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Reviews for Princes in Exile

By : Marti
  • From DarqueHart on April 16, 2008
    Thanks for the chapter. Poor Hermione/Mina ... I'm sure she is feeling betrayed by and out of step with Severus. They had created their own world where they both fit in perfectly, where she felt safe and now he's changed it by becoming the Professor again. Why is it that men have no concept of how completely destroyed women are by being raped and more so with an added beating! He should reflect back at how upset he himself was at having to become the 'bat of the dungeons', someone that his own daughters didn't recognize in personality. That is less than a grain of sand to what Hermione is going through.

    Waiting patiently for the next chapter:)
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  • From Severessa on April 16, 2008
    I am so glad to see you back! I hope that your son is recovering, and that your RL calms down. Your story is still great, and I look forward to your next update.
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  • From Grace52373 on April 14, 2008
    I was wondering what had happened to you. I hope everything is okay with your son and all. Thanks for taking the time to post another chapter, it was well worth the wait! Loking forward to the next one! Thanks and God bless!
    Grace
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  • From ANON - doodle on April 14, 2008
    I was thrilled to see that you had updated. I wanted to cry reading Percy's destruction of Hermione. Very well done. Good luck with life.
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  • From catysmom1028 on April 14, 2008
    I like it. Please update when you can.

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  • From ANON - Grace52373 on February 14, 2008
    Welcome back Marti! Sorry I didn't review earlier, I've been really busy at work this month! Great chapter as always! I am looking forward to seeing how Hermione's day went, and I too am curious about where Jenn will be sorted! I am also curious to see if her friendship with Abraxus will go anywhere, or if he was permanetly scared off by Serverus! Funny though, I thought she would meet Scorpious, you sure surprised all of us with Abraxus! I am also wondering who their stalker is, and if he is still after them. I also enjoy the scenes with the twins, Emily, and Serenity! They are adorable! I also applaud your choice of name for S/H's oldest, but I could be biased since Jennifer is my name too! Lastly, I hope Jennifer and the girls don't judge their dad too harshly for his past, what matters is that he atoned for his mistakes. I am looking forward to another chapter, and I do hope your son is getting better! Oh and sorry about the nitpicking over a few mistakes in my last review. I really love this story and a few mistakes don't really matter
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  • From ANON - mekareami on February 07, 2008
    I am very pleased to see an update! I hope your son stays healthy and your muse is feeling prolific :) Thank you for writing and I eagerly await the next installment.
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  • From DarqueHart on February 06, 2008
    Always glad to see you posting again;) Severus should keep some of those heads around and claim them to be former students! lol A second, post-war son named for Luci's dad seems just about right. Good move. But, lordie, all the different names within the Snape/Prince/Granger/Weasley family might be confusing to the little girls. They'll wonder who they're supposed to be!
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  • From lokilani on February 06, 2008
    better and bettercan't wait for more
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  • From LisaJean on February 04, 2008
    Welcome back Marti!! Hope real life has calmed down for you some. Loved the update, look forward to more. Can't wait to see if Jenn is a Slytherin or a Ravenclaw.
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  • From ANON - Grace52373 on January 03, 2008
    Great chapter as always, but since you said you wanted constructive criticism, here it goes: My one and only criticism is that you seem to change details from one chapter to the next. I guess you would call it a continuity problem. For example, is the Prince's middle child named Serendipity or Serenity? Earlier in the story it was Serenity. Another thing I noticed is that Toby said he watched Percy die in the final battle, but it seems that Hermione's rape occured after the final battle, so when did it actually happen? Lastly, In the chapter where Toby visits Molly and Arthur, Harry tells Snape that his infant son is named Brian James, and after Brian pees on him, Harry claims that Ginny told him that it would be easier with a boy, and that his sisters never christened him like that. In the latter chapters at the burrow, Brian wasn't the youngest and the Potters had no girls. Also, when did the lunch meeting at Hogwarts go from a simple meeting between the Princes and Molly and Arthur to the whole family going to the burrow? I know these are minor glitches, but I just wanted to point them out in case you want to fix them, or I could have read it wrong anyway, so you can ignore my criticism and my nagging little questions if you want to. I also know you have been going through hell, by the way, I am keeping your child in my prayers, and hope he receives that lung soon! I am also happy with whatever you give us in the way of chapters, and I also marvel that you take the time to do this, when you have other serious things going on, but I guess writing is therapy for you as it is for me. Lastly, I do love this story, and am looking forward to the next chapter!

    Grace
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  • From catysmom1028 on January 03, 2008
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From drlincu on January 03, 2008
    Yea! I am glad you are adding chapters. Please continue!
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  • From ANON - siriusluv on January 03, 2008
    Love it! Please write more soon.
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  • From SexyMomma on December 30, 2007
    Another wonderful Chappy as always. I hope your son gets to feeling better soon!
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