report Review

  • From rafiq on June 30, 2007
    I love evil Dumbledore stories and this looks to be a good one.
    Report Review

  • From DestinyDragon on June 30, 2007
    I love this story!!! I can't wait to see what Harry does to Dumbledore!!! Please update soon.
    Report Review

  • From dropedonmyhead on June 30, 2007
    I'd like to read this but the scrolling issue is a problem, can you please delete all the (*) at the bottom of the second chapter. :(
    Report Review

  • From xhedwigx on June 30, 2007
    It gets better and better, I love the bit how he has the headmaster gasping for
    water like a fish hilarious
    Report Review

  • From Selera on June 30, 2007
    Yes yes.... I wonder what Dumbledore is going to leak to the prophet about Harry.
    Report Review

  • From thrnbrooke on June 30, 2007
    Oh you blew me away! Dumbledore is out for revenge now. Good thing Harry went to Madame Bones. Not that that will keep whatever lies Dumbledore plans to spread to the Prophet I bet. Soooo need chapter 4!
    Report Review

  • From DracoHarry on June 30, 2007
    That was just wonderful. The only thing I have to complain about is the length, but you warned me before hand: therefore, I can't fault you on it. I am wondering why it is that no one has contacted Dumble-fuck (as you so rightly called him) yet. You would think that everyone would want to turn him in. I do always love Olivander. He is such a nice guy. I wish more people would put him in their fics, but no one seems to think he is worth any mention.
    Why the hell is he going to the Minstry of Magic??? They will seize him on arrival. Won't they??? After all, they do run the papers. Well keep up the Great work and update soon please.
    You'r loyal reader,
    Kat
    Report Review

  • From dracoharry4life on June 29, 2007
    I do so love it when Harry "Takes Charge and Lives Large"! Here's to giving Dumbledufus a dumbledicking!
    Report Review

  • From ScottyToledo on June 29, 2007
    This is getting VERY interesting. I love a TAKE CHARGE!Harry. He wont put up with anyones crap. I can't wait to see how everyone else reacts to the new Harry. Especially Draco, :)
    Report Review

  • From Selera on June 29, 2007
    Oh now this is wonderful. I so can not wait to see what happens at the MoM! I don't care if ideas get reused as long as you make your own uses of them. Their are only so many ideas to use after all.
    Report Review

  • From thrnbrooke on June 29, 2007
    Sooo need chapter 3! I can't wait to see what Harry does at the MoM!
    Report Review

  • From DestinyDragon on June 29, 2007
    I love this story and I can't wait to see what Harry does to Dumbledore!!! Please update again soon!!
    Report Review

  • From amyordinary on June 28, 2007
    I look forward to reading more! Can't wait for chapter two!
    Report Review

  • From xhedwigx on June 27, 2007
    I really like it aye, can't wait for the next chapter.
    Report Review

T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!