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Reviews for Prisoners of Love - A Mystery - COMPLETE

By : LaBibliographe
  • From 13Secrets on November 03, 2008
    I'm pretty sure I have yet to review your story on here!

    I would like to say that you are awesome! Your review turnout is something crazy! Alright, onto the review...

    This is a nice story, but I think I was... well not disappointed really, cause everything happened nicely and all... I think most of my distaste for this story has to do with personal preference...

    The only thing that is glaringly disappointing, and was so since the first time I read that chapter, was how their sexual relationship grew in the cell. They had their first time together, and we read about all the things that Hermione wants to try and how she has a creative mind.... Im referring to "For the following two weeks, .... behaved like normal newlyweds..." ya da ya da. You say that they have delighted in eachother and obviously have sex a lot.

    Now, personal preference would have me want to read those events, as I see them as sort of the most important and nothing to be graced over in three paragraphs. All those amazing things she wants to try and experience should be shown, not all of them, but a lot of them... That would build on their relationship, and their trust in eachother... That's just me... And I really wish the ending was a little more... big.

    Alright, that's all I got! :)
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  • From dynonugget on October 05, 2008
    Congratulations. Chapter 10 of 'Prisoners of Love - A Mystery' has been nominated for 'Best First Time' at the Smutastic Awards! To accept this nomination, please reply to us at smutasticawards at yahoo dot com by October 14th.

    Again, congratulations!

    Dynonugget, Smutastic Awards Moderator
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  • From JaceDamian23 on September 11, 2008


    He went back to gazing at his orb and his surveillance of the prison
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  • From JaceDamian23 on September 11, 2008


    He went back to gazing at his orb and his surveillance of the prison
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  • From JaceDamian23 on September 11, 2008


    Lucius looked thoughtful,
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  • From jddammann on September 11, 2008
    I'm sorry I was late to the story, but loved it!!! The angst was relatively short-lived and always solved, the characters were wonderful and deep, the sex was great, and the power shared between Hermione and Lucius was wonderful.

    So, on to more of your stories!

    Thanks so much for sharing.

    Morgana
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  • From ANON - imagineaworld... on August 26, 2008
    just so you know, i am british and i ADORE pancakes- we DO eat pancakes and whoever told you that we didn't is an idiot.
    (we even have a 'pancake tuesday' once a year- dya before lent- its a christian thing, but everyone does it anyway, no matter what religion.)


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  • From ANON - lurky loo on August 23, 2008
    I feel so inadequate in my reviews. How do I tell you how your stories have made me feel? How entranced I was by them, how earthy and real they felt? All my thoughts get jumbled and sound pretentious to my own ears. They sound like bolstered praise, or falsely prettied words. But I mean them. I was completely enthralled by this story. I love how they clash so horribly most of the time. I love how you present, without lecturing or oversimplifying, that marriage is hard. Even true love and all that. Even fairytale romances take work if you care enoough about them to want them to continue to succeed. You could be a marriage councilor love. You assemble words like very few others. And in such a unique way that I've never read anything that even came close to your particular style. Thank you, once more, for you brilliant prose. I live in Florida, and your stories are close to the only thing that kept me from having cabin fever after 4-5 days of constant driving rains. I kept expecting to see animals gathering together in twos. Thank you for the great escape.

    ~Mia

    prissiepup@hotmail.com (But don't feel that you must. Just if you want.)


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  • From CoCoM on August 11, 2008
    What an interesting beginning! I do hope that they are able to escape though as naughtiness between my two favourite characters is always a bit more attractive of a prospect when they are both clean and free. LOL!
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  • From ANON - SnapesCello on June 11, 2008
    I loved every word you spun in this web of mystery. I spent many a night after work (from midnight on) reading this sometimes even falling asleep at the computer. I was constantly in awe of your superb characterisations. I laughed and cried whilst reading this. going to look at another of your stories to read now...
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  • From cnor9602 on June 06, 2008
    I really enjoyed this story. You have a great sense of humor and it came through in your writing.
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  • From jck on June 05, 2008
    Laughing uncontrollably at Lucius thinking of Hermione as his 'little interloping cuckoo bird'.
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  • From jck on June 05, 2008
    This is developing into a nicely complex story - I like watching the budding realtionship between Hermione and Lucius while waiting for the mystery of their incarceration together to unfold.
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  • From jck on June 05, 2008
    Laughed at the addition of the spots - nice balance between humor and the dreary prison setting. Still snickering at the brief mental image of Lucius being turned off later by his own handiwork.
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  • From jck on June 05, 2008
    I praticularly like the vibe between Lucius and Hermione - very well written uneasy partnership.
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