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By : impiriusvirgo
  • From vampkestrel on September 06, 2007
    *takes a bottle of prozac....realizes it's not helping so swigs vodka instead*.....that was so very very sad and depressing.... i mean that in the way it is suppose to be such but....*cries* that poor girl it must have been a really hard chapter to write once can only wonder how much he's going to tell elizabeth about what really happened.....talk about scarred for life. Good up date though nice bit of writing there.
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  • From BloodyLove on September 05, 2007
    That was terrible! Poor Snape and his wife. No wonder he's the way he is. I know it's not how JK Rowlings had it but I think I like your theory better. Yours at least let's him have some happiness and good in his life. She didn't she just killed him off. Make's me so mad. I did have to stop reading for a few seconds because I forgot what was going on. I was like wait a second this story isn't about Snape as a teenager then I remembered that she asked about his wife so that must have been him reliving the memory or him telling her. Well I hope you update soon. I really want to know what is going to happen next.
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  • From vampkestrel on September 01, 2007
    hmmm really interesting can't wait to read more
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  • From ANON - Maraina on August 26, 2007
    I absolutely adore this story. It is so amazing. Hurry and write more! please. I'm dying to read more.
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  • From BloodyLove on August 13, 2007
    Ha ha I like the whole Snape sarcastically suggesting that he take her virginity. But I agree with her that I wouldn't have wanted mine to be removed surgically and the first person you had sex with was Voldemort. Well I hope you update soon. I want to know what happened to his wife.
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  • From ANON - Josie on August 12, 2007
    I read a lot of fanfiction but your story seems to really captivate me.

    I have been constantly checking the website to see if your new chapter has come up yet and frankly I am becoming frustrated.

    Your story is unique and I am quite literally dying for new chapters. SO PLEASE UPDATE!!

    I love your story and I need to see more!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 08, 2007
    Type faster lol i need to find out what happens T.T anyways really great fan fiction by the way ^__^
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  • From BloodyLove on July 27, 2007
    I hope the next update is longer. Driving me crazy here! But I hope you update soon. I really want to know what is going to happen in the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Rodger on July 27, 2007
    Eeeeee, update soon! I really really love this particular fic. Beautiful!
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  • From ANON - anaon on July 25, 2007
    a wife, your throwing this at me now? AAAAAHHHHHH! anyway, i really like the story so far and you made me laugh with the damn matramony, cissy would never let me bid bit. very funny. I did want to know why Ron was not expelled. rape, attempted rape and sexual assult are all grounds for explling students at the school where I teach. yep, I am a teacher. i never type things or write them on hte board. always dictate 'em cause I cant spell. hehe.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 25, 2007
    Well... they're screwed. Then again, how bad could it be? Five days. Alone. With Severus Snape. *shudders in delight* I suppose she'll have to lose her virginity then, won't she?

    Awwwwwww. I've never seen the "Snape had a wife" aspect before. A very good twist.

    By any chance, does your name have anything to do with a Ms. Elizabeth Bennet from Pride and Prejudice.

    Anyway, great story. Can't wait for more.
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  • From BloodyLove on July 25, 2007
    I love the last part. Damnit to hell! It was too funny for some reason. Well I hope you update soon. I really want to know what is going to happen in the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 23, 2007
    "Damn it to hell!" I can just see Snape yelling that out. The plot is horribly intriguing, and I'm enjoying it very much. So they need Elizabeth's virginity to renew Voldemort's former beauty, eh? Brilliant. Elizabeth is a brilliant liar though. Please update soon.
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  • From BloodyLove on July 19, 2007
    This is really good. I hope you get the next chapter out soon. I really want to know what it going to happen next.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 18, 2007
    Yes! Snape to the rescue, right? Mmmmm... being Snape's sex slave doesn't sound that bad. Can't wat for more.
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