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Reviews for The Pains of Becoming

By : Audrey
  • From Prissylilchica on July 16, 2008
    I think you should know that your story is the best damn thing that I have read in a long time. I love it with a passion and when I see that it's been updating I get soooo excited.

    I do want to point out however that there is a small blooper that probably not many have caught...At the end of the last chapter, it says Lucius presses something small and leathery into her had, and yet the medallion is metal and on a chain. Just throwing it out there.

    And if you ever need a new beta, lemme know. would love to do it for you, though Pensive Plotter is doing a fine job of it. I look forward to reading more soon!


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  • From PensievePerson on June 20, 2008
    Momo
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  • From MaryAnn on June 02, 2008
    Ch 29: The meeting with Dumbledore
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  • From luvlivsmile on April 27, 2008
    oh I am so happy for an update thank you!!
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  • From luvlivsmile on April 10, 2008
    I am loving every minute of this story. I really like your style of writing for the sexual scenes.
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  • From MaryAnn on February 14, 2008
    Wow, that was an intense chapter
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  • From MaryAnn on February 11, 2008
    (I know, horribly late
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  • From MaryAnn on January 19, 2008
    Hi Momo,

    Thanks for the reaction! And I completely understand why you felt Snape could not take her, having this VERY sexy threesome Lucius/Kirsty/Snape, for I also have strong feelings about how certain actions or re-actions ruin every chance for future relationships that aren
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  • From Audrey on January 01, 2008
    MaryJane: I always love to read your thoughts about the development of the story!
    Chapter 17 was one of my personal absolute favourites, and funny you should say that you were almost disappointed that Snape didn
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  • From MaryAnn on December 31, 2007

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    Wow, fast updates! You
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  • From Audrey on December 23, 2007
    Thanks for reviewing!
    I am glad I could do my share for your Christmas experience ;)
    At least one more chapter will be up before New Year, maybe more if I am lucky ;)

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  • From zariva on December 23, 2007
    Uhhh, two new chapters in such short succession! What a wonderful Christmas present! :)
    I'm glad to see you've finally found a new beta and their doing a wonderful job! Definitely looking forward to you continuing your great work!

    Riva.

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  • From MaryAnn on December 13, 2007
    I always like the complications slash possibilities that Polyjuice gives, it
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  • From Audrey on December 07, 2007
    Thank you so much, Ordinarywickedwitch!

    BTW, just using the chance to let people know.... I'm still needing a beta! :)
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  • From starupinthesky on December 01, 2007
    That was an amazing chapter. You did a great job with Kirsty's emotions and her belief that she is meant to serve Lucius. It was very believeable.
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