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Reviews for A Night Out

By : sparrowswing
  • From filiasan on July 23, 2008
    This was a really good one-shot. I am glad that I decided to search through older fics.
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  • From Jilliane on June 03, 2008

    Well done! This was very well written, particularly the end part. After reading "Kindred Spirits" I wanted to read what else you've written, and was quite eager to read this one, as it's my favourite pairing. This was beautifully bittersweet....I love the angst, and I'm a sucker for a happy ending, especially when it's these two damaged souls. Loved it, and if you decide to continue it, I'll be right back to read it.
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  • From dime on February 09, 2008
    Neat!
    I like Snarry. And I love angsty stories (can you tell)? *lol*
    The ending was cute. : )
    You should write more.
    - Dime
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  • From ANON - LadyAthelia on August 11, 2007
    I "A Night Out", short and bittersweet! I'm so glad you have decided to share your talent with the world by putting your work out here to be seen. I love the Harry/Snape combo because they're both flawed characters and they both desperately need love - it's nice to see them find it with each other. Please write more and longer stories for your new fans!
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  • From ANON - sa on July 11, 2007
    Beautiful.

    The smut was HOT and the ending was so tender, you write well and shouldn't be so anxious about writing, be proud you have talent :)
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  • From sparrowswing on July 10, 2007
    Thank you all for your reviews. First of all, this was intended as a one-shot, but I may change that at some point. As I've only been writing fanfiction a short while, I have no idea what the future holds in that respect. Ariel, thank you for your advice. Harry/Severus is my favorite ship to read, and I had a great deal of fun writing it. As for the ending, I took the coward's way out. I've always been bad with endings, so my stories tend to end abruptly. I considered several possibilities for this (from a drawn-out conversation to Harry attempting suicide), but this was the only ending that I really liked. Once again, thank you.
    ~ash
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  • From Joyce on July 10, 2007
    I loved this fic. You should write more Harry/Snape because you write it well.
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  • From ANON - Beth on July 09, 2007
    Awwww.
    This was so sexy,
    and then at the end so sweet.
    Awww.
    Kudos.
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  • From ANON - snarrylover on July 09, 2007
    that was good. im so glad i decided to read this

    cheers!
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  • From MWolf on July 09, 2007
    I'm amazed . . . very powerful, right to the end. Great job! I love Severus' sarcasm and wit, but the ending was what really tugged at me. Thanks for sharing this!
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  • From ANON - kunitsu on July 09, 2007
    The ending was both angsty and sweet, a hard combination to do. It had a happy ending too I like that.
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  • From Faschmer on July 09, 2007
    That was really good ^^ Is it a oneshot? Or are you planning to continue it?
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