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Reviews for Prisoners of Love - A Mystery - COMPLETE

By : LaBibliographe
  • From dynonugget on November 08, 2007
    Most excellent! I've been away from the computer for about a week, and what joy and happiness await me but several updates from you! Yay!!

    Love the smut, of course, and I am so going to try that body paint!

    Very interesting how both Lucius and Hermione think the other one only tolerates them, their own inadequacies feeding their fears. Just one honest and frank conversation would alleviate so much.

    Think Severus knows a bit more about Lucius & Hermione's relationship than we know just yet, am I right? He's such a mystery (and a potentially delicious one at that!)

    Great job. You're writing is fantastic, as always.
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  • From Damiana on November 08, 2007
    *holds on to her bowl of popped corn*

    Yay! Chapter 35!

    *clutches it* Oooh! Promises of smut! :D

    Uhoh...-->"Lucuis was becoming drugged by the unusual, erotic sensation both viscerally and visually." Inverted letters alert!

    "Sweet Guinevere, those Muggles were incredibly inventive about the important things in life." We are! hehehe. I like how You change it up by not always using Merlin as the exclamation of choice. I wonder if most people woud get the references and the implications if you were to stray from the usual array of Round Table references. I think that Ninive would be a good one. Um...never mind. I know entirely too much about the Arthurian tradition. Moving on.

    Oh...maybe they should have a yellow paint...it could be lemon flavoured.

    *puts down the popcorn and reaches for a paintbrush* I've been deviated from my projectiles now. Thanks!




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  • From soldiersgirl0709 on November 08, 2007
    Now I see why you thought the mint soap was so funny! Tingling testicles indeed LOL

    Mint/Licorice flavored Lucius......I could do him...that....:)

    Poor Lucius, that 6 week postpartum nookie ban is hell isnt it? I do like the image of a trussed up Lucius though.


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    Ever read Jaci Burton? She writes pretty awesome bondage......sexy, kinky, always hot hot hot.
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  • From ladydeathfaerie on November 08, 2007
    another wonderfully written chapter, my
    dear. you never fail to inspire. i love
    the idea that Ginny would venture off
    into Muggle London, into a sex shop, to
    buy edible body paint. and that she would
    have the foresight to purchase some for
    Hermione to use on Lucius.

    it makes me want to write a smut scene myself.

    hmmmm. perhaps i should start working on that
    little bunny i told you about. even though i
    have more than enough to work on. never enough
    stuff on my plate.

    i'll let you know when i get it going.

    *hugs*

    ~blessings~
    ldf
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  • From Heidi191976 on November 08, 2007
    Excellent chapter. I can't believe that Ginny is that wicked to get Hermione to try what she did, but I love how shocked Lucius was when she began to lick the paint off. I can't wait to read more soon.
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  • From chickaboo on November 08, 2007
    Fantastic update! Can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - Bri-Ana on November 08, 2007
    who knew art could be so yummy? ;-) looking forward to some issues being resolved between Lucius and Hermione, however when will we find out who is trying to set them both up (i'm pretty sure it hasn't been said yet, however if i missed it then it must have been cause i was caught up in Lucius' art lesson) Can't wait to read more!!
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  • From ANON - pittwitch on November 08, 2007
    Ah the power and passion behind the brush strokes ... one can feel the artist's desire beyond the surface, to be or have such a canvas.
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  • From sheherazade on November 08, 2007
    Ah, that was deee-licious. I love licorice as well (though I can imagine mint might be a bit eyewatering), and that sounds like the perfect way to sample it. (ROFL, I've got the morning news on, and would you believe they're doing a feature about the licorice plant *Twilight Zone music*.) Lucius in the throes of passion - but restrained - is just such a haunting image. Think it'll be haunting me all day now.

    Thanks for hanging back on describing Ginny's plans too fully! And Lucius is a talker during sex...mmmm...I like that. The correct use of the voice is so important.

    Thanks for some fabulous frisk to keep us buoyant before waves of skulduggery buffet us xx.
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  • From ANON - Shetan on November 08, 2007
    I am enjoying this story very much especially with your drawing of Lucius/Hermione & Snape.
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  • From ANON - Lil Princess on November 08, 2007
    ... Ok you catch me I'm a Lurker, I do love your story I was so worried for poor Lucius, I wonder if Hermione Knows that she's pregnat ...because Im pretty sure she is ... and if she dosen't know ginny knows of that Im sure. soo keep the writting I love this story, and I think is wonderfull that you are working on it I hate when a Story is unfinished I can't help to think that the characters are frozen waiting for the authors to come back!!
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  • From Malfoysgirl on November 08, 2007
    Wow great job girl! Please add more!
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  • From lilbitbord on November 07, 2007
    I'm going to start to sound like a broken record, but I just now got caught up from last time. Everytime I think things are slowing down they pick right back up! I guess it's a good thing. I did however have to skim the four chapters I was behind them. I think I will have to reread this story after you complete because I think I am missing some of the details. So far I love the emotional and mental peroblems that Hermione and Lucius are going through. I wish I had more witty things to say but right now I am running on empty. Apparently not only is my writting block effecting my stories but also my reviewing :)
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  • From blueartemis on November 05, 2007
    I believe that was my favorite chapter. (Well, it would have been better with some sex, but still). I like the small look into Lucius, and I like Severus in your story. I think he can be a good father, I really do.
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  • From misssweetsweet on November 05, 2007
    Lucius is becoming more and more sweet as the story goes on, yet he somehow manages to retain that inherent danger he has and evoke a great amount of wariness from those around him. The Lucius I'm seeing in this story is quickly becoming my favorite interpretation of Lucius that I have read in fanfiction. I just hope he and Hermione get over their reluctance to tell one another how they feel soon. It would make life for the both of them far easier than it has been. As usual, I enjoyed this chapter and I look forward to the next.
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