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By : Thedarkunicorn

From ElementalDemonessSorceress on December 24, 2007
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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From ANON - gabby1234 on December 16, 2007
This story was truly satisfying the best ever i loved it thanks for the alternate endings i loved ever second of this story
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From ANON - Blood Red Rose705 on August 20, 2007
the alternate ending was pure genius. i enjoyed reading the entire story and i believe it fit with the overall story line better than the original ending.
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From ichiruki on August 20, 2007
I liked both endings, I'm strange like that lol. I like the symbolism in the last bit! Very clever.

On a personal note: sorry to hear he's finally left, I hope you do get frequent and regular e-mail or phone time. I think the hardest parts are the times between contacts because that's when the worry concentrates the strongest like will be this the last time we talk? ect. though I think as significant others and spouses in today's world we have it so much better than our predecessors, I can't imagine snail mail or telegram.

Just tell him (and I say this from experience) if he's updating you every so many days or whatever that if he's going away on a mission or traveling for something to let you know before he goes not to expect word for x days. He can't tell you where he's going obviously but giving a heads up does stifle some of the worry of "I haven't heard from him, usually he'd call or write by now, what's happened are the uniforms coming, am I going to be home one day and see them roll up with the bad news?" Srsly, if I had a dollar for every time I thought that...eventually my DH got the picture when I was like "You can't do that, you need to tell me if it's going to be days or weeks when I hear from you next. You don't have to tell me anything else, quite sure I don't even really want to know, but I do need to know this". Ugh, and later when you hear about what goes on is a whole other story.

If you want you can e-mail me at ichi.ruki@yahoo.com, I don't mind talking about the deployment thing, I actually sought out people I wanted to talk to vs. the family support people, there wasn't enough in common, plus I live in a red state and have a blue state of mind lol. Peeps around these parts think your political opinion and religion factor into your support of the "troops" ick! And can I just say how much I f'ing hate that term "the troops" like their one mindless mass. I care about and support my husband who happens to be a citizen soldier, probably more than anyone else around him, and I'm not a tool of the government to encourage him to cont. his service and not be real with him about shit, if you know what I mean.

That's the other part I hated about the family support thing the line "You're our first line of defense at keeping our soldiers in the military, your support allows them to stay in." etc OMIGOD can anyone point out how many ways this is wrong to say to family? Um, yeah my spouse joined. I, however, did not, so yeah I'm not *anyone's* line of defense for anything and so not a government "tool", I happen to be a wife not a tool let's get that part straight. Sorry ranted a bit there. Pisses me off every time I think about it.

Anyway fanfic is a great way to pass the time (getting back on topic lol). Wish you the best in your next works! I look forward to them.

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From xsexxandxcandyx on August 19, 2007
Wow,
That was amazing !
I mean,
I never really like tragic endings,
But this one was good && it suited the story well.
I liked it very much.
It was so sad though,
But what youu said is true,
That's how war is.
I like the symbolism in this chapter too,
It fits so much.
You've written a great story here,
I'll be sure to read your other stories.

Much Love...
XXX
Xx-.k.a.y.y.-xX
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From xsexxandxcandyx on August 15, 2007
Awe,
That was cute.
I'm so happy she finallyy remembered.
I liked the ending,
It was a bit short though,
But it was sweet && not one of those endings telling youu what happened to them over a ten year span in a little paragraph,
I hate those.
One thing though,
The whole chapter is in bold,
But that's easy to fix.
I hope youu do write an alternate ending,
I really don't want this story to be over.
But whether youu do or not,
It was still an amazingly written story that I reallyy enjoyed reading.
I'm sorryy to hear that your husband had to go fight,
War is so pointless, in my opinion.
Hopefullyy a better candidate will get elected && he'll get to come home sooner.
Hang in there.

Much Love...
XXX
Xx-.k.a.y.y.-xX
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From xsexxandxcandyx on August 03, 2007
This storyy is getting veryy frustrating !
Why can't she rememeber ?
She drank the potion,
So she should remember.
So why doesn't she ?
Gahh !
She better remember soon !
I swear I'm readyy to beat her over the head or somethingg.
Anywayss,
Great chapter.
I hope Hermione forigves Draco,
I mean,
He did what he had to do in order to survive,
&& now he's risking his life to make things right.
She just has to forgive him.
Perhaps she just needs time or something.
But yeahh,
Please update soon !!!

Much Love...
XXX
Xx-.k.a.y.y.-xX
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From ichiruki on August 02, 2007
Loved it! As usual I cannot wait for more!

If you didn't read DH and are perusing the reviews but don't want to be spoiled stop reading right now!

Commencing with thoughts on DH

As for DH, wow, I had a set of predictions I'm suprised they came true. I mean you never can tell, so I even used one of my predictions in my story as part of it deals with Harry's scar. I guess when I was writing my story about having DM and HG "accidentally on purpose" (love that phrase) end up soul bonded I thought about Horxcruces in an more in depth light as I was trying to figure out how to make a soul bonding happen, and by that extension I had a slight epiphany about Harry's scar, only I wasn't sure and then I read DH and was like "oh, yeah, I nailed it that bitch". Plus I thought it was odd at the end of GoF that DD was "triumphant" looking when he discovered that LV used HP's blood to come back and I was like "so is it a life line?" And of course my question is answered in DH. That JKR can sure write! LOL Obviously!

Same for SS and LP, which isn't in my story yet (though I have considered it, I wanted to litter my predictions through out it really though I don't know about now since DH is out) anyways back to SS and LP, I caught something Auntie Petunia said about LP being involved with a strange boy made me think it wasn't JP since LP didn't like him till much later so she had to be childhood friends or involved with someone else. And I had another "moment" which was like hey, she got JP to let SS down and then SS ...what the hell was his motivation to join the order? And then I was like LP if I had to guess, because SS is able to pull of such a duality for both dark and good that it couldn't just be to do good, it had to be doing good to save someone, maybe someone who's saved him before and then the pieces fell into place for me.

Anyways I loved to hear others predictions and if they came true or not. I liked DH except I had high hopes that DM would redeem himself and more or less I was pissed that he was like the more Nazi'd out version of the Swiss, sort of neutral but not stopping the badness either and none of the humanity that was revealed in book 6 about him being deeper than a bully was really flushed out in 7, I was hoping he'd at least try damnit. If anything we saw more about NM and LM when it comes to family. Can't get everything right I guess...and of course while I like the last book, esp when MW gives it to BL, I found it hard getting over some of the deaths, esp. FW, RL and NT-L. Ugh, so heart broken over the scene where FW bites the dust.

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From ANON - Anon on July 30, 2007
...love

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From xsexxandxcandyx on July 16, 2007
Ughh !
Whyy doesn't she remember yett ??
Does he have to do something to make her remember ?
This is too confusing !
So not fun.
I can't wait til the final book comes out,
Near where I live,
They're having a huge partyy for it meant to be like the Yule Ball,
I can't wait,
It's goingg to be soo fun :)
Can't wait for your update !
Have fun in Oklahoma (I probably spelt that wrong)
Please PLEASE,
Update as soon as youu can !

Much Love...
XXX
Xx-.k.a.y.y.-xX
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From ichiruki on July 16, 2007
squee! love it, wondering of course how this is going down, but yea!!! another chance!

How funny you mention about taking off soon, I'm flying out, not to Japan though, which is where I would pick! The love affair I have with that country, eh it probably borders obsession now...anyways with you on the procrastinating, I'm making my to-do list for everything that needs to be done today so I can just pick up and go tomorrow! Though I plan to update today lol. I've had my last chapter sitting on this computer for a while I just need to stick it up so I can feel ready to get a jump on the day.

Have a safe trip and loads of fun!
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From bananasforyou on July 16, 2007
this chapter was great and i saw the movie i think youll totally love it!!
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From Totalbrat on July 15, 2007
This story is great. I'm new to the site (I'm used to fanfiction.net) and yours is the first story I've read. It is great so far, and I can't wait for the next chapter. Please update soon!
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From bananasforyou on July 14, 2007
awe i love this story and wished it wont end.:(
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From xsexxandxcandyx on July 13, 2007
Awe,
Whyy doesn't Hermione remember Draco ?
She should by now.
I really hope he can fix everything without destroying the future,
I so badly want this story to have a happy ending.
Great two chapters though.
I don't want it to end :(
I hope Hermione remembers Draco soon so they can get to making their baby.
Please update soon !

Much Love...
XXX
Xx-.k.a.y.y.-xX
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