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By : Lilac
  • From ANON - Anon on September 07, 2007
    Please update this story is really good
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  • From missmonet on September 01, 2007
    OMG that was hot. So the asshole Bishop Snape was back god I hope he dies. I cant wait to read chapter 8.
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  • From Lilac on August 31, 2007
    Mike
    do you think I'm going to let Hermione end up with Snape?
    this is a Harry /Hermione story.
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  • From ANON - mike on August 31, 2007
    see this is where good stories go bad, you are forcing a conflict whee none is needed. Making hermione go back to severus without a half decent reason why makes this last chapter weak. You give hermione every reason to stay with harry and none at all to leave. My guess is you want some bdsm with sev/hr, in that case the whole harry part of your story ws pointless. Why build up a love, then without any real reason break them up. Oh they paid the ransom, wow talk about a writer forcing a story to go one way without any build up. That just shows me that you're a bad writer when you make things happen without a cause or reason. Now if hermione does end up going back i already know where this is heading tons of torture possible rape for hermione then harry the hero months later. You had originality but you lost it when you went cliched with the lost love route. Next time just make this a snape/hr story and not bring harry into it, just confuses your plot and adds nothing to your bdsm fantasies.
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  • From missmonet on August 19, 2007
    hot danm that was bloody great. So Hermione finally gives into temptation and lust most important love. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - mike on August 19, 2007
    Wow that was a really good chapter, yay for the nice h/hr scenes and especially the little bit where hermione was drunk that was a good piece of humour. The sex scenes were also well done.
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  • From ANON - votehermione on August 10, 2007
    i truly enjoy this story. its great.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 08, 2007
    amazing fic but please update soon
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  • From ANON - shelli on August 02, 2007
    Hi I love this story, its unlike anything else out there please update again soon I'm on the edge of my seat waiting.

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  • From missmonet on August 01, 2007
    this is a really good story so far. i want to know if hermione gives in to the passion between her and harry please please continue.
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  • From ANON - carri on July 31, 2007
    excellent fanfic please update soon. ***** ;-)
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  • From ANON - Lolipopx Sugar on July 30, 2007
    I love the story. I love how it is writen, how the characters are protrayed.
    And the latest chapter, I enjoyed the most because I really saw the struggle. It seem to me that she is slowly losing her mind because she wants nothing more than to be pure.

    I can't wait to see what more you have instore for this story.
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  • From ANON - Benthan on July 22, 2007
    The chapter conveyed all the angst poor Hermione is feeling. Good job. Update soon!
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  • From ANON - missmonet on July 20, 2007
    OMG that was the best chapter yet. I love how Hermione thought she was going to burn in hell for having feeling for Harry and how Harry make her see that they are not going to burn in hell. please update soon.

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  • From Sinkingboat on July 20, 2007
    is there some kind of outside force effecting hermione? snape? this was one of your best chapters. nice work
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