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Reviews for Prisoners of Love - A Mystery - COMPLETE

By : LaBibliographe
  • From ANON - Anon on November 01, 2007
    update soon!
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  • From cynsharry on November 01, 2007
    very good , i would like more of lucious and hermione stories
    one of the very best stories i ever read.
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  • From soldiersgirl0709 on November 01, 2007
    Well, I am bad about reviewing by chapter, so sorry bout that...I am a mite flaky these days. Your description of Her maternity gown at the party made me smile, I have something similar I wore to an Army ball with my first baby.

    I always imagine what it would be like to enter the Malfoy estate for the first time and discover all the nooks and crannies....do you think it possible to do so in a single lifetime?


    Dammit! I wanna spank and bugger Lucius with a..."wand".....but I dont have the balls LOL....I think maybe I have a slightly submissive nature **blushing**.....but if he were to order me to....or better yet if Snape were to order me to...


    Baby names....they came to an agreement pretty easily. I wasnt so lucky, my hubby had a jerky comment for everything I liked....Bailey...no, beatle baily. Jasper? No, Jasper the friendly ghost.....so I ended up with a biblical first born son and a second named after Star Wars......the third was a girl with a very girlie name. :) Would still have liked something sort of exotic, Damian or Sebastian....ah well.


    Sweet, a baby boy!! Cant wait to see if Lucius will actually attend to nappy duty or not....and of course to see Draco's response to his new sibling.


    Blessings!
    Rhonda
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  • From ladyravenna on November 01, 2007
    From argument over names to kinky sex, and then birthing, you put a lot into this chapter. It was a fun roller coaster ride, nice and smooth. I was wondering though, why doesn't Lucius suggest his new son's name as something similar to Draco's name? Then again he is a vain peacock, so having a son named similarly to his own makes him happy I suppose.
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  • From ANON - pittwitch on November 01, 2007
    Definitely more and more Slytherin tendencies in our dear Hermione.
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  • From Damiana on November 01, 2007
    Chap. 33

    Woo! A new chapter is up! *does a little dance*

    Wow...so I love the kinky lemon. It was very cute to see Lucius blushing about his own toy. He is always so confident about matters of the bedroom...I don't think that his squirming took anything away. It merely revealed how little he wants to show of his own vulnerabilities and emotions. Hermione now has more solid ground upon which to stand. Of course, the fact that at this point he trusts her to tie him up without prior knowledge of her intentions speaks volumes about the evolution of their relationship. Hehehe. Emotional development through kink.

    I also quite enjoyed the birthing scene. I don't see it as entirely incongruous to pair the two. I don't know what the doctors say elsewhere but I've heard many times of using sexual relations as a means of inducing a birth. I expect that the kinky stuff might have to be toned down but intercourse is never prohibited (unless the pregnancy required complete bed rest...then I can imagine that it might not be so advisable) and is even encouraged around the due date!

    Good chapter. :)


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  • From ladydeathfaerie on November 01, 2007
    why didn't you tell us we needed some chocolate
    or popcorn or something for that lovely bit of
    kinkiness? damn it, where's my man?

    oh wait. i don't have one.

    oh well. it was another excellent chapter. i do
    so love to see a deviant side to both of them,
    though its gratifying to know that my thoughts
    about Lucius were dead on. domineering, controlling
    and filled with a kinky side that simply can't be
    contained or held back.

    and a boy. Lucius must be so proud. will Draco be
    pleased to have a sibling? will he not care? here's
    hoping that he will accept his brother with grace
    and style.
    hopefully, Lucius will be able to go through with
    his plans to clear the air. i think they both need
    to take care of those problems that do nothing but
    hold them back from having a truly amazing
    relationship.

    oh yeah... and get rid of the trouble makers. that'll
    be a big help.

    thanks for sharing and i look forward to more.

    *hugs*

    ~blessings~
    ldf
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  • From Heidi191976 on November 01, 2007
    Excellent. I love the name they chose for their son. I can't wait to read more. Please update again soon.
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  • From Malfoysgirl on November 01, 2007
    Awesome Chapter. Great job! Please add more
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  • From sheherazade on November 01, 2007
    *Crawls out from beneath Snape across the cellar floor - yay for cushioning charms*

    No, Lucius, we certainly would NOT buy that story about the ivory penis being purely ornamental, ha ha ha. Super-hot smuttiness there, even at Hermione's advanced state of pregnancy. Isn't she the creative one? (Actually, no, that'd be you.) Whoa, is about all I can say (and look, I spelled it right too).

    I prefer Lucien to Henry, but Lucien Henri is a nice compromise. Are they going to pronounce it in OTT French accents? I quite like the idea of Snape with a foxy French Potions mistress. I wish them both well (though I don't suppose she realises he's in the cellar with me right now).

    And Congratulations to the new parents. A lovely intimate birth scene; Lucius is a sweetie really. Awww.
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  • From chickaboo on November 01, 2007
    YAY! They had the baby! Can't wait to see what happens next!
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  • From ffpoisongirl on November 01, 2007
    Aw, looks like Lucius has to make the first move! Well, I'm glad things will be progressing between the two, and that the child was delivered safely. I imagine Lucius will be skirting nappy duty whenever possible.

    Same old stuff to say, good work, can't think of a damn thing to change. Way to make me feel inadequate as a critic.
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  • From misssweetsweet on October 30, 2007
    Very nice chapter, but why do I feel something is about to happen to, yet again, challenge the momentary serenity of their relationship? I enjoyed this chapter. I look forward to the next.
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  • From blueartemis on October 29, 2007
    OK, I would totally have cried if someone did something like that for me. I thought it was really sweet of Lucius. I'm quite sure that there is something underlying it, but for the moment, it is sweet.
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  • From Citten on October 29, 2007
    i really enjoyed that chapter and i am so looking forward to seeing more of the mansion, you dont have to show all of it but some of the rooms i would LOVE to see (well read about) and i so-so want to see what and where the nursery will be! please don't go to fast now if you can help it!!! :) well i was not really for you to stop it there you HURRY UP AND UPDATE WILL YA? :)
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