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Reviews for Soul Bond

By : chelleybelle
  • From chelleybelle on October 09, 2007
    There were more chapters, but I took out all of the author notes chapters, and review stuff. I don't usually keep those in my computer and it makes it hard to match up the chapters here with my chapters on my laptop when I have to look something up again. Nothing from the story is gone, just the extra junk...
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  • From on October 09, 2007
    please don't let him died. it so great
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  • From anniea on October 09, 2007
    thought you said no more death! i don't want arthur to die! update soon *kisses*
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  • From bananasforyou on October 09, 2007
    why are up to chap. 62 gone? rewriting?
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  • From Ellanath on October 09, 2007
    ACK!!! A cliffhanger! A tiny morsel of what is to come! You, you, you, heathen!
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  • From thrnbrooke on October 09, 2007
    Soooo need chapter 59 but I'm wondering where all the other chapter went. I swear there were over 60 chapters earlier.
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  • From RDWind on October 08, 2007
    Chelleybelle --
    I have been TRYING to read this story for MONTHS now. I LOVE this story! I just want you to write it and get it done so we know what happens! Rude? Maybe, but you can always delete the review if you choose! Believe me I deleted several that irritated me on my stories.

    You are a good author. You have a gem of a storyline here. You just lack the confidence to decide what your characters are going to do next. If that offends you -- WAH! It doesn't make it any less true.

    I just want to read YOUR words, YOUR characters, YOUR storyline, and YOUR story. Not polls to insure you get plenty of reviews. Get the confidence you need to write and WRITE what YOU want to happen in the story.

    I won't apologize for telling you to write it YOUR way -- when it is YOUR story.

    --RD
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  • From Lasgalen on October 08, 2007
    catching up with the reading ^^/ (work keeps me busy, and tired)
    >< get Lilly back!!

    I vote, no more deaths and no more babies (for now XDD)

    Bella should help, and then go, what if she sees Lilly doing (saying) something she deems proper for a pure-blood or a Black and get in her good graces =D (and she can keep appearing ans talking to Lilly from time to time, XD might be fun, Imagine a Hufflepuff talking to the big bad -reformed- Slytherin?

    o.o Is Siri Ill? I just... don't know for a moment there.. I thought we could see the mental pain of Lilly in Sirius? T__T for a moment there I saw the boy suffer and it hurt, oh it hurt!

    XD what's up with Jazzy? (magically gets her bottle? *__* kick ass witch coming!)

    great story! T__T sorry I couldn't review for soo long

    =D love!
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  • From chelleybelle on October 08, 2007
    RDWIND:

    I think that your comment was rude and uncalled for. If you don't like my polls then don't read my story. I assumed that people would rather be asked what they wanted to see happen rather than me abandon my story, kind of like someone else has done. I have severe writers block on this story and had no idea where to go with it...you are absolutely correct, IT IS MY STORY. That means that I can do WHAT I WANT with it and I wanted to aske all of the WONDERFUL people who have been reading the story what they thought. I happen to find inspiration in the comments that I receive. Sometimes somebody makes a comment in a review about something that I had never even thought of before. For example...Lilly seeing the man outside her apartment window. That was never supposed to go anywhere. It was just supposed to be scenery. In that case I went with it and wrote myself into a corner that I have no idea how to get out of, and completely away from my outline, but it seemed like a good idea. Now I need to think of a way to get back to where I was so that the epilogue that I have already written will still work. So, again, if my polls bother you so much, don't read my story. find another one to read.
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  • From RDWind on October 08, 2007
    WOuld you just write your damned story? God above Chelley! Its YOUR STORY! Write it how you want to! Stop taking polls to get more reviews. Just write the fucker. I've been following this story first on HPFandom, then here. Write what you want to write and go on with it.

    --RD
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  • From dracoharry4life on October 08, 2007
    Bella lead them out.
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  • From Ellanath on October 08, 2007
    Okay, Well if Draco comes to the rescue. He could offer his own money in the sum that is the same as he would get if he was suppose to find the key. Bella probably would be pissed, but the grandmothers could tell Bella that if he does not get the money, more than likely Draco or Harry will kill him thus he would enter the realm she is in and he would taunt her relentlessly. Grandmothers could also tell her that it would not be her money he is spending, so what would she care and she could watch him waste it away. This probably will leave the question open to: What would keep RL from going to Malfoy/Potter when the money runs out?

    Draco may not like to give money, but for his daughter I doubt he would care. Would it be too hokey to set him up with the account, but then obliviate him so as not to remember Lily is a medium? Thus your ending could be something like they all get into the car and drive to the destination that was set for them to all meet, and on the way there, Sirus can tell his father that Jazzy summoned her bottle because she was hungry, and then with a sly grin say he and Lily will be placed in Hufflepuff...

    I agree with you and not another death. I doubt Bella would give to a kind heart and help all of them out. If Potter/Malfoy kill RL, would not Lily see this thus it mayhaps plague her mind, though I suppose Potter tells Draco to take Lily out of the house and Potter really kicks ass and destroys RL.

    Yes you are right so many options! Sorry mate, I don't fancy the place you are in. Hang in there it will come to you!
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  • From sweetlove on October 08, 2007
    I believe you should use the weasley twins who are illusioned to look like dearest
    'friends' - maybe Tommy Boy so we can see her grvoel - of Bellatrix and have them take her out.
    So you can have the weasley twins as unspeakables of something, not that anyone will know.
    Whilst little siruis is struck by a vision future love and anguish that leaves him a little
    traumatised.
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  • From writetloud on October 08, 2007
    i like the idea of siri being held captive and Liy helping to find him i duno
    but either way im excited to see where this all winds up i cant believe there
    may be only three chapters left :-(
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  • From bananasforyou on October 08, 2007
    bella should help them and rabastian should die or go to azkaban.
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