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Reviews for The Pains of Becoming

By : Audrey
  • From Kmiles on November 21, 2007
    eekk!! add more very well done =D
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  • From MidnightLilly on November 12, 2007
    keep writing.
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  • From MaryAnn on November 11, 2007
    Interesting chapter, I which we see a bit more of how Kirsty sees herself and others. I love how rich a character she is.

    She
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  • From Audrey on October 22, 2007
    Hi everyone!
    I just wanted to say that Sajahi, my lovely Beta will be very busy for a while and I was wondering if someone here would be interested to take over for her, either temporarily or finally?
    If anyone is interested and feels up to the task, please let me know. ;)



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  • From MaryAnn on October 15, 2007
    Another sexy chapter! Yay! I love it when they fuck (don
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  • From MaryAnn on October 03, 2007
    Makes you wonder what kind of father Lucius is towards his son, for Draco seems almost as desperate for his attention as Kirsty somehow. I can certainly imagine Lucius being a cold and distant father because he thinks it the
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  • From MaryAnn on September 19, 2007

    Wow, good chapter, I liked it a lot. It really flowed somehow. I think you
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  • From Audrey on September 15, 2007
    Hi MaryJane,
    I understand and would love to talk some more. e-mail me at audreycooper@hotmail.de
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  • From MaryAnn on September 15, 2007
    Hi Momo, thanks for reviewing the review:)! I have an answer written and though it
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  • From Audrey on September 10, 2007
    God! Mary Jane, I love your reviews! You really have a sense for these kind of things, don
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  • From MaryAnn on September 10, 2007
    I was eagerly awaiting your update and it was indeed a very interesting chapter. You promised it would explain a bit about the background of the story and it certainly does. I felt really sorry for Kirsty tho, she seems tired and traumatized, and no girl should have to go through what she goes through. Lucius is such a cold, unfeeling bastard, even if he
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  • From Audrey on August 29, 2007
    Hi again MaryJane!
    I thought I have to reply here now, before I write another essay analysing my story and bore people lol.
    Thanks for showing so much interest though! I love discussing these things!
    About the crucio, I was looking for some kind of punishment that she would really find no kind of pleasure in, so a real punishment. I want Lucius to remain a real threat. There is a difference between certain things he makes her do to humiliate her for his own pleasure and fun and real and pure punishment he uses only because he feels she really deserves it and not as part of a game, -and I also needed something that suited Lucius.
    I somehow don
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  • From MaryAnn on August 28, 2007
    Thank you for your generous reaction, that was shredding some interesting lights on a few things. Like your view on Snape, wich I think is completely right. He really is not that
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  • From MidnightLilly on August 26, 2007
    poor girl she has dug herself in way too deep, if she got pregnant Lucius would probably kill her.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 25, 2007
    I'm reviewing this one because it hasn't been updated in the Snape/OFC section.

    More evil Lucius! Yay! But seriously though, you made him evil. Compassion? Never. Mercy? He doesn't even know the meaning of the word. But I'm not complainig, honestly. That just means more brutal, dominating, kinky Lucius sex. Which is great.

    He wouldn't even listen to her explanation about the bracelet... the stupid, blonde, sexy git.

    I can see that Kristy is getting sucked in though, that desire to please that comes with being someone's slave. Can you say stockholm syndrome?

    Anyways, je t'aime le
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