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By : Lilac
  • From ANON - S pop103 on June 26, 2015
    Well Lilac another amazing story by you I just read this after I reviewed on Cursed Wolf II which was another amazing story by an amazing author. I was also wondering if you were making another story right now if so please email me the name of it thanks and keep up the great work as always :-)
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  • From kajlima on September 26, 2008
    All is well. I am happy that finally they can be happy. Or will they? Since now Snape had died Hermione can be free. This story had been a fun one. the loops and twist are wonderful. I hope Snape was only threatening Hermione. I hope the baby is fine.
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  • From genna on September 22, 2008
    I don't know if my last review actually was processed.

    I had 3 questions.

    Instead of that longer review I will ask one question: What lies within the heart of a lapsed Catholic which allows them to see and to know God but distrust the evil that lies within what SS represents in a papal hierarchy?
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  • From kajlima on July 15, 2008
    I like it better!! I think this story is great! I can
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 08, 2008
    Not a believable story
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  • From Wistfu1Stargazer on June 30, 2008
    RE: chapter five

    Poor girl to feel such guilt over her feeling like a woman for once in her life and perhaps even falling in love with Harry.

    Ugh, to have such beautiful dreams, of Harry and her spending time together, turn into nightmares of the Bishop's voice telling her how to make the thoughts of Harry go away is freaking scary.

    Woah, talk about taking things overboard, what that poor girl did to herself is horrific.

    I'm glad that Harry came to her, finally, before she ended up dying due to malnutrition, and/or hypothermia, or even blood loss.

    I love how Harry told her that he'll burn in hell with her due to their desire for each other. SWEET!


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    F.Y.I.--error found needing correction:

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  • From Wistfu1Stargazer on June 30, 2008
    RE: chapter three

    Harry put a garden together for Hermione to be able to work on her drawing skills--How sweet.

    LOL, Harry is a little stinker for having loosening up and taking out some of his stitches in order to spend more time with Hermione. When Harry begged her to heal him, did she? Or was he doing it?

    I love Hermione's error in choice of prayers to recite when Sirius came into the room--too funny!

    It was very kind of Harry to help Hermione back to the house when she twisted her ankle. Later, when he went to give her the ruby (perhaps as a token of his affection for her), it was so cute that he got a sad look on his face when she told him that she wouldn't be allowed to keep it.

    How romantic of Harry to have captured a Hummingbird (for Hermione to get a close up of and be able to hold however briefly) after Hermione mentioned that she liked them.

    It was interesting that Harry left his book for her to find to ease her into thinking about magic.

    It was kind of the boys to have invited Hermione to the Weasley party.

    How sad for Hermione to think that Harry and Ginny are together and that her time with Harry was nothing special to him.

    Hermione should be grateful that Sirius is giving her a chance to start a whole new life if she were so inclined.

    Well, at least Hermione was able to get one dance in with Harry--better than nothing I guess.

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    F.Y.I.--errors found needing correction:

    (1) 'Hermione heard a girls voice and as they walked threw ["threw" should be "through"] the gate,...'

    (2) '"...You know how many people would love the chance at starting there ["there" should be "their"] life over. ..."'

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    RE: chapter four

    Ahh, the island is protected by a Fidelus charm, hey?

    Barty was a total pig to have grabbed Hermione, whispered into her ear that he wanted her in his bed, and then feel her up.

    Cool--she has deduced that the house is magical as are the people that live there, and she didn't freak out--fantastic!

    It was very gentlemanly of Sirius to have handled Hermione's Barty problem and give her refuge in his room. Too bad Harry misinterpreted what he saw when he saw her in Sirius' bed in the morning.

    Was the potion that Harry gave to Hermione a calming draught?

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  • From Wistfu1Stargazer on June 30, 2008
    RE: chapter one

    I hope that Father Remus isn't really dead, but maybe captured by the pirates and perhaps even join them--at least he wouldn't be dead, you know?

    Cool, Hermione used accidential magic and threw Snape across the room when he would have raped her.

    Thank goodness she got away from the pervy Bishop Snape before he could rape her.

    The "Dread Pirate Harry"? Cool! LOL
    ;~D

    I wonder if perhaps one of the things that go bump in the night on the island is Remus, and perhaps he was infected by a werewolf.

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    RE: Chapter two

    Thank goodness Hermione has the knowledge to help heal the wounded sailors.

    It is cool to see Sirius as a dashing pirate. I like that he is kind, caring, and against the idea of selling Hermione at an auction/market. Mad-Eye Moody is a creep to have felt her up and even suggest they sell her.

    Hermione is a sweet girl to pray for the recovery of her patients.

    Harry should be grateful that Hermione is such a thorough healer (to have opened him up to clean out the wound, and remove any debris that was visible, and then stitch him up again)--WOW! Scary and yucky job, it's a good thing that she doesn't mind doing what needs to be done.

    I like the light flirting during the sponge bath--cute.

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    Ok, I have a question: Does the following quote contain a typo as to the character mentioned?

    '"Not to long, about a week. I have to talk to Moony about things." turning to look at the novice, "We'll be leaving this morning."'

    Is Sirius really talking about "Moony" (Remus), or was it suppose to say "Moody"?
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    I'm wondering if Harry is offering himself up to be a model for Hermione to work on her drawing skills. :::wiggles eyebrows suggestively:::
    ;~D

    Great story so far! Are you still working on "Cursed Wolf II"?
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  • From Bigfunk89 on May 25, 2008
    Cliffhanger you are killing me I am loving it so far please update soon.
    Cheers
    -Luigi
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  • From ANON - kaj on May 20, 2008
    I mean there must be a way to remove the flesh without Snape's "help". I don't mean about Snape's intention in bedding Hermione but why good people have to bend over to bad people. White magic is powerful and as we should not succumb to terrorism we should not succumb to evilness. Please please oh please shows Hermione that White magic is Strong and Powerful and Beautiful. It's a matter of concept to me more than anything.
    Aside from that this story is great.... I like it... one of my fav at AFF. Keep writing and update soon!!!
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  • From ANON - kaj on May 20, 2008
    Wow!!! All of those prayer is real? This chapter is wonderful, easy to follow and straight forward. I like it but I don
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  • From Lisa1352 on May 19, 2008
    Franzl

    Hermione will not be tainted forever. Once she has the skin removed she will be as you put it PURE again.. it not like they had sex or he raped her.
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  • From ANON - mike on May 18, 2008
    franzl is an idiot and this story is great, this whole pure concept is his/her delussions on how hermione should act or girls in general. Why i bet that he/she wouldn't bat an eye at a story where harry fucks anthing that walks while hermione stays a "pure" virgin waiting for harry. Seriously some people need to realize that stories where hermione or harry see other people(even if some people can't stand it) before they fall in love or finally are together is still harmony. Harmony is about harry and hermione with all their trials and tribulations that brings them together. Stories can be entirely h/hr or have h/oc and hr/oc but end in h/hr. Seriously some h/hr shippers need a reality check on the ship as a whole it is not about the journey so much as it is about the ending.
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  • From ANON - mike on May 18, 2008
    wow that was a good chapter, i really hope even though i'm a strong h/hr shipper you make a hr/ss scene just because it feels like it is needed to complete the story, but that's just my opinion.
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  • From ANON - K on May 03, 2008
    I like the story a lot, I just think the editing could be a little more refined, but the plot is really good.
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