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Reviews for Perverted Potions

By : BinxBolling
  • From Clare1984 on August 09, 2007
    Wow, that got rid of some of the tension then! it's an interesting way to test her knowledge - lucky Hermione! Of course, now I just can't wait for the final exam! Don't leave me hangin too long.
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  • From crinna on August 09, 2007
    wonderful chapter. so heady and sensual like drinking to much wine to fast. it was lovely how you depicted the interaction between the two of them, gentle but needy. I can hardly wait till you post another, but school comes first. I'm sure all your readers understand.
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  • From Carine on August 09, 2007
    Hi,Great Teacher,
    it's really getting very hot...(But I think that's ok because in Luxembourg we only have about 15 degrees celsius and the rain is really shitty8=().But like always you just made my day LOL Sureves Epans
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  • From daylightdancer on August 09, 2007
    AHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAHAHAHHAHA *FALLSOVERLAUGHING* That was the best chapter in a long time. Finished it then went back to the chapter before, and re-read it and then re-read the new one. And it was funnier than the last time. FUCKME, MERLIN! XD That was great.... XD Im gonna be laughing about that alllll day long XD
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  • From CryingCinderella on August 09, 2007
    How kitch. And totally expected, actually, with that whole falling asleep. -sighs- I'll be honest, I wasn't thrilled with this story at first, still don't think I am, however, it does intrigue me to the point of continuing to read it, so you must be doing something right. Maybe I'm sexually frustrated because my own works are being so stubborn, I don't know. You've written that particular scene very vividly, and the use of the doll is quite a new concept that in all the sex ed stories I've read, I don't think I've seen it come up. The Albus moment for me wasn't believable, it never is when they have Albus suggesting that it's alright for them to have relations. I'm alright with him being meddlesome, even doing his own things to help push them together, but he can never just come right out and say to Severus that he believes him and Miss Granger should whatever and if they do, he's alright with it. Albus can be alright with it, he just can't come out and say it. Also, I felt that you've led them into an awkward position. Thus far, as you've written the characters, there is going to be a very awkward happening when either of them wakes up, and I do hope that in your next chapter you don't just glaze over the fact that she fell asleep after their session of mutual masterbation and he pulled her into his arms. I think if you were going to put it in there, then it's significant to you, otherwise it's just awkward and doesn't fit the characters as you've played them up. I can imagine both would feel very out of their element waking up in that particular situation and I think as the readers, we need to see that awkward, out of placeness that could occur. The lesson seemed to progress too fast and Severus lost that subtlty that he'd had in these lessons up until that point. Once you brought her to the office we all knew what was coming, but I feel like you really could of given him that finess you'd done so well in applying to him in previous chapters, and really worked in that paced rhythm of the lessons as you'd done before. I know it's always intense and often comes out rushed when you finally get to the 'lemon' scene, however, this is one where you really should have taken the time to build it up, I think. The scene itself was vivid, very bright in language and description, though at the same time, a bit generic. I felt like there were moments where it could have been any two people on his sofa, (a sofa, which in the initial description of the office was not mentioned) and then there were also times when it was so specifically Severus and Hermione that you couldn't escape them. I think all moments of Sev/Mione stories should be that way, where the reader should never be able to feel like they could put any generic man/woman into those spots. I do like what you've done thus far, complaints aside, as it is a concept that's so overdone, yet you've managed to make something decent out of it. I do hope you spend some time really developing this next chapter as it promises to be a big, exciting, lemony combination. I'm sorry if you think I'm too critical, but I hope my criticism is constructive and helps you. Best of luck, keep it up and I'll be sure to keep reading.

    ~CC
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  • From CandyxCotton on August 09, 2007
    Brilliant! Update soon please! xoxo
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  • From TifLaw on August 09, 2007
    Just started reading, and this is Brilliant. I don't know how they'll make it to the end of the semester at the rate they're going... lust crazed fools, but I love it. Can't wait to see what happends next. :)
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  • From Millergrrl3 on August 09, 2007
    I really enjoy stories where these two fall for each other and neither of them are really, quite are aware of it until later on. Can't wait for the next chapter, don't make us wait too long!
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  • From catysmom1028 on August 09, 2007
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From Kimberly1983 on August 09, 2007
    OMG! if only I could have been so lucky to have that kind of sex ed class with a dark handsome man! wow...
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  • From wildrose on August 09, 2007
    Lovely, absolutely ravishing! Oh, it's moments like these you wished you were at hogwarts isn't it? ^.^ Can't wait for more.
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  • From MiladyMegan on August 09, 2007
    sweet jesus that was good! I say in my most commanding snape voice "More!"
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 09, 2007
    Your whole Dumbledore as a eager voyeur bit squicked me, m'dear. Dumbledore? Watching? God help us all. Except for that disturbing image, the chapter was double cool with knobs. Mutual masturbation was sent to us from gods such as yourself. Hopefully, the next chappie will have the real thing. Please, sir, can I have some more?
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  • From redneckmama236 on August 09, 2007
    *sighs in contentment* that was incredibly HOT!! I cant wait for the next installment. I wish I could be in that class.
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  • From hermioneandseverusfan82 on August 09, 2007
    hot very hot good chapter
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