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Reviews for Prisoners of Love - A Mystery - COMPLETE

By : LaBibliographe
  • From ANON - Julia on September 16, 2007
    I just read your entire story in a matter of hours.
    I LOVED IT. The characters are very much in character, the plot is advancing at a nice rate, and the plot itself it interesting/new.

    Please update soon!!
    Julia
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  • From ANON - blue artemis on September 16, 2007
    I think Harry should stay a side character. Even if he is angry. Or his anger could piss off his wife, and he ends up having to deal with it.

    I can't wait to see what happens when these two realize their hearts are already involved.
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  • From magiknight on September 16, 2007
    I'm really enjoying the story uopdate soon and often! In response to how Harry would react, I was wondering if maybe the two villians might fan the flames a bit? Something like trying to incite Harry's hot headedness and get him to do some of their dirty work for them. With him already doing the whole passive aggressive thing they would probably just need a few well placed and subtle comments to the right gossipy types.
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  • From willowgirl on September 14, 2007
    Well I'm happy that Lucius can play hide the wand again. I think we all missed that game when they were apart. I know I have.
    As for Harry, maybe you could play him as a friend that is a little too over protective. Maybe he is realizing that he has always loved Hermione, now that he can't have her? Yes, he is married to Ginny and loves his wife. Maybe he just always hoped Hermione wouldn't find a wizard to love so he would be the only wizard in her life. Ok, ok thats all I have to say. I can't wait to find out what happens next.
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  • From Scarybearhair on September 14, 2007
    Wow, Hermione
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  • From Citten on September 14, 2007
    well harry is yours to control in this story-regardless of how he is written or protrays in the movies. but remember he maybe somewhat hot-tempered at times in the end he does learn to accept things. as for the rest well it is about time! ;) well i do look forward to how lucius will iron things out even it takes awhile. do update soon now if you please!
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  • From ANON - equinox on September 14, 2007
    Well, as for Harry it would probably be good for him to be an 'ass' in general for the first bit of a chap. and then have him inadvertently see a moment where Lucius get unguardedly sweet and protective of his 'tidbit.' Probably w/o him knowing that Harry is an observer, or anyone else for that matter.

    I think your writing of this last chapter was spot on. I mean, you've really made me feel involved with the characters and their personalities have become very well established for me as the reader. So, I suppose my only request is that you continue this wonderful story.
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  • From catysmom1028 on September 14, 2007
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From Malfoysgirl on September 14, 2007
    Holy Goddess! You are certainly having Hermione put Lucius in his place. In a way Lucius does deserve it,for what he put Hermione through. Go Hermione! But yay, you got Hermione and Lucius together finally. Please add more! Lucius needs to finally admit that he loves Her mione or at least prove it to Hermione and himself. Please add more soon.
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  • From DB1 on September 14, 2007
    @19. yay they are together. loved the chapter update soon,

    *DB*
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  • From ShilohDarke on September 14, 2007
    Well written! I am so glad to see another chapter on this! It made my day... I am stuck up here at work (I worked all night) and the stupid payday inservice starts at 8:20 am, so it isn't worth my going home. So, I'm sitting in my hubby's office, reading through some of the fanfictions I love so well while I wait for time for the meeting...

    I loved Hermione showing him around. I love that she's trying to stay angry with him, while at the same time, lusting like crazy over his body! I like his willingness to do whatever he can to help her. (That's a point for Lucius) I've seen so many guys that when they fuck up... and they know they fucked up... the still want to continue being the jackasses they were to start...

    I am anxious for the nexet chapter... Is it up yet? :-(

    Shiloh
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 14, 2007
    enjoyed this chapter a lot. Great job!

    Lady Serp.

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  • From Kaley on September 14, 2007
    Another wonderful chapter and long too. We call it a toaster in England too; we don't have any other words for it. I think it is great though that you are trying to use the English terms for a story set in England. It really grates on my nerves when stories use purely American terms, such as fall, instead of autumn and liquor, instead of alcohol etc. This is the best Lucius/Hermione story I have come across.
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  • From sheherazade on September 14, 2007
    I'm not sure I would be able to negotiate for more than five seconds with a seductively-disrobing Lucius. Hermione stood up very well there!

    As always, there's a lavishly sensual quality to your smut that sets it way above the ordinary - I love the way you involve all the senses, building it up to a gourmet treat. It's earthy but never crude; simply divine.

    It's great to see them together again, though I can imagine all kinds of entertaining contretemps to come. And perhaps some suspense c/o the baddies - is this overcoming your fear of it?

    Oh, and a toaster's a toaster ;-).
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  • From misslala on September 14, 2007
    I can totally picture Hermione as the woman that would want a sex toy as she slowly opened herself back up to Lucius! Wow. Another great chapter. :) More soon, please?
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