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Reviews for Too Young

By : tivogirl
  • From Annecia89 on July 20, 2014
    Such a sweet sweet story!!
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  • From gossipgirl84 on February 05, 2013
    Cute story, but I really don't like that you had Harry having a child at such a young age and to a character who has nothing to do with Harry Potter the series at all. And I don't really like the idea of him being a Pagen. Usually, witches are Wiccans, that's their religion. Pagen really isn't all that common. It's just strange to me. And you should know, that you never sleep with your child on top of you, if you were to turn over, you could suffocate your child. People, don't seem to realize that but it can happen.
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  • From hpn827 on October 08, 2007
    NO!!!!!!!!!!! Don't end it like that. At least write an epilogue to tell us what happened or better yet a sequel. If you are please email me at hpn827@yahoo.com.
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  • From clairevictoria on September 11, 2007
    The end? COME ON!! No way, i need a sequel. I read the whole thing in one go and loved it, i couldn't stop. Please write a sequel.

    This story means so much to me. My mother has to work and my sister(who is 5) needs looking after, so i help out. I absolutely adored the scene where the four grown men were sitting with their heads in their hands. Been there, i so get where they are coming from. I loved how you showed it getting easier to take care of her.

    Poor Livvie. I know she got better but still, first losing her parents and then nearly dieing. Poor Draco.

    I have a question. Are you a Pagan? I am and your descriptions of the rituals were so accurate. Thank you so very much for showing my religion in such a wonderful light. It made me feel better about my beliefs. I am the only Pagan in my family and in my social circle, so it can be a bit isolating at times, but your story gave me a ray of light.

    Thank you so much for this story, and please write a sequel.

    If you want to get in touch with me, leave a review for Divorce, Disaster and Denial. It's in the Harry Lucius section. I wrote it and i check the responses every day. I would feel so honoured if you could read it and tell me what you think.

    Please write a sequel. I need more.

    Luv Tori
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  • From ZooArmy on August 21, 2007
    What? WHAT? WHAT? The End? You cannot leave it like that! No, you simply can't. There are so many questions that need to be answered.
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  • From KairenMalfoy on August 21, 2007
    Oh that was so heartfelt, and sad. I cried...I really did. But that wasn't fair...I wanted to see some more of Draco and Harry's relationship... Btw, "Coco" was just toooo damn cute! ^+^ ~Kairen
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  • From bananasforyou on August 21, 2007
    i wonder no part two? oh well it was great!
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  • From cameowitch on August 21, 2007
    I'm so glad I finally got to the ending! And it was ended but still open too. Sequel?? Maybe? Wonderful work and well worth the wait. It was very good! *offers jell-o cup*
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  • From thrnbrooke on August 21, 2007
    Sequel!!!! Gotta have more! Did Draco get his magic back?
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  • From DracoHarry on August 21, 2007
    NOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!! It can't be over. I love this fic. I want to know if Draco ever fully recovers. You have to do a sequel. Keep up the great work.
    Kat
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  • From BellaBlack on August 20, 2007
    This was a very sweet story to read and enjoy. Olivia was a child to give your heart to. Will there be a sequel to this story that is their 7th year and beyond??
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  • From DracaMalfoy on August 20, 2007
    that's it? wow. good story, but for some concrit, I think it ended a bit abruptly...
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  • From chelleybelle on August 20, 2007
    i read the story completely through to the end today. it was very original and well written. i loved it right up until the end. your ending SUCKED! you leave to many unanswered questions! you need an epilogue or a sequel! you are a great writer, so get to your computer and start typing a real ending!!!!
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  • From mystiedaze on August 20, 2007
    wonderful story. i just loved the ending.

    thanks
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  • From dracoharry4life on August 20, 2007
    Will there be no eppy? Does he get his magic back? Where do they live? Does Harry kill Voldy? Do they have any more kids?
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