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Reviews for Prisoners of Love - A Mystery - COMPLETE

By : LaBibliographe
  • From Utopia on October 29, 2007
    Just an aside...

    I really want Lucius to get down on one knee with something that sparkles and ask properly for her to marry him - because of the right reasons (ie. their minds are bonded and perhaps their souls too, and he really does love her), not because initially it was an excuse to keep her safe from amorous guards; and secondly because she was expecting and he couldn't get it up!

    He has well and truly messed up with her, perhaps this would smooth over the issues - especially is he bears his soul to her and is brutally honest with himself.

    (hmm... don't mind me, still in the fog of 'OMG! I'm getting married' after my boyfriend proposed to me two days ago! Hang on.. he isn't my boyfriend anymore,is he? He's my fience! Anyway... I'm like a dog with two tails and in my happy-fogged mind that's the solution to their problem.)

    Right. Must. Concentrate. On. University. Work. Not. Spend. All. Day. Grinning.
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  • From Scarybearhair on October 29, 2007
    Yes
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  • From ladyravenna on October 28, 2007
    I find it sort of amusing that most of this chapter was a description of the Manor. But I love how Lucius has accomodated Hermione's needs.
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  • From ladydeathfaerie on October 28, 2007
    oooo, i can have my own rooms? that's great.
    oh.... wait.... Lucius is married. bugger. that
    will never do. i guess i shall have to inhabit his
    mansion in my own fics.

    i was pleased to see this update and very much loved
    that Lucius has made certain accomodations for his
    wife. even if it is to gain him some favor from his
    head strong wife. i'm pleased that the walls were not
    done in red, but in ivory. it goes so well with the red
    and gold.

    again, thank you for sharing and i'm always left
    wanting more.

    ~blessings~
    ldf
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  • From dynonugget on October 28, 2007
    Like the chapter very much, and it's nice to see Lucius being KIND. What a thought!
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  • From dynonugget on October 28, 2007
    I'll be more than happy to give you chocolates, jewelry and what all if I can borrow Lucius for just one hour. Whew!

    Great progress, glad the dance went exactly like it did. He sure showed everyone he was serious about his wife, and they'd better be too. Nicely done.
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  • From catysmom1028 on October 28, 2007
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From Heidi191976 on October 28, 2007
    Another great chapter. I am glad that Hermione finally moved in with Lucius. I can't wait to read more. Please update again soon.
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  • From ANON - pittwitch on October 28, 2007
    LOL back at ya, the injection comment is my mom's. She's fond of telling people that how she became polish ;).

    Now that Hermione is in the Manor, is Lucius going to meet the SPEW queen? Thanks for sharing, Pitt.
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  • From DB1 on October 28, 2007
    @32. that was so sweet of lucius to make the changes to his house for her...update soon

    *DB*
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  • From sheherazade on October 28, 2007
    Very sumptuous; I'll take the cellar. I bet Lucius has got a few interesting items down there.

    I'm very glad Hermione didn't choose to quibble over not being given the choice whether to sleep with Lucius or not...I think that might *just* have stretched a few readers' tolerance levels beyond reasonable bounds. It's so much fun that he's so hopelessly addicted - his reaction to her perfume is great. Though perhaps he might not want her spraying it around at a formal dinner.

    Mind you, I have to admit, the size of the house could be a bit of a worry - plenty of hiding places and trapping corners for dastardly wrong-doers. Hope they can't get in...

    A marvellous chapter; reminded me of taking a tour round a stately home (one of my favourite pastimes).
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  • From ANON - JW on October 28, 2007
    Ch 29-32 - I think Lucius is doing a very fine job of trying, and wish Hermione would cut him a bit more slack instead of jumping to conclusions about him not offering her the choice of her own bedroom, etc. She's as imperfect as he is. I'm glad Lila is out of the picture, but wonder if Lila's father and other purebloods will think Hermione (and Lucius) are being gullible in forgiving Lila and Archie so easily. Here's hoping the baby is born easily and safely! Thanks for the new chapters. (PS - I like green and white/silver. Red and gold are rather bright and strong.)
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  • From chickaboo on October 28, 2007
    While you get a thrill with each new review I get a thrill with each new chapter. So come on darlin'....I've thrilled you, thrill me back....lol Sorry, I'm in a bit of a mood tonight. Fantastic update, can't wait for the next one!
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  • From ANON - lonne2 on October 28, 2007
    I don't like your chapters. I L O V E your chapters!
    and I would like more... lots more!

    Can't wait to the baby comes!


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  • From blueartemis on October 26, 2007
    I'm glad Otto found the problem with the carriage. And I love how Hermione read Lucius the riot act. It was cute. I'm enjoying thier interactions immensely.
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