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Reviews for Conventions, Clubs and Caresses

By : luvhp
  • From princesspeach on December 19, 2007
    Ooo that last chapter was definitely umm.. revealing! I kind of hope they do end up role playing, lol, that's my sick and twisted side coming out. I just hope Ginny doesn't screw everything up! She doesn't deserve Harry! I can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - Genna on December 18, 2007
    I've read your story on and off for a few months. It has interested me so much so that I keep back to see where it will go. I felt strongly enough about the last chapter to say a few words about domination/submission and rape.

    Comment on Chapter 24. Role-playing during sex is probably common so I can see that in the fantasy realm. Hardcore D/s scenarioes between consenting adults beyond what most of us would see on a HBO Real Sex series is probably less common (maybe 25 to 50%), but not a rare occurrence. There are all kinds of structured rules to D/s behavior so that people don't get hurt or only hurt in a way that both persons find pleasurable.

    Rape is a whole new category of thing. It is all about power, pain, and humiliation. Women generally have all kinds of rape fantasies that have nothing to do with the horror real rape is.

    Here in your story, Hermione is telling Draco about a guy that initiated her into D/s role-playing with no boundaries and no consent besides relying on her passive behavior. Draco is all about the D/s because he is turned on by the role-playing. Hermione is ashamed and embarrassed because she was into it. Cool in that they are stretching pleasure/pain boundaries. Bad karma in that consent is a serious step to rape.

    Passivity is not the same thing as giving consent. Repeated passivity does not preclude repeated abuse. If your intention is that Draco is getting off on Hermione's lack of consent...label the story dark fic or non-consenting or the usual label. I don't think that was your intention at all. It was probably about pushing the envelope.

    By the end of the chapter my mind skipped away from your story. Women should be able to try non-conventional means to pleasure without being subject to being a forced submissive, violated by another person whether that person is a man or a woman, or scared into fleeing the scene of the crime. It might be me but the point has to be clarified if Draco decides he is going to be a Dom to Hermione's sub.

    Fantasy is cool: good, great and wonderful. Anyone who has ever been raped, forced into sexual role-playing that they did not give consent to, or pushed the envelope as to what non-conventional behavior they will engage might have the same antenna broadcast problem with your story's description.

    Then again, it is just a story. I am sure no one is introduced to these practices or decides to do the things described therein by just reading your take on it. But if they do, give them a heads up on how subtle this all is.

    Respectfully submitted,

    Genna
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  • From Clare1984 on December 18, 2007
    another awesome chapter! loved the Harry and Ginny smut. and the whole story of Hermione and Doug was shocking but good. I hope Draco's not gonna let him off with that. I can't wait till Ginny gets her comeuppance as well! hope you make it a good one.

    Thanx for your review of late night encounter. I kinda got distracted by the wonderful duo of Sirius and Remus but I have been thinking of writing encounter's last chapter - with some good old-fashioned Dramione smut!

    Hope you have a very Merry Christmas too!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 18, 2007
    Wow, I've really enjoyed the story so far, I can't wait for more. Hope to see more very soon.
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  • From Eilisbelle on December 14, 2007
    This story's fantastic!!! The plot is really well developed. Good Job!!!
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  • From Sparkykiki on December 14, 2007
    Nice.
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  • From kazfeist on December 14, 2007
    Gosh, this doesn't look very good....I assume Doug has not been completely truthful with Ginny, yeah? Good chapter, and I hope you update soon! Happy Holidays! :D
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  • From ANON - gabby1234 on December 07, 2007
    i love it please write more soon it was torturous waiting last time for the next chapter
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  • From bananasforyou on December 06, 2007
    wow sexy!
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  • From Sparkykiki on December 06, 2007
    :) Good chapter. Ginny's starting to show a little remorse, but I don't think that she is ready to stop trying to sabotage the relationship yet. Interested in seeing where you are going with this. :D
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  • From Clare1984 on December 06, 2007
    ooh, bad Ginny. I wonder how Harry is gonna react. Draco is just gorgeous when he's possessive and it's definite that Hermione will never leave him after that performance! I am so looking forward to Harry's arrival so roll on next chapter!
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  • From myangeldraco on December 06, 2007
    What is Ginny playing at?! how dare she try to break up my favourite couple, the little bitch!.
    Good update but if Ginny get's her way I will never forgive you, lol xxx
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  • From myangeldraco on November 22, 2007
    lol, love your A/N how evil of you! So a twist in the plot? hmm, Draco Malfoy lookalike, tell you what I'll have Draco and Hermione can have Doug, sorted xx
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  • From gabby1234 on November 22, 2007
    yes awesome i knew i just knew youd give more depth i deeply love this
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  • From gabby1234 on November 22, 2007
    i love this fluff i love this fluff have they been in love before? did something happen where hermoine lost her memories dosn't matter to be this is the way it should be
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