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Reviews for Abandon

By : LadyOscar2
  • From ANON - Jonathan on July 17, 2007
    Just read it all. NOW COMPLETE IT! My life will have a hole in it if I cant read it all!
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  • From ANON - Jonathan on July 17, 2007
    Applause! Good reading in preparation for the non-smut Deahly Hallows!
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 16, 2007
    this story is awesome!!! UPDATE SOON!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Alicia on July 15, 2007
    shit! ive been loking for this story for months, i read it a long time ago and then it was just gone. yay im so glad youve started writing it again! i really hope you finish it soon, i remember reviewing originaly when i read this that the first chapter or two had a 'fight club' kind of feel to it .. yaknow with his whole hand thing. i dont know, anyways. good to hear from you again! im too glad this story is back!
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  • From ANON - Izzy on July 12, 2007
    OH MY GOD!! I love this story!! I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep it up!!
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  • From Sekhmet on July 12, 2007
    I love it!!! Update soon!!! Please?!
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  • From ANON - Benthan on July 12, 2007
    so glad you updated the story! please keep posting!!! this is one of the best original fics on this site ever!!!!
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  • From ANON - sweetiepie on July 11, 2007
    OMG OMG I love you so much for updating this story. I have been waiting for this since forever and I had even given up hope that you would ever update but im sooooooooooooo glad you did.
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  • From ANON - telmiti on July 11, 2007
    Wow. wow. wow. I
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  • From ANON - cor on July 08, 2007
    Great story. I want to see more of this and how the plot is going to play out. Thanks!
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  • From ANON - TheImpossibleMan on July 08, 2007
    ...aaaaaand now it's become a bad story. I really liked chapters one through five (though the sex scenes were pretty repetitive and they acted oddly OOC in certain sections), but chapter six was when the illusion of the story broke down and I realized that it was just some person writing a fic, rather than a portrayal of things that actually happened (I know that sounds odd to say about a story featuring wizards, but I think you understand me). Ron's behavior is totally inappropriate and unrealistic: he's clingy, posessive, and confrontational. You try to have him toe the line between 'controlling ex-boyfriend' and 'concerned friend', but he comes off as strange and weird. It is obvious that he is designed to be a dramatic foil, a person who sets up conflict by giving Harry and Hermione a reason to be real hush-hush about their relation ship. Q: Why does Ron act like such an ass? A: Because The Plot Is A Beast That Must Be Fed. It's clear that the chain of events that you've plotted out requires an outside voice challenging Harry and Hermione's relationship, but you couldn't figure out who to give that voice to, and so have Ron act completely out of character and like an all-around jerk. Nice story and all, but with chapter six I no longer care about how everything ends.
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  • From ANON - Jameson on July 07, 2007
    Great to have you continuing the story.
    Great plot line aswell as great sex.
    Would love t get to the bottom of why Harry is so distant
    and find out weather they final admit they have feelings for each other.

    Please keep writing
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  • From ANON - Maren on July 06, 2007
    I'm so glad you didn't "Abandon" this story. Sorry. Lame joke. Seriously, I've really enjoyed it, and I'm really glad you've decided to finish it. I have to know how it all turns out.
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  • From ANON - joei on July 06, 2007
    WOW...I am speachless...
    I thought this story was going to be left abondoned, but I was so glad to see that you updated.
    This was great as always and hope to see the next chapter soon
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  • From ANON - Pajama Pants on July 05, 2007
    Huzzah!!!!!!!! I'm ecstatic that this story was updated! I can't wait to see how it all turns out.
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