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Reviews for Prisoners of Love - A Mystery - COMPLETE

By : LaBibliographe
  • From ANON - Anon on September 17, 2007
    I enjoyed the toaster scene. I had a good laugh. Update soon.

    Lady Serpentina

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  • From Clare1984 on September 17, 2007
    who wouldn't have him for a houseboy? mmm, Lucius in just an apron wandering round the house at my beck and call ...

    sorry, drifted away there! another fantastic chapter and I would love to know where that hand is heading! I know, I'm a sucker for the smut! woah, that sounded weird!

    post more soon please!
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  • From scotsgirl on September 17, 2007
    loved the chapter looking forward to the next update
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  • From Citten on September 17, 2007
    but of course you would want lucius for your busboy (and face it if you didnt then there is something very wrong.) ;) well i so do want to read more of what dear hermoione will do to 'poor' lucius. hey question i dont know what you have planned but i would love to see lucius take hermoione on a shopping spree-and buy her all kinds of cloths(especally maternaty stuff-both wizard and muggle)it would be lots of fun! also i would love to see hermione do the womanly touch to lucius' manor home and do just that make it home to both of them and the baby too-besides she will be moving in after the baby i would want to make it......well perfect. :) just something i would like to see, but as always it is your story and up to you! hope to read more and SOON!!
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  • From ANON - doodle on September 17, 2007
    Sorry for my ignorance(sp?) but what is a "tryo"?
    Thanks for the great way to spend time when I should be grading papers!
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  • From ladyravenna on September 17, 2007
    Lucius trying to use a toaster...lol That was hilarious. And the small, cute pancakes is so Lucius. The whole kitchen scene made their relationship seem so real, even though there are so many barriers to cross for them.

    One sentenced did sound a bit awkward to me. "Lucius was born with a silver spoon in his mouth, but he had his full allotment of brains." I think it would be better as "Lucius may have been born with a silver spoon in his mouth, but ..." I think it sounded weird because you started with the past tense, but then your dependent sentence tense changes. I am horrible at explaining grammar with technical terms, so I hope you understand what I am trying to say. LOL.
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  • From Heidi191976 on September 17, 2007
    Still excellent. I love how he ruined the toaster, it was funny. I can't wait to read more. Please continue.
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  • From Kaley on September 17, 2007
    Another great chapter.
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  • From Scarybearhair on September 17, 2007
    What? No pink apron? But Lucius would look so yummy, especially if he wasn
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  • From misslala on September 16, 2007
    Oh, I am eager to see this!!! haha. Hrm... so does Hermione still love him? Or rather, is she still in love, even though he deserted her for so long? And why in the hell does she want to roam in his social circles!!!? LOL Is she mad?!


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  • From Malfoysgirl on September 16, 2007
    Awesome job! Loved this chapter! Please add more!
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  • From catysmom1028 on September 16, 2007
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From soldiersgirl0709 on September 16, 2007
    I must thank you for the lovely review you left for Come and Play. I will admit that I have been slightly addicted to Prisoners of Love since you posted it, and did a little happy dance when I saw that you had updated. I find your perfectionism and attention to detail admirable, my editor would love you as I happen to be a burr in her saddle more often than not. I love to tell the tale, but do not pay the kind of attention I should to grammer and such, luckily for me she does and sends back my manuscripts looking as though someone were in fact murdered with pages in hands. She likes her red pens(*smirks*) Fortunately in my working world, nothing gets printed with errors, but alas, the poor readers of my fan fics get to see just how dependant upon Word I am to edit things...any how, thank you again, and please, keep up the good work, I can not wait to read about the birth, I get the feeling when Draco came along, he was probably somewhere else....would love to see him faced with a wife in labor LOL
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  • From ANON - julie on September 16, 2007
    i loved it.
    Will there be an additional twists to the plot, or is it going to settle down/end soon?
    not that i want it to! i'm just curious.
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  • From sentineljandb2 on September 16, 2007
    I am so glad you updated! I am taking my crystal ball out:

    I think Harry would not be happy, and will suspect Lucius of seducing Hermione. He still thinks of Hermione as an innocent friend. That is why he could not see her having sex with Lucius, or being pregnant by him. Harry will be in denial and not accept that Hermione loves Lucius.

    For starters Harry probably accuses Lucius of seducing Hermione to get her to help free him, only going back to her because of the baby aka Malfoy heir. It will take a lot to convince him that it
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