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Reviews for Unexpected Desire

By : BinxBolling
  • From sheherazade on July 27, 2007
    I really love this story; all the ingredients are coming together now - drama, romance, tragedy - and fabulous writing.

    And you give me Severus dancing, which always makes me so happy (especially when wearing super-hot Slytherin dress robes). I'd give anything to see one of Flitwick's pumpkins with graveyard scenes carved on it!

    Excellent stuff; I'm so glad you're keeping this going.
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  • From vampkestrel on July 25, 2007
    ohh really interesting i hope you wright more soon
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  • From sheherazade on July 20, 2007
    The Order don't know what to make of Constance, do they? I'm so glad she gave Sirius a hard time; he is my least favourite canon character, so it always cheers me up when he gets a bloody nose.

    The poor girl is in quite a bind; I hope Voldemort doesn't get wind of her, but somehow I'm sure he will.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 18, 2007
    Yes! Constance kicked Sirius's ass. I've been waiting for someone to do that for quite sometime. I loved that line about Goddamn wizards and their goddamn ancient magic. Hilarious. Love the story so far; please update soon.
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  • From sheherazade on July 16, 2007
    Constance is a feisty one, isn't she? Snape needs to watch his back...literally.

    A Hallowe'en Dance will be good - I've always had a peculiar fascination with the idea of Snape dancing.

    I loved your chapter title - so true, lol.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 15, 2007
    Snape? Reading Little Women? Yes! Oh that made me laugh out loud.

    Bleh. I hate the 'golden trio.' Stupid brats will only interfere with Severus and Constance.

    Love the story and please update soon!
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  • From sheherazade on July 11, 2007
    Ah, that has made my day! The image of Snape waiting impatiently outside the ladies' changing rooms in Marks & Sparks....classic!

    Ugh at McDonalds though...I'd credited him with more taste. He's so sensitive, though, isn't he, considering Constance's 'womanly requirements'. LOL.

    I like a slow-build with plenty of detail and scene-setting, so don't worry about flinging lemons in right away. I'm getting more & more into this.
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  • From sheherazade on July 09, 2007
    Loved the poem; I haven't heard of Michael Lally before.

    Severus is being quite sweet in this, isn't he? I wonder what he's going to make of shopping in Muggle London?
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 06, 2007
    Chapter 3: Very intriguing. She has quite a mouth on her, as does Snape. When he let out that string of explicatives, I couldn't help but giggle. And the spanking! Oh gods, how I love spanking. Please update soon.
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  • From sheherazade on July 06, 2007
    This is an interesting premise. I'm wondering how Constance is going to have to save Snape.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 05, 2007
    The plot thickens! That line about her running of a cliff like a lemming made me laugh aloud. Please update soon, and thank you for reviewing my story, as well.
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  • From Emmylovedraco on July 05, 2007
    Please update soon I would love to read some more.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 05, 2007
    An extremely promising beginning. I'm impressed with that incantation you wrote, it was very rhythmic. I hope that you update soon!
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