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Reviews for Prisoners of Love - A Mystery - COMPLETE

By : LaBibliographe
  • From LeahLove08 on October 18, 2007
    Oh! Their baby better end up okay! Or I shall cry! *sniffles* Great chapter though... Lucius did deserve that pinch!
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  • From ANON - Cyn on October 18, 2007
    I really love your story. The plot is wonderful with its twists and lemons galore. I love this pairing so much more because of your story. Your writing is very captivating and I just couldn't get enough of it. I hope you update soon ^_^
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  • From sheherazade on October 18, 2007
    Oh my GOD, that was bliss. Gorgeous, sensual, hot, delicious...*runs off to find thesaurus*.

    I want to see Lucius smile his 'slightly vulpine' smile. I loved his Lord of the Manor schtick when he was persuading (er, commanding) Hermione to go to the ball. And the whole possessive thing...thinking his fellow Slytherins are going to obsess over her hair LOL.

    Wonderful lemon, need I add? And you're doing a Ball scene next! I know I'm going to be drowning in your opulent prose and I'm getting my aqualung sorted NOW. Simply divine, my dear.
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  • From scotsgirl on October 17, 2007
    loved both chapter and now i will wait for another update
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  • From catysmom1028 on October 16, 2007
    I like it. Please update soon.
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  • From soldiersgirl0709 on October 16, 2007
    Hermione is an angel compared to me when I was pregnant, no way in hell would i have offered my husband my food! LOL....if he complained I would have taken his too and happily eaten all of it!! But it is sweet that he is concerned for the welfare of his little one...who can resist a man interested in his children....not me.
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  • From Severusluciusallthebadboys on October 16, 2007
    This has been one of my favourite fics for a while, but I have to admit that after they got out of azkaban I got a little bored... I think it's just a personal thing, nothing against your writing, and I loved the beginning.
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  • From blueartemis on October 15, 2007
    I like the mental image of a naked Lucius on a bed of green sheets. Very sexy. Anyway, I think he is improving, but dropping a bombshell about a dinner dance is not a good idea.
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  • From chelleybelle on October 15, 2007
    i think that you should send them to the mansion...i can't wait to see how hermione is going to react to that...great chapter...
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  • From Citten on October 15, 2007
    well i enjoyed that. poor lucius that man is just so slow on the horemone issue, but hopefully he is learning that. well one thing that will be intresting when they move into the manor is the scheduling of meals with more than one coruse. (personally i thing we are fools to have lost that along the way i rather like going to some resterants that do that and i enjoy it.) i also have one request that you write the confersation where lucius tells hermione that they have the dinner-dance thing. because face it will be worth it!! :)
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  • From ginnyginny on October 15, 2007
    well, lucius is making some attempts... the roses were a nice touch. knowing that hermione's hormones were out of wack makes one believe that he really does care about her, enough to be able to read her well. but, lucius never does anything that doesn't give him something in return... always the clever slytherin. although, i feel bad for him for dumping the dance on hermione like that. what hugely pregnant woman wants to dress up and flaunt herself in front of others? especially when they are his snarky, pureblooded, bigot friends?

    i'm still curious to know who is trying to set her up.
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  • From misssweetsweet on October 15, 2007
    Lucius is just begging for Hermione to hurt him, isn't he? *shakes head sadly* Oh, well! Hopefully, Hermione's hormones decide to take it easy on him this time. I enjoyed reading this chapter. I look forward to the next.
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  • From ANON - Hinansho on October 15, 2007
    I just wanted to say how much I am enjoying this story! The interaction between Hermione and Lucius are wonderful and I love how you have characterized Lucius. The thing I can't wait to see is some interaction between the two of them and Draco. that will be interesting. Can't wait for the next update.
    -Hinansho-
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  • From Malfoysgirl on October 15, 2007
    Wow great chapter! Please add more!
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  • From sheherazade on October 15, 2007
    Ah, I thought Lucius was going to be an ass over the soup - only ONE course!! - but he ended up being rather sweet. I think marmalade should be one of the major food groups though.

    That was a lovely little pre-prandial taster though...I don't think tears would be in my eyes if Lucius were lying on my bed covered in rose petals...heh heh. Those are some powerful hormones she's got going on. You write their physical longing for each other so vividly; it makes me sigh.

    Delicious (not just the marmalade) xx.
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