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Reviews for The Pains of Becoming

By : Audrey
  • From ANON - Gabbs on February 21, 2016
    The story was really great all the way through....except the epilogue at the end of the story. To be honest the epilogue could have been better. I am disappointed with the ending it the story.

    A sequel for this story would be great.
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  • From Audrey on June 11, 2009
    Hey DoS! Nice to see that someone dug out my old story and enjoyed it! That really makes me happy!

    Sorry I am letting you hanging with "Black-eyes Girl". I am almost done with the 20th chapter. I hav an eventful week and did not have so many quiet evenings suitable for fan fic writing :) But it's on the way!
    Thanks for all the support! Momo
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  • From dragon88 on May 23, 2009
    WOW!! This story was incredibly addictive, I just couldn't stop reading. Spine tingling, shiver sending, gut clenching tale with all the graphic detail that readers such as myself love. Snape was amazing, Lucius delightfully evil and Kirsty was a character I could relate to although there were times where I wanted to slap her (least Snape did a good job of that lol) but it all worked out in the end yay!

    Hope to read more of your work! :D

    D x
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  • From Audrey on August 27, 2008

    Hi Pensieve Plotter!
    Sorry, I hope you did not think I was angry with you or something because that is absolutely not the case! I am very grateful for your work on previous chapters. In fact I am very grateful to everyone who helped me out! This story has had many different betas and I appreciate all their work and I am very aware that you spend your time to fix my story without expecting anything in return. And I know real life comes first.

    I agree with you that chapter 35 is one of the most depressive chapters. On a positive side, I think it is very likely that she will be able to feel again in the future. But there was no other way for her than to turn numb to get through that gang rape.

    I am glad you understand what I was trying with Draco. I was not sure if people would get it when he says that he cannot leave, when he realises his father wants to kill her. In the same way I don
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  • From PensievePerson on August 25, 2008
    To Momo:

    I
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  • From Audrey on August 23, 2008
    @Visitekarte: are you German yourself? Your username sounds like it.
    Sorry, I don
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  • From Prissylilchica on August 13, 2008
    Yes I am still available. E-mail me at Prissylilchica@gmail.com anytime, I check my e-mail constantly so if you send the chapters to me just remember to put them in RTF...

    ^_^


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  • From ANON - Anon on August 07, 2008
    I have recently heard that Reviews are becoming a problem namely with never ever ever being done... Well in that case I am writing reviews for all the stories that I read read to tell you how much I apprecheate and do LOVE your writing you are actually on a book marked list that I check every day and get VERY excited when I see new postings... with that said I must slip to the obligatory I WANT NEW CHAPTERS DAMN YOUS!!!! WE'RE ALMOST GETTING TO THE END BUT ALMOST ONLY COUNTS IN HORSE SHOES AND HANDGRANADES!!!
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  • From MaryAnn on August 07, 2008
    Ch 33&34:

    Ouch. This surely does feel bad
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  • From MaryAnn on August 07, 2008
    (late, I know, sorry!)

    Ch 32: Intens chapter. I
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  • From Visitkarte on July 25, 2008
    Well, now I
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  • From Audrey on July 21, 2008
    Hi Visitkarte,
    thanks for you review! -I guess.
    Very interesting what you have to say, I am pleased you enjoy the story and of course reviews can be negative as much as positive. Though some of what you said does not make any sense in my mind so I would like to answer your review if you don
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  • From Visitkarte on July 21, 2008
    Well, what should I write? Kind and not so kind things. First of all, your Kirsten is a terrible Marry Sue, so like: All my dirty dreams are woven in her life. And now coming to the better part: It's terribly hot! Not so much the plot part, I've no sympathy for any DE-Worshiping, but I do understand you if you find Lucius sexy-because he is it. Until now, I'm quite happy with the story. So: Keep on going. As for the future: try to stick to the existing characters, there are enough of them. For all it
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  • From Prissylilchica on July 19, 2008
    I am torn at the moment. I want to see how it ends, but at the same time, I don't want it to end at all! Like I said before, an absolutely phenomenal story... Any plans for others fics after this one wraps up?

    I didn't mean to imply that Pensive Plotter wasn't doing a FABULOUS job. But my offer still stands for this and and other story you might need beta-ed, if the wonderful Plotter isn't able to help out.

    Keep writing! I can't wait to read more!!
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  • From PensievePerson on July 17, 2008
    I agree with MaryJane, you should change it in the last chapter from leather, to a description that is more in line with the gold medallion. I also agree that her name
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