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Reviews for Another way of life

By : elenapotter
  • From ANON - Anon on August 10, 2007
    Your story is really realy good but I think you could benefit from getting a beta reader to clean up some of the grammar
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  • From kmplease on August 09, 2007
    omg that was intense!!! mind blowing!!! please update SOON!
    you have a few mistakes, nothing big, just wanted to tell you!!
    your a great writer
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  • From ANON - Rayder04 on August 04, 2007
    Quite good story, I like the begining with Bellatrix helping Draco brake Hermione, it will be nice to see more of that.

    I wonder what else will you write and I just hope yo keep the good scenes, did you have already an idea for the ending? it will be interesting if Hermione gets free and discover that she likes being treated that way and maybe help (make) Harry treat her like that (or she can be a new Bellatrix in the area of training).

    Any way I really hope you can continue soon.

    JO


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  • From ANON - CHRISTINA on July 11, 2007
    I'm such a perv., but I love this story. It so dirty but so enthralling at the same time. I can't wait to see what the drama will be like.
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  • From JMFELTON on July 03, 2007
    Don't think I've read a story like this, well so intense and with two characters doing the deed of the punishment, I really like it though. Please add more soon x
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  • From ANON - mandy on July 02, 2007
    Very good story,don't like Bellatrix being in there but other than that I think its very good,cant wait for you to add another chapter :-)
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