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By : Thedarkunicorn
  • From KittuPaladin on July 02, 2007
    Yay an update. Hm I wonder who the secret keeper was...
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  • From ichiruki on July 02, 2007
    Well of course you know what I'm going to say "more please"! lol!

    Fleur getting off'ed was a shocker. But the poison in all those vials that was an awesome twist!

    How you update so quickly is beyond me, lol, but I like it! On edge of seat waiting for more.
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  • From KittuPaladin on July 02, 2007
    Niiiice. Mail me when you update please?
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  • From ichiruki on July 02, 2007
    Eeekkk! I wonder if he has any clue it's Hermione. There was a line in there that caught my attention. :)

    Great chapter, surprised with the vast ring-o-evil, Draco's been a busy boy.
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  • From angelnomiko on July 02, 2007
    wow .. so that is who is was ans why she did it ... please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

    angel
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  • From ichiruki on July 02, 2007
    Thanks for the explanation!

    I'm really curious as to where D and H will be going. Original location for the Horcrux sounds good despite recent events, creepy Inferi could be hanging out there or in catacombs in Rome or elsewhere a some might exist in Europe. I considered them zombies but hp lexicon says "animated corpses", didn't say if they ate people! Bleh, I loath zombies, something about the mindlessness consumption and depiction of being a horde (although stupid) of mindless destruction, never just one or two like you think at first. They're like roaches, you see one or two and you know you have an infestation (lol). Creeps me the hell out.

    I'm sorry to hear about your husband leaving, mine was away for 15 months as well. "Sucked" doesn't even cover it, at least he came home in overall good condition, but he's not the same obviously, and neither am I really. You can't really live everyday for 15 months or so wondering is today the day I get the bad news, or in his case actually die. I mean eventually it fades into the background losing ground to everyday events and the attitude adopted is like "well there is nothing I can do but try to live as I normally do" or in his case do his best to stay alive, but I won't lie every time I clicked on my online news every bombing attack etc in Baghdad had my attention. Anyway, right there with you on the senselessness of it all. Hang in there!


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  • From Kilalla on July 01, 2007
    lol i totally knew it was fluer!!!!! are the blackmailing her to get Bill the meds he needs??? that sucks lol

    kepp updateing!!
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  • From ichiruki on July 01, 2007
    Interesting chapter! I think I had more questions than answers. But maybe they have to do more with motivations or some kind of character insight? Like Hermione bleaching her hair and then using a spell to stop the roots from growing, was this because she knew she might get captured and be without her wand? Did she think a glamour charm would wear off (sort of like polyjuice) or that her captors would try to break any? It still leaves me wondering about her eyes, and facial features.

    I guess the magic thing with Draco had me wondering the same thing, he killed with curses and potions, but used a machete...I guess he needed a more tangible connection to that death? Anyways it was interesting!

    I guessed Fleur from the exchange in the alley, and you wrote that Harry was suspicious of her. I wouldn't be surprised if Molly was under the imperious!
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  • From xsexxandxcandyx on July 01, 2007
    Very nice little sex scene in there.
    I hope Draco will come back okay,
    I really feel bad for him.
    His poor mother too,
    She did nothing && the Death Eaters raped && killed her.
    War is such a stupid thing, at least that's what I think.
    I like the scene with the two of them flying too,
    It was a good idea to show how they are without war && hate surrounding them.
    Anywayss,
    I'm going away for a few days,
    So please, PLEASE have a new chapter ready for me when I get back :)

    Much Love...
    XXX
    Xx-.k.a.y.y.-xX
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  • From ichiruki on June 29, 2007
    @ ch6 now I'm curious as to whether she'll go or stay!
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  • From nymphbot on June 29, 2007
    just go to your panel
    click edit story
    then select your story, select edit details
    and then just edit the story summary, you can just delete beast from there
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  • From nymphbot on June 29, 2007
    this story has a good amount of darkness, but i like the small amounts of sweetness which show through
    its a good balance.

    i really hope hermione will stick with draco, because he needs her
    and i cannot wait for the day he finds out its her

    and that was a very nice kiss, i really felt like you could feel some of the pain he was feeling
    that he was pouring into her
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  • From Kilalla on June 29, 2007
    that was really good!!!!!! So good!!!
    I really like where this story is headings, it snot predictabel at all, irs very unique!

    GET IT! lol

    can't wait for your next installment
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  • From ichiruki on June 29, 2007
    @ ch5! You've got me hooked! I liked the imagery a lot and their little verbal exchange before entering the manor. Can't wait to find out happens next! I'm holding in my squee for the Hermione reveals herself chapter or Harry/Ron discover what the hell happened and who's responsible for it all chapter! ...I mean it seems like all hell will break loose, dead sister/wife and best friend gone on the lam with her murderer...darkness ahoy. XD
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  • From Gryffindorclutz on June 28, 2007
    I cannot tell you how phenomenally wonderful this story is! You have e checking the site every ten minutes just to look for an update!
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