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Reviews for No Longer Naive

By : Clare1984
  • From LaBibliographe on October 26, 2008
    Chapters 1-5: Well, I think that was one of the longer PWPs I've read. I'm mostly indifferent to Remus and I usually don't even like Sirius, but this story certainly gave the reader a full measure of hot sex, no matter who was giving and getting. Hermione was a generous, uninhibited female settling what could have been a tricky, jealousy-laden situation into a loving threesome instead. Win-win-win. Nicely done. Wall-to-wall-to-wall sex awash with shared juices mostly in Hermione's orifices. I could even have welcomed a peek at Remus chastising Sirius with a little hole-in-one. They are a slash couple anyway in this story. Steamy sex with a few ruined shirts LOL!
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on November 01, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From hgelman on October 21, 2007
    Whew - That was great! So glad you updated...and now, I think I need a cigarette.
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  • From luvhp on October 19, 2007
    YEAH!!!! Oh dear, that was PERFECT. Bloody Brilliant the way you took one little scene and stretched it into such a sensually driven climax! Damn girl, you rock!
    Okay, my update is up for C,C,C! I actually have part of Ch. 16 already written, I was on a role and guess what...there's actually some lovin' in this one, been awhile ;)
    Happy Friday!
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  • From luvhp on October 18, 2007
    Come on girl, let's have it, gotta see what happens in that thar kitchen with two lusty wizards and an extremely horny witch who by the way gets to have like 3 orgasms every time, no fair! lol.
    :)
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  • From luvhp on October 16, 2007
    Clare, email me if you'd like. Would love to bounce some ideas off ya...and hints to the next storyline, you KNOW it's D/Hr, LOL.
    twelshans@hotmail.com
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on September 30, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From LilianaIsabellaSnape on September 22, 2007
    OMGosh that was so HOT!!!!! Please write more soon!!!!
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  • From luvhp on September 21, 2007
    You tease!!!!
    BTW< thanks :) SO sweet of you.
    And a very HOT chapter indeed. So, working kinda backwards, I like that. Going to back to when they all got together. And the kitchen scene, HELL YES! Sex on the kitchen table is freckin' HOT! Hmm, makes me think about... oh, never mind, not gonna tell, HaHa. I'd better get to work, Dramione is calling (or is that moaning I hear?). It is Friday and you know how I love to Update on Friday! ;)
    Keep up the eternall hotness over here!
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  • From EgyptianFire on September 17, 2007
    Wonderful timing with Remus and Sirius taking control of her *grin*. Those three are just fab-u-lash together. So much passion and desire- both of which you brought beautifulllllllly to the surface!
    Can't wait for an update!
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  • From luvhp on August 02, 2007
    SHew, girl you've done it aain, What a...nice...juicy...wet chapter!
    OOh. Sirius was watching, jealous...or aroused???
    Thanks for updating!!!
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  • From zozobozo4444 on August 02, 2007
    OOOO I look forward to seeing how Sirius retaliated, so please update again soon
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  • From Sampdoria on August 01, 2007
    Wow, I loved it!!! Please ad more chapters soon, I have a faint idea on who the jelous wizard is and I would love to see how he is added into the action:-))
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  • From wicraven on August 01, 2007
    Great post, love the story, can't wait until you post again, so please post again soon. Thanks
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  • From GiaDarcy on July 23, 2007
    I love this story! I don't know what I'd do with Remus and Sirius all to myself lol. Great job!
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