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Reviews for Prisoners of Love - A Mystery - COMPLETE

By : LaBibliographe
  • From Damiana on November 05, 2007
    chapter 34

    You know...it's funny that Lucius never struck me as the anxiety attack type...but now that you've protrayed him in his sleepless nights, I expect that such a tightly wound man might be prone to such things. Where does all that stress go?!

    The plot thickens! When will each accept that the other is in love! Dammit! I'll be throwing popcorn at my screen soon...Yay!
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  • From Scarybearhair on November 05, 2007
    Ah poor Hermione and Lucius. They should practice Legilimency on each other so they could see how much they love each other. Again I think you do an excellent job explaining all their insecurities and emotions.

    I have to laugh, so while Snape is not very forthcoming about his own life, he doesn
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  • From ladyravenna on November 04, 2007
    I think I did forget that I read in the last chapter about Lucius wanting to preserve his Pureblood line in his halfblood son through a name similar to his own.

    I am amusing myself with an image of Lucius really as a blond fairy godmother, and it's coming out pretty interesting in my mind. But alas, I have no art skills to put the image on paper.
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  • From soldiersgirl0709 on November 04, 2007
    Could so fall in love with the image of Lucius laying on the sofa with a pretty little blonde haired blue eyed baby nestled into his chest.



    Oh, and since you asked when you reviewed...my first romance novel will come out in print in June of 2008 from Bantam Dell. As of right now it is titled "Loves Illusion" though that was not my title, they changed it. It will be released under R.A.Cooney...the second is still in editing and you know me, it will be there awhile LOL...so if you like romances, let me know, I get ARCs in Feb sometime, Ill be happy to send you a copy. :)

    Rhonda
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  • From ladydeathfaerie on November 04, 2007
    i do so love how you've portrayed Lucius as being
    concerned about his family. i'd always thought that
    he was so much more than the person we were shown
    in the movies and books. since it was all from Harry's
    perspective, we only saw what he saw. i've always
    thought that he was much more loving toward his
    family then we were allowed to see.

    which is why i wrote my own fic to that end.

    so i love to see that there are others who believe
    him capable of being a loving husband, a good
    father and still can be a huge asshole in the
    process. brava, my dear. i can't wait for the
    next chapter and i can't wait to find out how
    the two of them reconcile themselves.

    *hugs*

    ~blessings~
    ldf

    ps: check your mail box for a private email from
    me.
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  • From Heidi191976 on November 04, 2007
    Excellent. I like how Severus told Hermione things that Lucius didn't tell her. I am glad that Lucius wants to spend time with his son and I hope that Hermione can come to love Lucius more now. Please update again soon. I look forward to reading more.
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  • From catysmom1028 on November 04, 2007
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From Malfoysgirl on November 04, 2007
    Great chapter! Please add more soon!
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  • From DB1 on November 04, 2007
    @34. aww i like seeing lucius as a family man. great chapter update soon

    *DB*
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  • From sheherazade on November 04, 2007
    Yes, I think Lucius would be terrifically interested in his children, given the chance - but I'm guessing the Purebloods are a bit like the pre-war British aristocracy, who cultivated distance from their offspring, hiring staff to look after them from birth, then sending them away to school from the age of 8 or 9. Narcissa might have been happy with that, but Hermione definitely won't be! I reckon Lucien will have a happier childhood than Draco (as long as his parents can get along).

    Great insights into Lucius' and Hermione's frames of mind regarding the status quo of their relationship. Lucius is just going to have to bite the bullet and accept that he can't change his bond with Hermione - it's there, and that's all there is to it, humiliating as he might think it. As for Hermione, she is going to have to try and change Lucius' habitat from his cloth of gold jungle (loved that image) to something more domestic! Jungles are no place for babies!

    And of course I'm delighted that life is good for our Sev. So it bloody well should be! Lovely work...but I'm getting a bit worried that the evil plot must be coming back into play soon. Eek!
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  • From blueartemis on November 02, 2007
    That was interesting, and hot. And to completely change tone, it must be nice to have enought money to have your own birthing room.
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  • From Citten on November 02, 2007
    well sweety i believe you that hermione made you do it and i dont blame you we women-you just never know! ;) i love severus but i really dont care that you dont write about his love intrest. i love that lucius was present and i love the reaction best of all for babies are truely maricals in the making. well do up date soon and let us see what happens to our little family. :)
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  • From DB1 on November 02, 2007
    @33 aww sweet chapter, update soon

    *DB*
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  • From Severusluciusallthebadboys on November 02, 2007
    I've been reading this since near the beginning, but I only recently got an account and started writing. hence the late review. Unfortunately school (which seems to think it's more important than fanfic for some reason) got in the way, and while I would drop everything to read earlier chapters, the effect wasn't quite the same in the later chapters. When I have more time I might read them again, maybe I just didn't give them a decent chance, you are a brilliant writer, and most fics that I like often turn out to be written by you.
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  • From Scarybearhair on November 02, 2007
    Hahaha -- Danger Danger Will Robinson +++++++++++++ kinky smut on the way!!! Like I could even think of skipping that. I mean please! It
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