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Reviews for Prisoners of Love - A Mystery - COMPLETE

By : LaBibliographe
  • From Heidi191976 on September 09, 2007
    I am glad that Hermione and Lucius are back together. I can't wait to read more. Please continue.
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  • From Scarybearhair on September 09, 2007

    Well, Hermione sounds like she is doing much better than Lucius, by not walling in despair. Of course she does appear to be the stronger and more sensible of the two. Not to mention, she has the baby to think about, so she really can
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  • From ANON - J on September 09, 2007
    This story is really great. I've read the whole thing before I commented. I'm glad Hermione stood up didn't back done and accept him back so easily. I really loved your other stories too. Can't wait for what happens when the baby comes!
    Great job!


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  • From ladyravenna on September 09, 2007
    Lucius living in a Muggle house seems punishment enough. LOL. Spendid chapter as always!
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  • From ShyDiva on September 09, 2007
    Wonderful chapter of life after the scales have fallen from romantically occluded eyes. I really enjoyed Hermione's acceptance of Lucius' inner Slytherin while plotting his re-training. I love your story and want to thank you for sharing it with us.

    Will we see Draco in the near future and is Lucius underestimating the reaction to a Half-blood Malfoy from his the Purebloods?
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  • From sheherazade on September 09, 2007
    Aha, good to have them together again, at least in a 'for the sake of the baby' way.

    Hermione should have given him that knotty-hair hex though - that would have been hilarious, though perhaps he's suffered enough after Snape's efforts with the poisons!

    I liked the way he reacted to the news of Hermione's pregnancy - all kinds of complex and conflicting emotions. Especially liked the bit about him having to make sure none of her goodness and sweetness infected the baby's temperament. LOL. How Slytherin.

    Lovely work; now I want to see how they make the difficult journey back to the footing they had in Azkaban. Oh, and defeating the baddies, of course.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 09, 2007
    Loosie Malfie? Lol. I had lots of fun reading this chapter. It was trully delicious, well to read that is. I liked the way you made Lucius in this chapter, he was Lucius but at the sametime he is the man who has feelings for the petie witch, as much as he denies it. Great chapter. I can't wait to read chapter 19. As for Hermione -I give her a bloody ten. She was awesome. Just how I imagine her to be in this chapter. Great self-contaiment. She was so casual, but she was probably all jell in the inside, like our favorite dark wizard. I'm glad Lucius's looking foward towards this baby's incoming birth. What I really loved about this chapter was the moment Lucius touched his soon-to-be wife's round stomach. Imagine twins?! :) Great job once again. Update soon

    Claudia

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  • From Malfoysgirl on September 09, 2007
    Whoo Awesome chapter. Way to go Hermione, put Lucius in his place. Please add more to this story. I want to see Lucius go after those two guys for what they did to his wife and what they could do now that Hermione is pregnant with his unborn child. Please add more soon.
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  • From DB1 on September 09, 2007
    @18...lol i didn't think she would make it easy for him. glad they are together though. update soon.

    *DB*
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  • From ANON - QueenMeabh on September 09, 2007
    ARGH! I just started reading this yesterday and already I'm so incredibly wrapped up in it... Lucius aggravates me to no end, and Hermione! Sometimes a couple just needs to shut up and kiss.

    Please post again soon, I'll be keeping up with this one! :)

    P.S. As an avid Lucius admirer, I have to say your characterization is just PERFECT. He's such an arse, but what a lovely arse he has. Er... is. ;)
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  • From ANON - equinox on September 09, 2007
    Ok, so i've been reading your story since you began posting and I still LOVE IT! I really think the Hermione in chapter 18 is a CANON version of Hermione J.K. forgot about. Where was the girl in book 7, who in book 5 stuck it to Rita by blackmailing her to write a favorable article about Harry. Yes, Hermione follows a moral code and she's a genius, but when you f*ck with her or her loved ones...she turns into Lucius' wife, the one we all know and love.


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  • From ruckfules84 on September 09, 2007
    WHOO HOO!!! um i mean yeah for new chapter...i can't wait for more...i love this story....well all your stories....thanks for sharing
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  • From catysmom1028 on September 09, 2007
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From misslala on September 08, 2007
    I am finally caught up!!! hahaha My goodness. SO much going on. Tsk tsk tsk. Well, on the one hand I am happy about Lucius' coming around. But at the same time I know it's only bound to produce some wonderful rows as well as wonderful make-up sex. :)

    I can't wait to see where things go from here! ANd that house-keeper of Hermione's! haha what a wonderful take on Lucius' name. He sounded like a cat coming from her! haha I can imagine Hermione buying a cat simply to name it such. :P

    Things ought to get really interesting. :) I am so glad I read. Thank you for feeding my need to read something good. :) Cheers!
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  • From Terrie on September 08, 2007
    Thank God you didn't have him go all soppy!! What would have been the fun in that? So many writers rush the character development or are OOC from the beginning so I'm happy to see you're not. Husbands do take time to train after all. LOL Also, I really liked how you had Lucius able to tell the child is his. Great idea!
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