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Reviews for Prisoners of Love - A Mystery - COMPLETE

By : LaBibliographe
  • From PheonixAmbrosia on September 03, 2007
    I don't know whether to cry or through something...how can lucius be so thickheaded. Need that firewhisky I think.
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  • From ANON - angelbaby on September 03, 2007
    OK I know all your stories have happy endings but AHHHHHHHH! Stubin stupid fools, open your mouths and say what you feel. Please let them get it together soon. By the way I just read The Wedding and it was fab, well done. Your a great writer I love your stuff. Kisses.
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  • From sheherazade on September 03, 2007
    So Hermione spends her every waking hour getting Lucius out of Azkaban, and he still thinks she doesn't really want him. Silly boy. What's it going to take for him to spring into action? Something nasty relating to the mystery conspirators, I suspect.

    I feel Snape's irritation at having to mediate - relationship counselling really isn't his thing, is it?

    I'm on tenterhooks waiting to see what Lucius thinks of Hermione's pregnancy still.
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  • From DB1 on September 02, 2007
    @16. what?! Noooo they have to be together!!!..... Not happy!!!!!! update soon

    *DB*
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  • From ANON - blue artemis on September 02, 2007
    Wow. That was so difficult. And this is so hard on Hermione. Well, anyway, I will keep chanting happy ending until I see where you take it.
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  • From ffpoisongirl on September 02, 2007
    Is a tranquilizer potion one of those "do not mix with alcohol, do not operate heavy machinery" type dealies? Cuz I think tranquilizer potion mixed with firewhiskey should do the trick.

    While I'm QUITE upset that they broke off the marriage, I love that you're keeping us on our toes. Let's face it, once two characters are together, accepting of their love and settled into bliss, the story's almost over.
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  • From ANON - noodle on September 02, 2007
    NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! Bring them back together you evil evil evil bibliographe! Ummm... please? =)
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  • From ladydeathfaerie on September 02, 2007
    now that was just bloody evil of you.
    and, sadly, the two of them are too
    damned stubborn to see that they're
    both in need of the same thing.

    best update soon, or your Muse and i
    shall have several long, harsh, cruel
    words.

    looking forward to more.

    ~blessings~
    ldf
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  • From catysmom1028 on September 02, 2007
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From Sampdoria on September 02, 2007
    There is no fool like an old fool they say, and Lucius is a living proof to that!!!! Man, he is so stupid I am not sure I wan't Hermione back with him, not sure he deserves her or the baby. Yes, I know he has a lot of things to come to terms with, but with his own betrayal towards Hermione don't you dare letting her forgive him that easily!!! If he is stupid enough, and shortminded enough, to belive that she have had a rain of lovers while he was left in prison, there is no reason for her to let him back into her life easily. He has a lesson to learn, and from what we know of that pureblooded bastard, the lesson has to hurt tremendlessly for it to stick. Please make Hermione strong enough to stand tall and say that there is no way he will ever be part of her, and her childs, life. That there is no reason for her to belive that, come the oppertunity, he will not betray her just the same way once more. I wan't my happy ending, but I hate it when Hermione is betrayed so evilly (no matter what "noble" reason) and then like a week fool, forgive all the pain and hurt after a few sweet words. She is strong enough to demand a love that is as true, faithful, honest etc etc, as she her self is willing to give. Most things in life have come easy to Mr. Malfoy, money of conections getting him out of most kinds of trouble, its about time he realise that sometimes your actions and words migth be unforgivable, and that the trust he destroys can not be bougth back by money or sweet words. Oh my God how mad I am at him at the moment:-) Update again soon!!!!!
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  • From lizziek on September 02, 2007
    Well! Hermione pregnant and Lucius being a terrible doofus. I know, happy ending happy ending, I've read your other stories and we'll get there eventually. I'm glad they're both out of jail now, this split can't last for long. I was wondering, what did Lucius see in the newspapers that made him think Hermione has so many beaux? Obviously she doesn't but was she out on the town trying to sway some Ministry opinions in his favor and got popped by the paparazzi? There's a scary thought - magical paparazzi who can apparate - Oy!

    Oh, and way for Lucius to be grateful for Hermione getting him out of prison. Sheesh. Some guys take forever to pick up the clue phone and I'm afraid your Lucius is one of them. I know, he's deeply wounded and afraid of being hurt and out of control but he's as pig-headed as... as... a MAN. ;^p I'm so glad he can take care of his gorgeous hair properly now. Lucius should never have split ends.

    Hermione is not catching any breaks this year, eh? Falsely arrested, tossed in Azkaban, pregnant by the baddest Death Eater there ever was...sigh. Poor thing. Well, she's a tiny little mite - no doubt the pregnancy will show and Lucius will be in for a shock. Probably when he's out and about with some pureblood bimbo he can't stand anyway, all the while pining away for Hermione. Ha!

    I'm sad that there will be no Snape smut - as you say, there's lots of it available in other stories. Can't say I'll miss the Harry/Ginny smut, but to each their own.

    It was interesting to see more about Thing One and Thing Two, the evil toilet paper thieves. So they plan to use their ill-gotten gains to take over the Ministry. Hmm.. diabolical, but they don't seem to trust each other much. Thick as thieves is a bit thinner than people say.

    So, I'm loving this story, just as I love all of your stories. Lucius is such a great character and so often neglected. It's nice to see he has a devoted scribe like you.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 02, 2007
    No! I could avada his arse for Hermione -even though I like it, too, much. Is Hermione's pregnancy showing soon? or are we going to wait for a while -for Lucius to notice her condition, I mean? Update soon. PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE. And not that I'm been mean to Lucius, or anything, but I liked how Hermione had the last word. Lucius always has the last words on every fic that I've read before. A new change. So glad to notice. I wonder what's going to happen next. Is Lucius going back to his old life? as in attending upperclass baquets? Is he going to try and lose himself with other woman just to earse Hermione out his mind? I can't wait to read more. I'm sorry If you can't understand what I've said. Somemtimes I can't stop my self from writing or talking better yet.

    Atomic_Kitten
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  • From ANON - Scary Bear Hair on September 02, 2007
    Wow LaBib! Excellent job!! How tragic! I
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  • From ANON - ginnyginny on September 02, 2007
    after that chapter, i need two shots of fire whiskey! what are you doing? what is wrong with lucius? why is he pushing her away? why didn't hermione tell him that she's pregnant (ok, i KNOW why she didn't, but still). please update soon. until then, i'm chanting the mantra... happy ending, happy ending!
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  • From Malfoysgirl on September 01, 2007
    Dang that Lucius, I like to throttle him! Ok I'm done ranting. Please add more this story is getting really good. And honestly Hermione needs to tell Lucius about the baby. Just a thought. Lucius needs to wake up and smell the roses. Ok I'm done ranting again. Please add more, I will not be responsible for what my muse does lol!
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