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Reviews for Brown Eyed Girl

By : ccino49
  • From ANON - SL on April 10, 2013
    I enjoy your story with quite a few twist. The title Brown Eyed Girl smells Hermione Granger, only to find out that she is someone else, thought not too unlike HG. Putting her (Sandra) in Hufflepuff is also quite unexpected. The only thing I wish is to see more dynamics developing between Servius and Sandra.
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  • From Trelweny on September 21, 2012
    I particularly loved how your OC was a very remarkable Hufflepuff yet still a nonentity. Wonderful twist, that. Hufflepuffs far too often are the target of jokes from the other Houses (canon and fanfic alike) so it was awesome for them to have something so special as it being a Blessing or even a Special Power to be able to blend into the background and remain unseen. A rather brilliant take.

    Thanks for writing.
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  • From misslala on August 09, 2007
    OMG I love how she challenged him!!! THat was sublime! You didn't ask, you told me. :) That's brilliant, dear, brilliant.
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  • From misslala on August 08, 2007
    My apologies in the delay of reviewing this one, but I've wrapped up in my own story writing at the moment, hehe Anyway, Severus is his usual self, wanting and not liking to be refused~ haha I love it. I am on to the next chapter now :P
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  • From Happyappy on August 04, 2007
    Silly me, there are several more chapters- must go read them!
    Sansa
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  • From Happyappy on August 04, 2007
    What an evil cliffie! Just when he finally finds her you stop. I do believe you do need to write another chapter!At least one more? Please!

    Sansa
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  • From sheherazade on July 15, 2007
    Ch2: Very nice; he's so Snapey, isn't he, just assuming she wants to marry him etc. right away.

    But she said no to him! She's unnatural, lol.
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  • From ANON - Miepje on July 14, 2007
    A great story! I loved Severus being determined to have Sandra immediately, being thwarted and ending up all out of sorts and getting drunk with Remus *snicker*
    I really enjoyed reading this. Thanks!
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  • From misslala on July 14, 2007
    I've reas the first chapter already, just making my way through. I am heading to work soon so I don't have time to read it all, but I am loyal to you Ms. ccino!!! :) So you will always hear what I think :)
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  • From sheherazade on July 14, 2007
    Just read Chapter One and will definitely be making time to read the rest.

    Great so far - I like Severus being the great war hero, pursued everywhere by lust-crazed witches (and letting a few of them catch him too). I'm looking forward to his next meeting with the mysterious Finn. Will read & review some more tomorrow.
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